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Review of chapter "The Tendo Dojo" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
He was in awe of mother nature. Why if she had any silky darlings, it would be an honor to acquire a pair of her things.

*snicker*

A uniquely Happosai view.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
You gotta love his point of view.
If I ever reach 300. First I'll be glad I reached that age obviously. Second still have his point of view. Just wow. But then he does use the energy from his perversion to stay alive.
Raf
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Nerima. The Chaos capital of the world." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!

The anatomy of Nerima mob!

Great stuff.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
We aim to please.
Raf
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Nerima. The Chaos capital of the world." from misterq
Review:
I love the fact that Colone was scared/impressed that Xander was hanging around with Dee, heh. Keep up the great work!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [misterq] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to Nerima. The Chaos capital of the world." from Bobboky
Review:
very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to Nerima. The Chaos capital of the world." from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cat Cafe" from VillageOrchid
Review:
That was a well done crossover... Ranma is such a wacky story, and you used a nice amount of mixed realism with the wacky.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
I'll try to keep the balance.
Raf.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Cat Cafe" from missinglink
Review:
Oh my god! You have invoked the Ranma. I can only imagine the possibilities as they are numerous and scary to follow too far.

Seriously though, great idea as it will be interesting to see the interactions, especially if one of the girls falls for Xander, what with the insanity that would bring, not to mention Cass-y-D and Barb's reaction. Cologne's scheming aside the one character all Ranma crosses usually provide that I can't wait to see what you would do is have Xander either like or square off against (damn can't remember his name) the old perverted ninja teacher who's always stealing women's underwear. Either way it would be hilarious. Even more so if you put the old pervert and Bruce on a path to meet. Would be a blast and can only hope you have plans.

Again great cross to add to the mix here. Am really enjoying this. Keep it up. Later.

Horrifying thought/couldn't stop giggling. What if Happosai either felt up or stole Death's undies without knowing just who she is?!?!
Comments from author:
Happosai had three students for a while. Bruce was one of them. A new meeting between student and master could be intersting.

I'm glad you're enjoying this story. For the rest keep reading.

Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [missinglink] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Cat Cafe" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Japan." from Mnemorath
Review:
Love the cross. You do realize that Ranma is ALOT better then Happi by the end of the manga right? Happi is craftier though. Hmm, wonder if Xander or Dawn was a manga or Anime fan and would recognize the Amazons.

:SHUDDER: I just had a flash of Nabiki getting access to Babs computers.

Nerima would indeed drive the Bat...well batty,
Comments from author:
No access to Bab's computers. Booby trapped.
Dawn was.
Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [Mnemorath] • Date [14 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Japan." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Oh, GOD, the boy's dropping into Ranma 1/2 COLD?

And dare I ask what Barbara did that was so heinous she gets to put up with Happosai? Seriously! *grin*

There's hope yet, however. Dr. Light (the heroic version) hasn't shown up to hand anyone their head yet.

This is glorious. And it'll be interesting for the less savvy heroes to find out what madness has always been there.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
There'll be surprises. That's all I'm saying.
Raf.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [13 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Japan." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome intro to this crossover... amazingly awesome.

The chaos of this ward of the city would be enough to drive the bat insane i think...
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I got my start with Ranma 1/2.
I thought this would be a fun cross.

Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Dee has a physical "place" in Gotham? I'm enjoying the story...although I think you umm... cleaned up a possible plot point that probably took place in the shower; being the master of his own domain, so to speak. What was the rating of this story?
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

Rating is at FR 15 for now. Not sure how to take it. For now FR 15 but if anything happens that would require a boost I'll raise it for that chapter.

Raf
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from Bluesnowman
Review:
great stuff.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Where do we go from here?" from misterq
Review:
Yay! The return of Dee. I wonder how they're going to get to her place, though for the bags? Or if one of her siblings (Desire, for example. Or Delirium) comes to visit. Great job!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Raf
Review By [misterq] • Date [11 May 09] • Not Rated
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