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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from KnightWulf
Review:
wow this is starting to looke like one of the better halloween storys, can't wait to read more, keep up the good work
Comments from author:
People keep saying that... I musta done good! Woot!

Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [KnightWulf] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EarnestScribbler
Review:
I like this. I really want to see what happens next.

Usually, I don't care for impossible YAHF premises (Halo was released in 2001, a good four years after Halloween), but if they're handled in an interesting way, I'm willing to overlook it -- and this one was.

One minor quibble, though -- Cordelia didn't know Angel was a vampire at this point. In fact, Buffy and Willow told her earlier, and she thought they were having a joke at her expense. Which they were, just not the one she thought.

Edit (re your reply): Yes and no. When Lady Useless babbled that he was a vampire, Cordy was like "Not this again," with an eyeroll. Her subsequent "yes, but he's a good vampire" was a quick lie intended to humor the girl so she'd shut up and get moving.

IMHO, Cordy's likely reaction to the revelation that Angel really was a vampire, at least right at first, would be to assume they were all mocking her.

But just a minor quibble, as I said -- I'm still tracking the story.
Comments from author:
Um... I could be wrong, but in Canon, didn't Cordelia have to explain it to Lady Useless?

Besides, Angel declared that he was a vampire before she defended him.

Beyond that, glad you liked it!

Edit: Ah. My bad. ^_^
Review By [EarnestScribbler] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoeDineen
Review:
One of the more original YAHFs I have seen in a while and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks very much!
Review By [JoeDineen] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
Not a Halo person myself but this is entertaining.
Keep it up. And Xander is perfectly cast, heard but not seen except who'll get the donuts?
Comments from author:
That's the best part. Neither am I! :D

Xander will still be around for donut runs, have no fear. Although... Does he have to eat, still? Hmm... Decisions, decisions.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dilvish
Review:
Very interesting.

The pairing, Buffy (Master Chief)/ Willow (Samus Aran) reminds me of the awesome fan film Haloid (which you should watch, if you have not).

Update as soon as you can.
Comments from author:
That's where I got the idea! (Go Monty Oum!) Well, that and a challenge floating around the site. I kinda put 1 + 1 together, and voile!

I'll do my best!
Review By [Dilvish] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from foreverdead
Review:
This is certainly original, I've read plenty of xander master chief stories, but i never would have thought to have Buffy play the part, my question is what's going to happen to xander, will he be stuck as a digital entity or will he be able to go back and forth? Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Comments from author:
^_^ That seems to be the question of the day. Xander will get out, and he'll be able to get back in. As Joker said, 'It's allll part of the plan.'
Review By [foreverdead] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BurningLight
Review:
Cortana and simmilar AI's have aprox 7 year life span... will Xander have the same or was Janus empowerment a fix for this? if not then poor guy.

Also he fliped from real word to digital... will he be able to do go back and forth or is this a once only?
Comments from author:
Huh. I didn't know that. Well, I'm not killing Xander off. We'll just go with your explanation.

He'll be able to get out, once he figures out how. It's one of those fight/flight things.
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from grd
Review:
Giles and the council's reactions will be so much fun. If the council even finds out that is. Hope Xan does not get lost in cyberporn. Hehe
Comments from author:
You KNOW he will. Silly boy.

Until Willow threatens to blast the computer he's in, that is.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from blazblaz
Review:
Now this I like. This has to be one of the best Halloween fanfic I seen yet. I like how all main characters in this fanfic retain power ups. I can not wait to see the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I just couldn't imagine Samus without her beams/vision modes. Metroid Prime spoiled me on those. The rest, thank my older brother.

Glad ya like it!
Review By [blazblaz] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Iceflame
Review:
Here's your second "VERY well done!" Hope to see more soon :-D
Comments from author:
^_^ Thanks! I'm feelin' the love!
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh very nice intro and you really did a great job with your first chapter. Looking forward to more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you! And, also, my first review! Yay!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [8 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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