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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: The Attack of the Welcome Wagon" from zigpal
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Great update. Mia is evil for not telling Luke or Lorelai that the other is coming to dinner, but then again, she seems to think that is a good idea. I await to see how their first meeting goes, unless this is another big tease.
Comments from author:
They are all suffering from uncertainty of how the others would react. It was a very emotionally charged night for everyone that night, even Lorelai since she spilled her guts to Mia. 'big tease'? Would I do that to Luke - and the readers? Maybe the reader, but NEVER Luke!!! Course maybe he'll get sick and can't come...hmmm.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The Inner Musings of Luke’s Mind" from RevDorothyL
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Looking forward to seeing this new version of Luke and Lorelai's friendship develop.
Comments from author:
It always bothered me that it took them so long to get together and it was filled with too much angst. They deserved better.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: The Inner Musings of Luke’s Mind" from zigpal
Review:
Great start. AND I like the idea of Steve. Someone to look out for Luke, so he wouldn't punch Taylor (even though a lot of us would just love to). I also like the almost Lorelai finding for Luke, and I can't wait to see how he goes about asking Mia about her.
Comments from author:
You assume he gets the *chance* to ask her. (evil grin) We'll have the answer in chapter 3 I think.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [30 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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