Cool bean. This is interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Glad you liked it...

hmmm, you've definitely captured my interest with this one...

amused by the idea of Zilch as his codename / powers... very cool stuff

M

Yeah... I must admit it amused me too... :}

A well written and interesting development but I am still looking forward to some payback.

Yes well that will take some time. Xander has no clue what the hell was going on and there is no really easy way for him to figure that out... ;)

Looks /really/ good, but not enough to properly comment on other than a good ol' 'This is relevant to my interests.' Write more please.

Written more... Will be posting more within the hour... ;)

Could be an interesting idea though if it is continued I do hope lots people involved like Finn get killed for their part of inhumane experiments on their fellow americans. One the bigger flaws of the Xmen universe is the 'humans can do what every they want and get away with it' while 'mutants get caught, supressed or killed'. Xavier can find a mutant causing trouble half a world away, but Mutant based expermintation, killing and enslavement goes untoiced basicaly until one their own are taken. Then ofcourse people who do such a thing just walk away free with a slap on the wrist at best because the justice system is beneath them and Xmen rarely kill normal humans.

Oh believe me, when Xander starts to actually figure out what is going on and who's responsible, he's not going to let sleeping dogs lie...

;)

In all fairness to Xavier, I should point out that a mutant causing trouble is usually out in the open and easy to find. Mutant based experimentation tends to be done in secret is not so easily noticable.

Jasper

More soon please?

Soon compared to when you reviewed originally? I'm afraid not.

Soon compared to now? It'll be on it's way within the hour...

Great story start, would love to see more!

I'll be glad to help you out with that...

Looking interesting, nice explanation for all the weirdness about Xander without making it ridiculous. Looking forward to more.

Thanks, I do try...

Turning nothing into a power is an interesting idea. Keep up the good work.

Thanks... I'm rather pleased with it...

Well, this is interesting. I'm curious as to where you're going to take it. Looking forward to reading more.

Cool

More please!

Working on it... ;)

very very good

Thanks

An intriguing start. Well done.

Thank you

this looks really interesting, i can't wait to see more.

Working on it...

If Xander's friends find him Riley is so going to wish that his great great great great great grandparents were never conceived! And that is just before Xander is finished with him! I say this because as we all know Xander is definitely never to be underestimated! As you can most likely tell I love this story so far and I am looking forward to whatever you are going to have next, and I do hope it's soon.^_^

I'll do my best