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Alexander 'Brand' Fraiser

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Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from ladyfiana
Review:
I like the idea of Janet as his mother. Very different, never seen it done before. Angelus better hope Xander doesn't get ahold of him. I liked how you wrote Xander, never backing down. I can see Buffy and Willow doing that because that was a hard time for everybody. Shouldn't Xander's parents murders made the newspaper? I feel like I should know that brand but it's not coming to me. Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
One might expect that the murders did make the paper, but you must remember that this is Sunnydale. Murders are pretty much limited to the obituaries, which Buffy and Willow are not likely prone to reading. Giles himself is more likely to in the process of looking for new risings, but I figure a one or two day gap in noticing is not unreasonable given how shaky the times are when this occurs...

As for Xander backing down, that is one thing I've never seen him do in the face of the enemy, even if he couldn't really do anything to stop them. Angelus, O'Toole, Faith, Darth Willow, Caleb... You get the idea...
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from spring
Review:
Oh wow. This is wonderful. I don't like that Xander was beaten so badly but hey it's very different than anything that I have read so far as is the part of Janet being Xander's real mother so that's way cool. You get extremely high marks for originality. ^_^ I am very very eager to see how this goes. I hope that you are able to update this wonderful story again soon.
Comments from author:
Honestly, I'm surprised more people don't have Xander getting brutally attacked by Angelus during the love spell incident. If my memory is correct it was only a love-spell besotted Drusilla that saved Xander from that sort of fate in canon. Take out the spell and Xander's in deep trouble...

Glad you're enjoying it...
Review By [spring] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from cjdunk
Review:
Good start, but one major problem..........More
Comments from author:
Hmmmm... Working on that problem... ;)
Review By [cjdunk] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from AllenPitt
Review:
I can't figure out how he survived. Angelus doesn't leave people living. Somebody must have intervened?
Comments from author:
You'll find out soon. It's actually well within Angelus' character to my mind...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very well written start with an unusual 'real' family. Eagerly awaiting developments.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from Bobboky
Review:
excellent work
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from melissaassilem
Review:
i like this angle of the "real family" and have not seen it before. keep going! can't wait to see what happens next
Comments from author:
Thank you very much
Review By [melissaassilem] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from Mcspender
Review:
Fraiser vs Angelus & Drusilla... I pity those "Scourge of Europe" fools :P.
Comments from author:
Oh yeah... Napoleon Fraiser is a vindictive soul... ;)
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from (Recent Donor)Mari
Review:
Interesting idea--and a quite nice twist on the Xander's real family motif. the only complaint I have is that the girls--especially Buffy--seemed a little too unconcerned about where Xander was.
Comments from author:
You've gotta understand that Buffy is not in a very good state of mind right now. She's just recently had her beloved lover go Mr. Hyde on her and she has failed to kill him at the first opportunity, thus providing him with more opportunity. Angelus is busily screwing with her mind and it causing her to behave rather out of sorts and uncharacteristically.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Mari] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from kayron
Review:
Is the brand supposed to be some kind of bird? I can't tell. I've never read a Dr. Frasier as Xander's mother before, it should be interesting.
Comments from author:
Not a bird, to my knowledge... ;)
Review By [kayron] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from Lupina
Review:
Oh man!!!! If janet cross ways with angel he is sooooooooooooooo scr#$%¨!!!! This is an interesting point of view and i can´t wait to see what will happen nex, so update, ok?
Comments from author:
Will do...
Review By [Lupina] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from kyzhart
Review:
I'm hooked. I like the change of parent. Janet can be quite fierce and Xan will need that. Plus now he'll get a sis in Cassie. I haven't seen the brand idea before. I hate the idea of it happening but love the plot idea. Can brands be skin grafted over? Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Probably can be fixed, but won't be in this case. You'll see why eventually... ;)
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [8 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from Cyberwere
Review:
I have to admit, this is a new twist on a Xander's real family fic. At least to me.

I like the start. It definitely has me intrigued and wanting to see more. I really enjoy the portrayal of Xander you've shown so far. He seems very true to character.

I look forward to reading more. Here's hoping you update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks... Never seen Janet as his relative before...

Jack, Sarah, Sam, Jacob, Hank, George, Daniel, etc... but never Janet...
Review By [Cyberwere] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bludgeoned, Branded and Begotten" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Like your twist. Wondering what kind of branding iron would be hanging around in Sunnydale or in an antique store... and would Xander decide to incorporate the brand into a tatoo design later on if the branding couldn't be repaired.
Comments from author:
The brand, for the record, was in Drusilla's possession. ;)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 May 09] • Not Rated
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