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Review of chapter "Heroes" from spk
Review:
Ecstatic to see this update! LOVED the way you wrote the cadets into this scene! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm very glad the cadet side story works for you. :-)
Review By [spk] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heroes" from Mcspender
Review:
Well done Elizabeth, well done. I hope she makes it, and if she does, I bet her class is gonna give her a tin can medal, for going waaay beyond the call of self preservation and saving another person xD.
Heather and Mike's fastball special was awesome.
Talk about improvised Anti-Air Artillery xD!.
Cool chapter, see ya!.
Comments from author:
I had to do it. I just had to. But I couldn't save Janet without there being a cost. War is not like that. War is ugly. Good people get hurt. Unfortunately for Elizabeth, her class will never know what she did. Only her three friends will know... and of course everyone at the SGC.

One thing that she's proved, no matter what else happens... she's SGC grade.

I had so much fun with the Heather and George fastball special! heheh

Thank you!

Blue
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Heroes" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Fastball Special for the win! Wasn't there a forum conversation on whether a Slayer could pull one off awhile back?

Anyway, I liked Mike's renewed determination to get through the Acadamy from seeing Carter in action. It was a good reminder to him that jocks aren't the only ones who can make it.

As far as Elizabeth goes, I suspect she'll survive. That staff blast may have caused excessive soft tissue damage, but her bones are far tougher than a human's. I would bet the spinal cord is still protected. And most Buffy-verse demons can take far more damage than a human, so I'm thinking she'll recover.
Comments from author:
So very glad I could give you that one! I don't actually remember the forum conversation, but perhaps it lodged in my brain. I just know that rewatching that shot when the al'kesh flies over Jack's unconscious body that I had to do it... Of course, in my version, either George or Heather killed whoever it was that shot Jack in the original version.

I enjoyed giving Mike something to think about and encourage him. In our modern world, the whole divide between jocks and nerds is a huge waste of good people.

Elizabeth... well, you'll have to read the next chapter for that one. Yes, her bones are tougher and her flesh is too... but she's still very nearly human. As I said... more will be revealed. I'm working on it now.

Thanks for your review!

Peace,

Blue
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Yay! Assuming Elizabeth makes it, I say hurrah for the Academy team!
Comments from author:
The academy team. I think I know what they're doing for the summer!!

Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Heroes" from Harry
Review:
I think that we have the makings of the first SG Team that has a Slayer in it! This team of Cadets, with the Slayer among them, has earned the thanks of SG1, SG11 and General Hammond. And taking out the Jaffa that came through the gate, made sure that no one was going to get hurt. And they have saved a life in the process. Not bad for their first time in the field.
Comments from author:
I see you've discovered my cunning plan!! Yes, this is going to be a team that is resourceful and upon whom the SGC can depend. Guess which command they're going to be praying for!!

Now, we have to see what comes next for Elizabeth and what happens when the Scoobies arrive at the SGC.
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I felt your heart so close to mine" from raxadian
Review:
Well, considering who Dawn and Jon are, is surprising they were able to last this long without doing it.
Comments from author:
You're not wrong about that. Hope you enjoyed the chapter.

Thanks for reviewing.

Blue
Review By [raxadian] • Date [24 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With Friends Like These..." from raxadian
Review:
You can´t do the speech Xander, that´s Daniel job! You haven´t know Sam for years. Sorry but that whole part just doesn´t work and Jack does make Xander look like a Chump. Have you forget the whole reason Jack has his heath problems? And that was before SG1!
Comments from author:
No, actually, Daniel is JACK'S friend. He does NOT qualify at all. Sam doesn't have anyone here who is purely her friend and that's why Xander feels the need to stand up for HER and her alone. Plus, Xander is the one who encouraged Sam to get involved with Jack. He feels responsible.

You're taking this very literally. I'm not even beginning to suggest that Xander knows more about fighting or torture than Jack.

Please remember the originator of the shovel speech threatened a big, scary soldier... She was a small girl and he was big and powerful. He didn't know she was a witch at all. She wasn't a big scary witch at the time. She was just a small, female college student, threatening a large, fit man. Xander, by contrast is six foot and muscular. In a fair fight with Jack, he'd lose; however, angry people seldom fight fair, and Xander IS quite big enough to actually hurt Jack if he wanted to.

Warren was no fighter at all and he took on a witch and a slayer, killed one and almost killed the other.

One reason the speech works in canon is because it's so ridiculous for Willow to threaten Riley.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [23 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rainy Movie Day" from raxadian
Review:
Here is an idea for a different story, Dawn and Jon get kidnaped by a ´snake´ that has been in Earth for a while and can do magic.
Comments from author:
Interesting idea. Let's hope it doesn't happen in this one. I think I have all the surprises I can handle. Magic and snakes... shudders.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Now... for something completely different!" from raxadian
Review:
As the old saying says "Don´t fix what ain´t broken.”
Comments from author:
You mean, like Scoobies for slayers? Yes, it's a good formula!

Blue
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Friendly Ambush" from raxadian
Review:
That it was a can of worms that no one wanted to open?
Comments from author:
The council definitely thought it was better off buried. Sadly, the universe is not big enough to keep your head buried in the sand...
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Talented Senator Kinsey" from raxadian
Review:
Cam we have a demon eating him?
Comments from author:
I'd really love to. He definitely needs to be eaten.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [21 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Making Connections" from raxadian
Review:
Well, Jack could indeed retire.
Comments from author:
He could retire. He could take a different command.

Blue
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life on Life's Terms" from raxadian
Review:
A voice was heard in the force, that of many fans shouting ”It was about time!”
Comments from author:
So very glad you approve. I always thought they should find a way. Thankfully, modern shows are more inclined to let the romance happen.

Blue
Review By [raxadian] • Date [19 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Doing What Comes Naturally" from raxadian
Review:
Uh?
Comments from author:
Love?!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "With All Due Respect" from raxadian
Review:
I like that he wants to protect Buffy.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I really liked Graham.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [18 Oct 14] • Not Rated
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