Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from Dragonhulk
Review:
You have a lot of people getting rings here, and considering the power of just one Green Lantern ring Sunnydale may be destroyed a few years early when they start to fight.
Anyway thanks for responding to my review, it was one of the few bright spots on an otherwise crappy day.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from Bobboky
Ok why did you see fit to add two more Corps.? We now have the Green,Red,Yellow and Purple Corps. I'd like to give you a 100% good review but this is starting to not sound good. Try not to do what I did in my Magic: the Gathering crossover. I can not see any spelling errors in your story.
Comments from author:
I will answer your question. Why did I see fit to add them? Because they not only went along with the particular challenge that had been made but also because I needed to up some of the Sunnydale bad guys. Balance is everything. I couldn't have Xander and Oz become Green Lanterns without doing what I did. I see that you've also forgotten about the fifth color that I have in this so far or why do you think that Saint Walker is headed to Sunnydale to recruit.
Nice, very nice indeed. Loved seeing all the DC hero's and heroines in this story so far. Now, lets see about the new rectuits for the GL corp! As for Dru, I smell Star Sapphire on the loose!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Thank you. I tried to match the characters to the perfect ring. Can you imagine Warren's twisted little mind get even more twisted in the Sinestro Corps? As for Dru, I had to do that to her. It was too much of a given.
Review By [Harry] • Date [6 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Origins, Part One" from ChiVayne
Review:
Yikes, that's a lot of power being brought to good old Sunnydale. If everyone keeps their powers, I foresee a lot of collateral damage and fear for those who didn't receive a power up.
Comments from author:
:) Yep, lot's of power relocated right on top of the Hellmouth. What could possibly go wrong? MUWAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Speaking of collateral damage...
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated