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Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from VillageOrchid
Review:
coolness!
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "After Midnight..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
So cool. And Dawn kinda likes Jack a little... so younger Jack may be good for her... if that's happened yet.
Comments from author:
Hope you enjoyed Dawn and Jon... Don't know how far you got in the story... Will come back to it soon...

Blue
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from mousemt
Review:
Oooh! Another chapter. yay!
Comments from author:
you're welcome... grin.

blue
Review By [mousemt] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from RevDorothyL
Review:
3 new chapters -- yay! I'm really enjoying the pace of this get-together, as well as the chance to hear a bit from each person's thoughts and reasons for feeling and thinking the way they do. And I'm so glad you introduced Jon into the mix, since fanfic is the only place where Jack's clone ever seems to be heard from again, and he's too neat to throw away like that.
Comments from author:
yeah, I wish they hadn't just ditched him after that one episode. Unfortunately the show was called SG-1... he just had so much potential...

I'm glad you like my inner looks of the characters. Motivations and thoughts are so interesting... making them fit the character... that's the challenge.

Thanks

Blue
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh I liked how the Scooby's figured out about the two O'Neill's and how Jack over heard them talking about it. Also like how the Scooby's laid back attitude and extensive knowledge came across.

Dawn's thoughts about Jon's 50 yrs of 'experience' funny as hell.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Yes, Dawn has been watching Buffy's choice in men for a while... smirk. not so tactful tho' eh?

These people have been saving the world for seven years. That takes a certain amount of competence. Just because they seem goofy, doesn't mean they really are. Xander and Buffy may not be Willow smart, but they're the other kind of smart... practical smart. Most of the world is actually run by people like them...

in my opinion anyway...

thanks for your comments as always. I love your insights.

Peace

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Ooo, your laundry must be piling up with all these updates that you're doing! Loved the use of the locater spell on Jack/Jon. Poor Jack still is having trouble with the new people. But at least he was smart enough to pass on the teenybopper to the version of him who was one.

Feel bad for Willow though, unless she switches sides again, she's out of luck in the lovin' department.
Comments from author:
No, Willow's definitely battin' for the estrogen side... Oh, what will we do...

No Jack may be twisted, but he's not insane. Little girls aren't his thing, thank god. Of course, since Jon's Jack, who knows what that's gonna mean...


Smoke on the water... fire in the sky...
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from nicjphill
Review:
Good updates! I am hoping this is going to be Jon/Dawn. Also can't wait to see Giles and Daniel meet. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
When Daniel met Ripper... Ooh that's a picture... hey... mind... sigh... Oh the places my head goes...

Hmmm 50 year old miniJack/Jon meets thousands of eons old Dawn... Would that be even fair? more will be revealed...
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from azulkan
Review:
Loved this chapter. Looking forward to the next.
Comments from author:
glad you're enjoying this... my little excursion away from TFD and ANH... not to mention the housework... darn if this isn't more fun than cleaning the kitchen or pulling weeds!

Peace

L
Review By [azulkan] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL!
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from Aeryn
Review:
Everyone is finally about to spill their secrets, should be lots of stunned faces. fun! Jon/Dawn..yeay, forgot about him.
another round of applause...
Comments from author:
Glad to be of service my dear!

Peace,

Blue.

Yes... stunned faces are us... poor George.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Comments from author:
Thank you. Blush

Blue
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Very good start... I hope to see more. Thanks for writing =)
Comments from author:
I love your name... scary... You're very welcome. I think maybe I need to take at least a few hours to clean my house and work on some of my other stories, but I'll be back, i promise.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from AllenPitt
Review:
And each group thinks their group has done more world-saving than anybody else. Kind of funny. I bet the Initiative was funded/run by the NID and reported to Kinsey. heh. Then again if he knew about the supernatural he'd have used it more, probably....
I bet the Watcher histories would have a lot of additional info about the Goa'uld's time on earth in ancient Egypt--(with the watchers of the time thinking they were demons and/or real gods). hm, it might be interesting if some of the portals in sunnydale actually led to other planets not just dimensions, & a few of the demons were just aliens. Imagine Buffy walking into a bar on some alien planet and some of the aliens go "Oh no, it's the slayer!" and running out...
For that matter, I wonder if Dawn as key would have a weird effect on a stargate....
Comments from author:
so many ideas... I do have other work to do, you know... now you make me want to go do more writing. Is that fair?

Yes, I have many of these questions... What will Dawn's effect be on the Stargate? Will we learn her true purpose?

Will the strange attraction that Jack has to Dawn finally make him realize that living like a monk is a dumb idea, that it's having unintended consequences and he should ask Sam (or some other woman) out and get it over with?

I hope that the Council's records weren't all destroyed... that would be sad...

I love the idea of Buffy walking into a bar... can it be on unification day? Never mind, that's a different 'verse. So would Buffy be a brown coat?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna cause talk and suspicion!" from deathgeonous
Review:
Wow, updates R you. Still good as well. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Oh, this is all for today... I have got to do some other work... besides there are other stories...

Peace

Blue

forgive my manners... thank you for your review...
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna stimulate some action..." from CassiopeiaHastur
Review:
i can't wait and see whats going to happen at jacks....

thanks for posting two new chapters.
But aren't you overdoing it with pairing everybody up?
Comments from author:
Who's paired up? lol... Well maybe Teal'c and Buffy...

You know I'm just not that nice... evil grin.

blue
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
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