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Review of chapter "Chapter two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Weird. Where to the better dressed people get their clothes, I wonder. And what will "home" look like ... and wil it even be in this dim town.
Comments from author:
Again, thank you so much for the review, I hope you still enjoy future installments.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, I've only seen half of an episode of Bleach, and was able to follow. Good descirptions and nice characterization so far.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much, I really appreciate it!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from RogueAngel
Review:
this story is great, i really wish you would update soon. As for Buffy's a Zaraki squad place with her new friends :D , they could be the 3 from hell. But i think they would be anyway. But I do think Buffy would suit Zaraki's group best, they are the combat group, more with the fighting and less with the kedo and Buffy was more a hit and stab kinda girl. A Rangiku friendship would be awesome, both flighty and ditz but kick ass.
Can't wait for the next chapter
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the comment, I really appreciate it; I'm glad you're enjoying the fic!. Next chapter is in the works and should be out later today or tomorrow.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [13 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from Cristina
Review:
Don't worry to much about shortness...I've read (and wrote...I think) shorter chapters that that. Besides they are good so it doesn't really matter.

Buffy adopted by Yumicka...that is great idea. I wonder in which division Buffy will go? I would stuck her in 13th - more room for promotion there.

Will you cover Buffy, Yumicka and Ikkaku in the Sinigami Academy?

I agree that meting between Matsumuto and Buffy could be very hilarious...poor Hitsugaya.
Do you know which meeting could be potently funny too and Saretai (or however its spelled) better watch out if they ever became friends...Yourichi, Buffy, Kuukaku Shiba and Rangiku...I think more than one Shinigami would get gray hairs just thinking about it.

If you really want to torture someone you can sick all 4 of them on Gotei 6 Kuchki if that wouldn't break that stoic facade of his...

Anyway I enjoyed the chapter!

:)

Thanks for writing.
Comments from author:
Shinigami academy will be covered, but not for a while yet. I'm beginning to think that a meeting/friendship between Rangiku and Buffy would be a good idea. Poor Toshiro... :)

I do already have a place for Buffy, but if I ever change my mind 13 seems to be the fan favorite. And Buffy interacting with Byakuya, just on her own... that's just a scary thought; I'd almost feel bad for Byakuya. Almost.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from whirleeq
Review:
Very imaginative :). Wonder when Buffy is going to start questioning why she ended up in the Shinto version of the afterlife, as opposed to the Christian one :). PTB screwing with her yet again ;).

Will she get a zanbakto? (my spelling is crap).
Comments from author:
Of course the PTB's are screwing with her, they're always screwing with her. Buffy's not done protecting the world just yet! Thank you for the review, I really appreciate it.
Review By [whirleeq] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from SamDragon
Review:
Nice.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from maddog
Review:
Good start on the fic. Don't sweat short chapters especialy if that is what it takes to set things up for the rest of the story.
Comments from author:
They're much longer than what I used to write way back when I started, so it's an improvement! Thanks for the review, I hope you keep enjoying it.
Review By [maddog] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from batzulger
Review:
Great start. I think Buffy would fit in 2nd, 10th, 11th or 13th squad the best, but it's your story :) However, I am seconding a Buffy/Matsumoto meeting. I think it could be absolutely hilarious.
Comments from author:
Yes, it's my story and I agree with you, she'd fit well with any of those squads. I've already figured out what one I want her to be in, but that could very well change.

And Buffy and Rangiku meeting would be hilarious; I'll take that under advisement, as you're obviously not the first person to ask for that. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter three" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Hopefully it won't take too long... it's in the works as we speak! Thanks for the review.
Review By [war] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from RogueAngel
Review:
Hey, really enjoying this story. It’s great. I like the way the fight ended too, Buffy would have trouble with a trained Shinigami, especially someone like Ikkaku. She just wouldn’t have the Reiatsu (Spiritual Pressure, whatever you wanna call it) to take on someone like him. However, fully trained Shinigami Buffy… WOOZA, that is a recipe for action the likes of Ichigo. And I shudder to think, at the same time as bouncing in excitement about what those three could get up to. UPDATE SOON, ja ne!
Comments from author:
I know, it's why I picked those two. I'd actually originally though of Rukia and Renji when writing this, but then I saw episode 119 and it's like, "ZOMG, so putting Buffy with them instead." Besides, I have an idea of how Ikkaku and Buffy's interaction is going to play out, and it sounds really awesome in my head. Hee.

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it. I'll do my best to update soon.
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from whirleeq
Review:
Bah. Slayer Buffy would have kicked his butt. She must have lost something in the transition :/.

Good chapter!
Comments from author:
Ikkaku got lucky, plain and simple. That won't happen very often.
Review By [whirleeq] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, very interesting chapter. If this takes place enough before Bleach cannon, and please forgive me, but I've never been that great at remembering names, but was the guy Buffy fought, could he be..., the leader of the fight happy Shinigami division? I mean I think he was, but I'm not too sure... But he sure seems like it, and it could be possible if there's enough time in between the two... ah well, still good chappy, I likey like like. So, thanks for writng this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
No, the leader of squad 11 (the fight-happy one :)) is Kenpachi Zaraki, and his lieutenant is Yachiru. Ikkaku, when he graduates the from the Shinigami Academy, ends up getting third seat and Yumichika picks fifth seat because the kanji for five looks a lot like three.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from war
Review:
Buffy with those two? that's just scary.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Yes, yes it is, but it's also really, really funny :)
Review By [war] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from toowhiteprincess
Review:
I loved reading this...keep writing.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the comment, I'll do my best to fulfill your request!
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter two" from Cristina
Review:
Ikkaku and Yumicka...I love those two they are hilarious :)
Will Buffy end up in Eleventh like those two? She my have been a Slayer but she is not that violent, I mean she doesn't value fighting above all else like 11th squad.

(I have this urge to ask you to put her in 5th squad, mostly because of Momo she kind of reminds me somewhat cross of Willow, Dawn and Lilly. And I feel really sorry for Momo.)

Great chapter

Baldy

lol

:)
Comments from author:
But hanging around those two could change her personality and show her the value and fun in fighting just for the hell of it, hehehe.

5th squad might be good a good idea, but with what I have planned for her she probably wouldn't fit in there so great.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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