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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from (Current Donor)Clavell
Review:
And they freed the being I had a sneaking suspicion they were going to free... Breen thought things were going to shit *before* this. His day just went from "Gone straight to hell" to "I might as well shoot myself and avoid completely the massive amount of pain and blunt force trauma I am about to endure". :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from Tatsu
Review:
a rhyming review i will try to do.
as stories of Gordon's plight go
this one is great.

for Wallace Breen i would suggest a virus that jams the Rick Astley on loop.
Review By [Tatsu] • Date [14 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Nine" from CrystalBlaze
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If there's one soul that's flat out built for tweaking scientific portals, Winifred Burkle is the one.. had her papers been successfully published, Black Mesa would have never happened. If her spirit is reintegrated within the God-King, I suspect this trip will NOT take a week.

As it is, the incomplete job the guy that stole from her pulled is likely what led to Xen and the Incident.

The man in the suit is doomed--this world *has had* a G-Man, and a much better one.

Vortigaunts are laughing.

Yeah, that means it's Xander's fault.. somehow.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from (Current Donor)Clavell
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Nearer and nearer to endgame, and us finding out just what in the hell is incoming that has the Scoobies so interested in it. And it's cool that you had Gordon be right up-front about Alyx. And I'm pretty sure that Adrian has figured out that Faith wants to jump his bones... So, any thought on who might get thrown Buffy's way? :) Oh, and to re-iterate something CrystalBlaze brought up... where's Dog? :)
Comments from author:
Dog's with Doctor Kleiner of course.
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Eight" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
The only regret I have is that Dog hasn't had a chance to play. this has been a rollicking ride, and I thank you for it.
Comments from author:
This is the second story I started on tth and I'm gonna finish it!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [13 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Five" from HappyWonKinobi
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I have really loved the story so far! And I can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, until I read a certain story on Fanfic.net (Half-life and Metroid Cross), I didn't realize that Barney was Barney *Calhoon*, so I don't need to tell you to use him, particularly since he got out of Black Mesa about where the Assassin Women show up and Gordon gets put into a trash compactor (Which I didn't know at the time). So, have a good time with the story, because I know I will!
Comments from author:
Yeah he and Dr. Rosenberg get out through the A-17 Prototype labs
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [12 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Four" from (Current Donor)Clavell
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Another update to this, yay! And it sounds like Breen is about to find out just what sort of spanner "those damn kids" can drop into the works when someone cheeses them off to this degree :).
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [8 Mar 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from HappyWonKinobi
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Honestly? I love it! It's an amazingly well-written story based on several absolutely amazing games! And you put in amazing humor as well! What's not to love?! :D
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from CrystalBlaze
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Breen getting hypothermia? He damned well deserves it for taunting the Murphy that close to Scoobies!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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I always knew Buffy secretly wanted to be a female Rambo, what with her airborne IED trick to wreck the Hunter proving that the use of high explosives to off The Judge and Mayor McSnake in Seasons 2 and 3 were not isolated incidents. The Slayer essence likes big fireballs!

;D

Brilliant to see this chapter after 4 months of waiting, though it was well worth it if only for Xander's speech to Alyx and Gordon about getting a "complementary" rocket launcher as part of their supposedly scenic tour of Highway 17.
Comments from author:
Four months? How about two years!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [11 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from (Current Donor)Clavell
Review:
More of your Half Life 2 epic=MOAR WIN! I love your other stuff, but I would love it if you completed this story, even if you have the ending sort of coreographed for you by Vavle (throwing the Scoobies+ into the mix probably has the Guy in the Blue Suit in full-on panic mode, watching them throw his carefully-constructed plan into complete and utter chaos by simply being themselves). MOAR PLEASE!
Review By [(Current Donor)Clavell] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Three" from draconis
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Great to see another update. Have enjoyed this story.

It's...comforting...to know that during even the "end of the world as we know it" Slayers still get a kick out of kicking alien ass and appreciate each other's work.

Thanks!
Review By [draconis] • Date [9 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from starwolf
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I was not familiar with the game, but your story fills that in as you go. hope you get a chance to finish this after you finish "short and sweet" I can see your building to something big, hope to see what. thanks for the story
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Sep 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from JJDudeman
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Nothing like this out there, I love it. Despite the odd necessity of giving Gordon a voice. Willow telepathy is a bit over-convenient, but that's all right. You pull it off well (the gremlins are inspired), you should finish this off, at least the point before the episodes!
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [2 Aug 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty Two" from CrystalBlaze
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This is superb.

Father Grigori is almost enough to redeem psycho-priests everywhere. (Between us, and as a note to other HL2 players, you notice his red sneakers? Those were a sign of rebellious youth in Eastern Europe during the glasnost era, and a superb piece of detail on the part of Valve, I have always felt.)

It's a bit unusual having the infamous Dr. Freeman speak, but since this is an ensemble piece rather than a one-man show, it's a good move. Besides, if he didn't speak Andrew would be making with the Chrono Trigger riffs.

Considering the size of the Combine portal, it's a fair bet the Very Slow Teleport won't happen. Hunters are on limited deployment, but the Lambda Resistance are in MUCH better condition, so it's a fair bet that after much crawling around with Slayage instead of Antlions they're going to be blasting their way out of New Prospect (sorry, I just had to translate that name at least once!) Given the apocalyptic tendencies of all Scooby situations, I have a NASTY feeling of what is trying to come through at the Citadel.

This is all speculation, of course.

I adore your work (and am, clearly, a big fan of the Half-Life universe), so this story has been a blast, Bat, and I thank you.
Comments from author:
Grigori is one of my favorite characters in a series that is loaded with good writing. New Prospect is probably going to need even more repair, and nothing bad is going to come out of that portal...

One of those statements is a big fat lie.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [2 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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