Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

The Last

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter 08" from kayron
Review:
I have seen the Highlander movies and both series. I don't ever remeber an explanation being given for what they are. I think that the idea that the Immortals originated from the Ancients is very clever. An excellent idea. It was a great way to integrate the Stargate and Highlander universes. I like the pairings even though I wasn't too sure about Jacob and Methos at first. Then I realized that Selmac was right. Jacob really ISN'T too old for Methos. *Laugh* It's too bad Methos can't stop the remaining Immortals from playing 'The Game'. They are dying for nothing. Methos does have a few that are actually his friends. This is a good story. I'll be tracking.
Comments from author:
I'm happy that you like it! Concerning "The Game"...you have to wait for the sequel, so just wait and see! *laughs cruelly*
Review By [kayron] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 08" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Are you going to be bringing in any other Immortals?
What about telling them or the Watchers about the lie of the Game? Or at least Joe & MacLeod.
Comments from author:
In this story there won't be other immortals. But the sequel is already in writing! And MacLeod & Joe will definitely play a role there.
The rest of this story is with my beta at the moment and will soon be finished. I hope you continue to enjoy my stories!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 08" from Thedruid
Review:
This.... This would be a good story if only every un-attached male wasn't suddenly gay and attracted to eachother. I'm sorry, but just making people left right and center gay whenever you are haveing trouble with the plot, or think it current plot isn't interesting enough, does not a good story make! That and the sudden nearly full reveal of Methos's entire histroy could have been done better too. Heck, just have some turblance between Methos/Death/Moro's son when they become fully aware of eachother could have been great drama, if only on the mind-scape of Methos. Ever read "A Meeting of Minds"? The one when a just new immortol compleatly absorbs the mind and spirit of a +1000 year old immortal, and they have to learn to work together in a single body?
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 05" from VillageOrchid
Review:
The Jack/Daniel cross talk at that meeting is a little oddly placed, but I get where you're going.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 03" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very exciting and nicely dramatized/played out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool twist! The highlander style immortals could be "ancient" dominantly genetically, making their immortality a hybrid mutation.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting and angsty... I could probably do without THREE male-male couples... but good storytelling so far.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Apr 09] • Not Rated
start back Page: 2 of 2
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking