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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Xander’s Little Problem" from spring
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ROTFLMAO..... I have to agree with the demon of fear about Buffy and Xander on this one. Again I love this extremely funny story so far. More soon please.
Comments from author:
There's just one short chappie left. Then it's back to the important stuff...Buffy and her future.
Review By [spring] • Date [10 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Xander’s Little Problem" from Cordyfan
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"As if the strong-willed young woman would have even considered him if he were the last man – no, male (including non-human creatures) – on earth. No, in this dimension! If there had been no other choices, she probably would have become a lesbian."

I haven't quite stopped laughing at this chapter yet. You do realise that this site's legions of deluded Xander fans now probably have you on their death lists...
Comments from author:
Well, that would explain those burning chest pains and stab-y needle feelings I've had since posting this chapter. (smirk) And hey! It's their own fault I treated him this bad. If there wasn't so much Xander-worship going on, I wouldn't feel the need to balance it out with my evil wickedness. Okay, maybe I went a *bit* overboard with that statement. She might pick him over say Clem. But then again, maybe not. After all, aside from his looks and penchant for kitties, Clem's not all that bad.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [10 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: Kennedy Gets Hers" from spring
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ROTFLMAO a pouting Oracle?!?!?! Oh I love it. The reaction that Buffy had to her new status is wonderful. I am very much loving this extremely wonderful story so far and I am very eager to see what comes next.^_^
Comments from author:
Those Oracles always struck me as too one-dimensional - they needed *some* kind of personality.

I know that this wasn't what Buffy ended up with, but since it was Kennedy's punishment 'world', I figured it was okay to mess with what *really* happened to her.
Review By [spring] • Date [10 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Willow Pays the Price" from Cordyfan
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I like where you're going with this so far. I'm a little surprised, however, that you decided to kill off Willow, especially since she had very little time to reflect on her bad choices before the end. One of the options open to the Tribunal in your previous story was to wipe her memory - it might have been suitable justice simply to return her to the shy, retiring computer nerd of the early Buffy seasons (a much moire likeable character) and to remove any recollections of Sunnydale and her life there.

My nit-picking aside, keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
You'll see how it turns out in the end. But mostly I did this so we wouldn't have to really think about them again and if they were going to come after Buffy and the others. Even with her memory wiped, Willow could still be a threat. Besides that option was before they found out how manipulative and dangerous she was.
Review By [Cordyfan] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Willow Pays the Price" from spring
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Foolish girl. Power has a very heavy responsibility one Willow really didn't want to pay attention to. Willow got what she deserved. I love this story.
Comments from author:
Thanks. It's a toss-up which chapter I enjoyed more - Kennedy or Xander. Kennedy's has the great 'in your face' quality, while Xander's is just plain funny to me. Don't worry, I'll post them real soon so you can see what I mean.
Review By [spring] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: She Needs to Learn a Lesson!" from MrGordo
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Oooh This IS GONNA BE FUN!!! Just make sure the traitors learn just how important Buffy is. Really rub salt in the wounds.

Make sure they see their auras. And I'd love it if it were made clear to Kennedy that even if she became a mini Slayer. Buffy and Faith were CHOSEN. Either of them would Be more powerful then her.

Ooh one more thing, Willow should learn the ONLY reason she beat Buffy is because Buffy held back! Buffy LOVED her. And as with Angelus love kept her from going full power. I mean Buffy beat a GODDESS with a troll hammer. You think she couldn't have taken a juiced witch? Love is Buffy's greatest strength, But also her greatest weakness.

I'd love fr both ex Scoobies to FINALLY understand that Buffy LOVED them. And just how empty their lives will be without that love. I'd like to see real remorse and guilt from them.
Comments from author:
I can help you with some of your wishes, but not all of them. All that I can promise is that they will all learn their lesson. And if you can handle the language of chapter 4, I happened to think it was hilarious.
Review By [MrGordo] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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