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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spacey
Review:
huh. only mcgee isnt family, now. and gibbs is the dad? hmm. still, it works. i like it.
Review By [spacey] • Date [11 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PackHero
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I was so glad when I saw a notice pop up in my email telling me about this update. The story was great. The interaction between the characters was dead on. Now all we need is the 2nd story and we will have a great trilogy.
Review By [PackHero] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
soooooooo wanna read the middle story
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [1 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RosytheCat
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This was absolutely adorable. I can't wait to see how you decide to flesh out the rest of the series.

-- Rosy the Cat
Review By [RosytheCat] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from imokit
Review:
aw sweet, though you missed a hell of a lot of backstory
Review By [imokit] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Booster
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This is really fascinating, re-reading 'The beginning of Elizabeth Tali' and then 'Good job'. It's almost like knowing ahead of time that everything will work out, that things will eventually be okay - and a damn good story in its own right too.

Looking forward to the middle parts even more now.
Review By [Booster] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)morgyair
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OK now I have to go back and read the first part....looking forward to the longer story! By the way mylanta not recommended in pregnancy or at least in my sisters case it wasn't, Tums was what her MD recommended. Believe it has something to do with the makeup of mylanta.
Review By [(Past Donor)morgyair] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lyd
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Really good but I am hoping that the middle story has the nitty gritty details I love in your stories. And I want to see Ziva's and Ari's dad punished really badly.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [31 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Review:
Wonderful just like the first story, but I really wish I could read the one in the middle!
Amazing job, as usual, and I look forward to reading more :D
Review By [Waverly] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalwizardelffan
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lol

Love the family moments in this. You have the characters from both Buffy and NCIS down pat so no one is out of character. Love how DiNozzo and Gibbs are already planning on making the girls dating lives hell for the guys. LOL. You can bet that Buffy, Angel, Spike, Xander, Willow, Faith, and Giles are going to help.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Not Rated
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