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The Evils of Nature and Nurture

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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Krysstinia
Review:
Vengeance demons at Hogwarts? I found this a little unbelievable, especially without anyone noticing. Nice update!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Oh, hell yeah! Now the shit will really start to fly!
Comments from author:
*takes on a look of total innocence* Why, I don't know what you're talking about...
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh come ON!
Being Hellmouth raised, Tommy would KNOW better than to use the 'W' word.
That would've been drilled into his brain from as soon as hee could talk.

BTW who's Tommy's father? The Summers sperm donor or Giles?
Comments from author:
Summers Sperm Donor. He was four/five when they moved to Sunnydale. Since I put this in early season six, I couldn't use the Band Candy incident. He'd only be two/three by this point.

And sometimes... The words just slip out.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from thundever
Review:
Great chap, poor Tom, this is going to be hard and bad, I hope not everyone who is good turns against him especially his family, please update soon.
Comments from author:
His family are the last ones you need to worry about, believe me. I mean, if they can accept TWO killer vampires into their midst, I don't think a reborn Dark Wizard with no memory of his crimes will be a problem.
Review By [thundever] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from (Past Donor)chrysanne
Review:
This is phenomenal! And I'm not just saying this because it's my own challenge, I really mean it. This has been well thought out, engaging, and the personalities have a real feel to them. You've sparked my curiosity: will the Scoobies still bring Buffy back? Will Harry and Tommy get along? Will Tommy fight for the Light or turn Evil? Exactly why did Angelus try to Sire the former Dark Lord? And will Spike ever learn how the cat gets its stripes?

10 out of 10. Awesome!
Comments from author:
*blushes* Awwwww, shucks...
Review By [(Past Donor)chrysanne] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from espinosaca
Review:
Interesting idea. One thing though, can you change the epilogue from DH so it never happened or happens? Harry was the Master of Death, he should be a lot more badass then he was shown in the epilogue. And can you pair him and Hermione with other people then the gingers? Ron was an idiot, I do not believe for a second a relationship between him and Hermione would have moved past dating. Harry and Ginny had little in common, there was posession and Quidditch...Thats about it. If you're willing to accept ideas for pairings, maybe a threesome for Harry with Luna and Hermione. Or if not that either of the two girls with Harry and Hermione with an OC or BTVS character.
Comments from author:
Uh... Well, I was just going to put Tom in with the youngest of the next generation...

Ah, what the hell? I totally agree. Ron was an idiot. And, while Ginny was certainly intelligent, there's no way she and Harry were right for each other. I'm shifting it around. No threesomes, mostly because they get a bit confusing for me to write, but Harry and Hermione will both get better partners.
Review By [espinosaca] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from AllenPitt
Review:
Poor Minerva, sworn to defend Tom from all threats. that is ironic. Poor Tom, once word gets out who he 'really' is... I take it this is post s5, but before Buffy gets brought back? Hm, and if people realize who he is and come after him, he'll have willow & tara & spike for protectors, and probably Angel and HIS group (you could have it that Connor returned age 10 instead of 16-18, and gets a letter also, if you want) --I'm now imagining a very brassed off Buffy going to Hogwarts to protect her kid brother...
Comments from author:
Your ideas intrigue me, and I wish to subscribe to your newsletter.

And I can't believe I forgot to say when this is in the timeline! Gah! *goes to fix it* You're right, though.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from SlowMercury
Review:
Pretty strong start! I'm very curious to see what happens next, as well as who who else from the various stories shows up. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'll do my best!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
Very nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from Krysstinia
Review:
I read this challenge while I was skimming the Harry Potter ones. I thought it sounded like a good idea.

You're off to a great start. Seeing Tom in another light will be a change. It makes me wonder if he'll be going to school with the next gen. of Hogwarts.
Comments from author:
Well, naturally! It wouldn't be much fun otherwise, would it? I'm having him start in the same year as Harry's youngest, Lily Luna.

Glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from thundever
Review:
Great chap, brilliant interactions and characterizations, poor Tom, I hope he does not turn into Voldemort, please update soon.
Comments from author:
Soon as I can.
Review By [thundever] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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