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Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from Darkblood
Review:
please continue
Review By [Darkblood] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from LordCorwin
Review:
Nicely done .... I always loved the Ghost Rider stories .... So, that being said, I hope you continue ...
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [27 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from Toras
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Excellent story. I never followed the Ghost Rider comics, so my knowledge of them is second hand at best, but you seem to have captured the essence of the character rather well. Please update soon, I look forward to seeing what you do with this.
Review By [Toras] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from ladyfiana
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Good chapter. Dru being turned human was a surprise. Like how you've written everyone. Hope you write more soon.
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Nice how you wove between vengeance for Angelus' victims and mercy for Angel. (Allowing him to choose the heroic path for himself. Mr. Miyagi is proud of him, because Obi Wan hath taught him well.) Still I don't think the peroxide poster child will see the difference. (A shiney Indian head nickel says, she blames Xander.)
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from kayron
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Xander spoke to Angel (not Angelus) and explained the situation to him. He made his own decision to sacrifice himself to save the world. I wonder if Buffy is going to try to blame Xander, or realize that there was no other choice. Why did Whistler tell Xander to tell the truth when he had to have known that Buffy wouldn't fight at her best? Good story so far.
Comments from author:
Because Whistler knew that it would cause exactly that and that seeing Buffy in the condition she was in would send Xander into a bit of a tizzy. Remember though, Buffy won't know it was Xander who stepped in.

The reason why Xander had to explain the situation was that the deal Willow had the Rider make with Angel Halloween night prevents Xander/The Rider from trying to hurt or kill him. I'll probably make a prequel to detail those events.
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from LFW
Review:
I like the fic, but I wonder where Spike is?
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from marcus
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This is a great start. I like that Xander does not know everything about his new abilities and that the PTB are clueless as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [marcus] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Rider Emerges" from DHX
Review:
first off you need to show more. so far you're posting what amounts to brief snippets not chapters. nothing is really explained. that wont work in the long run

i find the bit with drucilla contrived. she kills people, and suddenly she has a soul, is alive and gets off scot free? this had better not be dru/xander pairing as i would seriously question your mental faculties.
Comments from author:
Okay, I'll remember that and yes, I too find the Drusilla bit a little contrived (but it was placed there to be confusing in the first place), and no, she's not scot free. Drusilla was driven insane by Angelus before she was turned. I believe that because of this, her soul could still be considered pure. She has to live with the emotional turmoil of what she did as a vampire. It'll be a non-romantic pairing between the two. The only reason Xander is bringing her along is because Whistler told him too after all. I have plans for how this will go but I will give something big away. Who might find Xander's new abilities a bit usurping?
Review By [DHX] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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It has potential, but you really need to delve deeper into the creation of the Rider. Hey, you can have flashbacks! What? Flashbacks are cool!
Comments from author:
Actually, I have the next three chapters already typed up but having problems with my computer getting them posted. I only have dial-up which seems to run at a peak of 28.8 Kbps. For some reason, I can't get it to work.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Bluesnowman
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Wonderful start is it xander? can he change back.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Morgomir
Review:
I think it's an interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Wolflady
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Can't wait to find out what he meant by that! Update soon!
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [17 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from XanderHalcyon
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Really like it and can't wait for more.
Review By [XanderHalcyon] • Date [16 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from RafMereC
Review:
Fantastic start.
Raf
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [16 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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