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Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
I'm glad Drusilla chose the better path, and actually remedied the problem. I think Xander, Oz, Dawn will learn a lot of needed things among the Zamaron ladies. As for Buffy, well she needs to consider others and their perspectives a lot more. Their concerns our just as important as hers. The story is getting better, as the varied higher powers become involved.
Peace
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying this story as I'm enjoying writing it. Although, I'm wondering what you meant exactly by better path...

Only Xander and Dawn will be learning anything from the Zamarons as they were they only ones captured. The Zamarons will also be learning a lot from Xander and Dawn as well.

I'm also ecstatic that someone picked up that I'm trying to make Buffy learn to respect other people's concerns. I will try to update soon.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [27 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath" from ellf
Review:
You don't like Buffy much do you?

I hope she starts to get a more fair treatment in this fic. However, I'm not you, if I don't like the next few chapters, I'll just stop reading it. You have plenty of other readers who seem to like it.
Comments from author:
It's not that I don't like Buffy. It's the fact that I don't like when she tries to blame everyone else for the problems she's having or causes. She couldn't look past the fact that Angel had no soul which led to the deaths of several people including Jenny Calender.

This whole "Buffy-Bashing" bit is so that I can have her eventually join the "spandex club". When I have her finally realize that not all fights are won in the darkness, she'll end up suiting up.

This will also serve as a bit of conflict with Giles. On one hand, he'll have his loyalties to the tradition that the council believes in. The idea that a young girl should be forced to go out and fight against all the demons of the world. On the other hand, he'd want Buffy to be happy and safe as possible.

Buffy donning the proverbial spandex will also be cause for quite the conflict for the Watcher's Council which would be resolved rather quickly when a certain tribe of warrior women find out a group of men are sending lone girls to their deaths every night.

Personally, once Angel had his own series, I started to like him. But the whole relationship he has/had with Buffy was borderline ewwwww.
Review By [ellf] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Review:
Well, this is interesting. Hmm, I wonder if Dawn will finally get her X-Man?
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Raider
Review:
one word: nice.

as for the senior lantern, I suggest Katma Tui.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliment but...isn't Katma Tui dead?
Review By [Raider] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Pardryll
Review:
Whoop! Great story. Perhaps a bit repetitive. with the oaths and all, but perhaps you could have just listed them at the end of the chapter? Aside from that, though, it's wonderful, and you have a great writing style.
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from SamDragon
Review:
This is a hoot.So many colors.Violet still hasn't shown up yet so will Dru still be crazy?
Comments from author:
Just wait for the next chapter.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Strangyr
Review:
Nice.....and considering where they are.......my vote for the lantern to train them is.....Jack T. Chance......or.....wasn't there a story in the old "Green Lantern Corp" comics about a GL. on a planet of Vamps?
Comments from author:
Again, I have a problem with using dead Green Lanterns.
Review By [Strangyr] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting update, I'm hoping that you'll add more of the story soon.

What Green Lantern will you use to train Xander and Oz?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Don't Mess with Xander's 'Dawn Patrol' it's a recipe for painful death. On the Senor Green Lantern sent to aid Xander and Oz, could it be Arisa? She is a formidable Green Lantern and also because of her experiences, she would a great mentor for Dawn, she might even be able to help her get her Man. Willow as a Blue Lantern will help her to focus on the light rather than the dark, and cement her connection with Xander and Oz. Drusilla's Violet Lantern status and Spike's Red Lantern Status make for an interesting reunion. Cordie as the Goddess Diana/Wonder Woman, HEY THAT'S NO FAIR, THAT'S TYPECASTING. Put another way Cordie as Wonder Woman, Duh, that's a real no brainer obvious. Warren as a Yellow Lantern of the Sinestro Corps another Perfect pairing, after all Warren is in all ways Yellow, from the streak running down his back to the sick (Jaundice) feeling he causes in others around him. Will the other Lantern colors get representation? The Indigo Lantern Corps (Compassion Shamanistic) would be a good fit for Jenny Calander. As for the Black Lantern Corps, Angelus. Just who would be perfect for the Orange Lantern Corps, that's a little tougher; Ethan, Mayor Wilkins, Willie the Snitch, or someone new. Will the Various Lanterns, recruit others to their causes? I like this Story it's fresh and original, please keep it coming.
Peace
Comments from author:
WOW! See this board ::Holds up a two by four with several nails driven in it:: You just hit several on the head. I guess the "Force" was with you on that one. I was planning on Arisia because of several reasons. One: She spent time on Earth so unlike other Green Lanterns she won't seem too alien. Two: She appears human so that will keep a bit of cover for her. Three: I believe Xander would pay more attention to her (Hey, not just because she's hot) because I see him as a feminist and more likely to listen to her.

Drusilla as a Star Sapphire was a connection that to me was too perfect not to use. Personally, I love her character and the idea of her being even more "loving" would be entertaining. Plus, can't you see how she'll interact with the other Star Sapphires. Five points to anyone who can guess which Star Sapphire will use Dru's gift to her advantage. Dru would also drive a wedge between Oz and Willow also.

Spike as a Red Lantern was also perfect. He may get enraged a lot but he's always in control and now couple that with the powers of a Red Lantern...:::Grayed out NC-17 VIOLENT HORROR SCENE::......::Insert frightened theather audience::

I'm glad you thought Cordy dressed as Wonder Woman was both Typecasting and a no brainer. I just put the combo together because I was getting tired of almost every other Halloween fic having her wearing that cat costume. Plus, another reviewer wrote that Charisma Carpenter was one of the potentials to play Wonder Woman when Joss Whedon was in charge of the project. That part surprised me a bit.

Warren as a member of the Sinestro Corps. Hint Hint I know a certain witch isn't getting shot Hint Hint

I'm not going to use the Indigo Tribe or the Black Lantern Corps "yet" because I don't have enough info on them aside from what wikias I've found. Besides, Angelus as a Black Lantern. I could think of a few other Sunnydale residents that have either died already or are undead that would be better.

The Orange Lantern Corps won't find a Sunnydale member because that would mean killing said Sunnydale member because the only way to "join" is to be killed by Agent Orange or one of his construct members.

I also agree with your first sentence and I also can see Buffy trying to rip Xander a new one because her mother and sister found out.

I'm glad you like the story and I hope to update very soon.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from djhardim
Review:
Looks good. One correction on the oath -

FOR THOSE WHO WORSHIP EVIL’S MIGHT

It's "LET" THOSE WHO WORSHIP EVIL’S MIGHT

From Part 1 - Cordy being Wonder Woman is appropriate, especially since Charisma Carpenter was one of the names mentioned for the lead role in Joss's project.
Comments from author:
My bad on the oath.

And I didn't know about that little fact concerning Joss's project.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Wonderful story so far I can not wait for more.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Bobboky
Review:
very very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part Two" from Valandar
Review:
Too bad Kilowog's dead by this point in the Continuity... he'd be the ideal trainer! :D
Comments from author:
Since I'm basically AUing this, I wanted people to know that he wasn't going to show up. But still, I could just see Buffy's first encounter with Kilowog.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
So many plotholes I don't even know where to begin.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
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