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The Fifth Marauder

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Review of chapter "Strike andf Counter-Strike" from FireWolfe
Review:
Great chapter hated the wait but it is very good. I do so hope you let all three of them get perfect OWL's it so should happen to kick Fudge chair out from him. Also did Buffy take the exams? Love to see her to have gotten perfect scores too.

Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strike andf Counter-Strike" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
almost over?!?!? NO!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!! Please, write a LOT MORE!!!!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Non-Spanish Inquistion" from divaslayer
Review:
I love this story so far, I'm reading it over on ff.net and I can't wait until you update next. Please, please, please, please, please update soon. Please?

Dani
Review By [divaslayer] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Non-Spanish Inquistion" from kayron
Review:
Very interesting story!! Buffy POTTER and Dawn POTTER are Harry Potter's aunts! I like the concept of this story. It puts the Scoobies into a different world of magic, and it gives Harry a real family and closer connection to his father. I really liked Buffy's thoughts on how she and Dawn are going to take on the Wizarding world, using their own Politics and pureblood standards against them. Even as Buffy and Dawn were giving their press conference, Fudge was in the background plotting against them and Harry. He was even thinking about how he could use the Daily Prophet against Harry and Dumbledore. Since the Potters own the paper, I can't wait to see what they do about the lies printed about Harry. Since deatheaters attacked Dawn, Voldemort must know about her and Buffy and want to end any possible political threat they pose against him, and any support they can give Harry. I'll be tracking.
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Non-Spanish Inquistion" from spring
Review:
I am extremely glad that Dawn is better now and who Nix is has been explained. I love this chapter and I eagerly await the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flicker" from draconis
Review:
I really like the story, but it does jump around a lot...30-40 are especially difficult to construct. It might help to use more 'in your face' time indicators when you write segments. You already do to some degree, but I think more would help.

Definitely appreciate your addressing the politics of the Wizarding world and that the Potter family has a major role. The majority stake in the Prophet is a nice touch. It will be interesting if you reveal Fudge has been under some sort of Voldemort curse that has been affecting his memory and judgment and how he handles things if the curse is lifted. Seems like some sort of combined and "sticking" 'obliviate' and 'confound' curse.

Also appreciating that Buffy intends to pursue legal actions re: Vernon and Petunia's major abuse of Harry. Given UK's child protection laws I'm kind of surprised Rowling maintained their constant abuse for so many years without any serious consequences to the Dursleys. I also feel there should be repercussions in the Wizarding world as well...even Dumbledore had some degree of responsibility here and it's difficult to see how he (and other adults) could have remained oblivious to the abuse for so many years...esp. with both Dumbledore and Snape in his mind so many times.

Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
First off - thank you for taking the time to leave such a long review. I'm pretty sure this is my longest ever.

Sorry about the lack of clear timeline in the latter chapters, and I'll definitely use more time indicators in future - sometimes I think I forget my readers aren't actually inside my head.

I like the Fudge-under-a-curse idea - I'll be looking at that carefully for a plot twist. How one man could be so wilfully asinine confounds me... and he does see Lucius Malfoy a lot...

I can't stand child abuse, and I really couldn't see Buffy letting it slide either - I guess it's the Potter in her preventing her from just throwing them through a few walls. Repercussions in the Wizarding world I hadn't thought of, but now you mention it, there are so many questions to be raised - first and foremost, why did no one check on their 'Saviour'? I'm definitely going to have to work that in somehow.

Hopefully I'll pull another chapter out of my mind soon.

~FireSkies x
Review By [draconis] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Flicker" from spring
Review:
I love this chapter. Nix seems like an extremely interesting person. I eagerly look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Oh, I'm so glad you liked Nix! He's been bouncing around in my head for so long now, just dying to get out into a story. And then he seemed to fit, but I wouldn't sure what people would think.

Thank you

~FireSkies x
Review By [spring] • Date [15 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Circus" from spring
Review:
Wonderful. I love this chapter and I look forward to the next one. ^_^
Review By [spring] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spiralling" from spring
Review:
First of all, how could I have NOT known that it was Spike?!?!?!? That is just silly. I am very glad that Buffy is going to get some justice for both Harry and Sirius, hopefully this time Sirius won't die. I have to wonder who is going to be the DADA teacher after everything that Buffy plans to do, I really doubt that Fudge will have the guts to put the pink idiot in place. Again I love this wonderful story and I am extremely eager to read the next installment.
Comments from author:
Getting justice is a very 'Buffy' thing, no?

DADA teacher.... well, I'm not sure how much influence Buffy and the Council will be able to have... so I'm undecided. We'll see what comes out, I guess.

And well, I'll get writing!

~ FireSkies
Review By [spring] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lies" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I'm not really sure where you are going with this.. is it the 1970s? or 60s? Does the rest of the buffy-verse exist but hasn't been set up yet via magic or a wish?
Comments from author:
At 'Lies' we're in the Marauder era, so (according to my calculations, and placing Harry's frst year at Hogwarts at about 1991, coinciding with Buffy season 3) their third year takes place 1971-72. The Buffy-verse takes place in the same world, as will be explained in Chapter 15: 'Payback'.

Any more questions, just review with them, I'm happy to answer.

~ FireSkies x
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "His Sunrise" from spring
Review:
First let me say that I am very happy that the reviews that I give you made you wand to post again so soon ^_^ ;-D. You made me very happy to see the post and surprised to see that I helped cause the quick update (blush). I am very glad that Harry didn't stay mad for very long as I know that he has a temper and lashing out at his aunts so wouldn't be a good idea. I love the reactions that the Order had in learning that Dawn was going to be the Counsel's representative, it was excellent though I don't think Molly is going to easily accept it. Buffy and Dawn causing the ministry trouble? If only Fudge knew, he would resign post haste. I really love the ass chewing that Dawn gave Angel very nice, although the reviling of Spike to everyone via the camera feed was just cruel and evil, sigh well done. The reactions to that should be very interesting. I also am very eager to see if Dawn feels the same way towards Conner as he does towards her (thought I forgot that little tidbit didn't ya). Again I love this wonderful story and eagerly await the next installment of this extremely wonderful story.
Comments from author:
It may well be later today!

And OH YAY! You recognised that it was Spike! I love Spike!
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thoughts" from spring
Review:
Oh dear, Harry is going to get a rather nasty wake up call very very soon. Poor guy. I love these wonderful chapters and I am looking forward to the next installment of this wonderful story.
Review By [spring] • Date [25 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Payback" from spring
Review:
Oh now that was a twist I wasn't expecting. I love these chapters, they are wonderful. I have to wonder how Buffy is going to react to learning what happened in the wizarding world when she was away, you know that she will find a way to return. Learning that her nephew is supposed to kill Moldyshorts is so not going to go over well with her. I am very eager to see what comes next in this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review!

Hopefully I'll post some more tomorrow - I have the next 23 chapters all ready to go, and I'm halfway through writing no. 39. It just takes so long to post on Twisting!

I can promise you that things start moving in OotP time soon, and the chapters start getting longer!

Any ideas for pairings or future plots you can see working, please let me know. I've changed a story on the basis of a reviewer idea before, after all, I'm just one girl with a very odd imagination.

~FireSkies xXx
Review By [spring] • Date [23 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from spring
Review:
This is wonderful so far. I am very eager to see where you plan to take this story, how Buffy is taken from her friends should be very interesting. I hope that you are able to update this wonderful story again soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [29 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Discovery" from Krysstinia
Review:
I like the start you got here. Nice twist on the usual stories with Buffy a sister to one of the four.
Keep it up!
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [29 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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