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Review of chapter "A Trip to the Park" from UncleKai
Review:
Ughh... only 8 of 10 for scary visual Images... that was one of the more disturbing scenes I read latly. What about the 4 hours and Dawns lot at home? And the vomiting... wouldn't that be on TV? Wanna read more! ;)
Comments from author:
Don't worry, it'll be in Chapter 5. Both the four hours and the vomit.
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternity" from UncleKai
Review:
Dawn got two mommies... never would have thought about that. And the Part about Wolverine... talk about bad reputation. Again very nice to read!
Comments from author:
I just thought it was funny. I actually sat down and read up on genetics, but assuming a female "sperm" could be synthesized, you could indeed make a baby with two mothers and one would appear to be the "father".
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [3 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "IwanttofindDawnSummers…" from UncleKai
Review:
Ohhh... another Story to watch out. nice start!
Comments from author:
Always happy to see people jumping on the Joewagon, even if you're a bit of a latecomer.
Review By [UncleKai] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Trip to the Park" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
In the words of Ernest P. Worrell... "Ewwwwwwwwwwww" (complete with facial expressions...)

And how much could a 100 foot tall person produce? *ponders*
Comments from author:
Lots.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [2 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternity" from SamDragon
Review:
Janet as the dad,I like it.Buffy is going to freak so bad. :)
Comments from author:
Poor Buffy. Does that make her a lesbian? jk
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Paternity" from Vld
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"Janet, you ARE the father." I just love Blunt Dawn!!! Oh, that sooo was a laugh! Again, how will buffy react? This time, not when she learns Dawn joined some super-hero team, but when she learns that she isn't a single mother... AND that the father is in fact... a MOTHER?
Comments from author:
Dun dun dun! @_@
Review By [Vld] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternity" from MarcusRowland
Review:
[pedant] Butterflies are insects [/pedant]

Nice idea giving her a second mother - no idea why not, of course, X chromosome from both sides.
Comments from author:
Yeah, someone already slapped me upside the head with that particular mistake. It's already been amended on the local copies and will go up tomorrow when I post #4.

*ponders* I think this is my first Marcus review. Rock on! :)
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Paternity" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
What can I say? I am not a fan of the Young Avengers. But oddly enough your story continues to intrigue me. I like it!

Keep this up and I might actually want to read YA. :) And can we get a Runaways crossover going??!?!?!?!?!? I mean they're already in California.
Comments from author:
The Runaways are in California (LA I think) and Dawn is in Cleveland. And the Young Avengers are in New York. But there is a planned crossover for further in this series. Not this story though. I do plan to address the SHRA from the Civil War down the line, but there's 11 planned chapters of this and at least a half dozen chapters of a few other stories between then and now.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [1 Aug 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from Vld
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Almost forgot. My guess, her latent growth powers are what kept her from being activated in the Hellmouth, (I still think she's a Potential), and the wake of her other powers will wake her Potential. Sides, if she DOES have growing/shrinking powers, I think she won't be able to grow as tall as Cassie, or shrink as small either.
Comments from author:
Bzzt. On all counts, actually. o_O

I will confirm that she does grow and shrink, and that she does it better and faster than Cassie. So Cassie's fears of being second-best are completely justified.
Review By [Vld] • Date [31 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from Vld
Review:
Excellent! And so typically Dawn! Especially the part where she doesn't seem surprised that she isn't Hank's... I mean Hank Summers' daughter. Knowing the guy, I would be happy too if I was her! Wonder how Buffy will react, though.
Comments from author:
Well, she's had time to come to terms with it. If she hadn't tested herself previously, I think she would have reacted differently but right now, it's just sorta like, "Tell me something I don't know".
Review By [Vld] • Date [31 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Good start. The collective requires Baywatch 5 nights a week and more chapters to this story.
Comments from author:
I rank up there with chicks with big boobs in tight bathing suits? Sweeeeet.
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [31 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from (Moderator)KaylaShay
Review:
Starting to clear right up for me. So Dawn is more knowledgable of them than they are of her... Fun!
Comments from author:
Well, Dawn's got more knowledge on superheroes than they think. Kate was tagged as a potential Watcher candidate after saving the Young Avengers but became ineligible when she joined them. Establishing Dawn as an Encyclopedia Superheroica also will help when they get around to explaining to her who all the Young Avengers are.
Review By [(Moderator)KaylaShay] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from (Moderator)Malana
Review:
Heh. Cosplay indeed. I'm interested to see where this goes. You've blended the two universes well so far, and I look forward to reading more. I love the idea of a Cassie/Dawn pairing. Another great femmeSlash from Joe.
Comments from author:
*blush* And it means something cuz you actually know the comics. @_@
Review By [(Moderator)Malana] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tanning Interrupted" from DigiEmissary
Review:
Interesting premise... will the other parts of Dawn's lineage (Buffy and the Key) play any part in her superheroic career?

Also, don't think you've fooled me with the whole "Hank Pym is her father" assumption - the series title still says Dawn van Dyne. :p If the monks were assembling her piece-by-piece, they could have easily grabbed one X chromosome from Buffy and the other from Janet - hell, there're even experimental procedures in the real world that allow two women to have children together.
Comments from author:
Damnit. Stupid smart reviewers... o_O
Review By [DigiEmissary] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "IwanttofindDawnSummers…" from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Good Golly, Hank "The Bastard" Summers was once Hank Pym? How is that going to work out, and if it is true then at least Dawn has a good role model for super heroics.
Comments from author:
Oh, it'll get a lot weirder than that by the time this story is done...
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [30 Jul 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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