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Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from mithrilandtj
Review:
Poor Jack. I think he's gonna need a lot more beer.
Comments from author:
more beer indeed... The one I feel sorry for is Jon... he can't have beer... he's trying desperately to keep his identity secret... Wonder what he's thinking right at the moment??

There are some problems that can't be solved by copious quantities of beer.

Blue
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from Amai
Review:
When will they learn guns are never the answer? Magic is! Poor skeptical Jack... hopefully that disbelief won't come back to bite him on the neck.
Comments from author:
That *would* be unfortunate, now, wouldn't it... Then again... maybe that's what it takes... gonna have to ponder...

Pondered... something is definitely needed to bite Jack in the ass... I wonder what that should be???

heheh

Blue
Review By [Amai] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from spk
Review:
LOVE it! So in-character. Great job! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think I've got the characters... that's always a challenge in a situation like this... create a realistic reaction, real and funny (hopefully) dialogue... and stay with the characters...

I hope I can keep it up.

Wish me monsters!

Blue
Review By [spk] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Review:
I love this story! It's truly enjoyable. Thank you for sharing it.

CT.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! It's my honor. I love your name... It is so very cool

Peace

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from nicjphill
Review:
How cute, love the looks between Teal'c and Buffy! I would like to see Jon's reaction to all this. Update soon!
Comments from author:
yes, he's been very quiet... but if he's trying to pretend he's not jack... he can't very well jump in and back jack up, now can he? also, maybe he's having sympathies with the 'fellow' young 'uns... gonna have to think on that some... thank you for the mental floss.

blue
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from eliseth
Review:
I'm still loving it, just thought you should know :)
keep it up!
Comments from author:
i'm working on it. See what muse boy gives... ah... ow muse man. muse man... ok... damn you're so violent... sorry... the muse took exception to being called 'boy'.

sigh..

glad you like..

peace

Blue
Review By [eliseth] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from Aeryn
Review:
You are such a tease, moving the story along but still holding off full disclosure. I love it, gimme more.
Comments from author:
glad you like... I hope I can keep your interest.

Peace,

Blue.
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Bloody good chapter, doing a great job with everyone's personalities and their reactions to the events happening during the chapters. Absolutely love the bit about Willow admitting but not admitting to hacking the computers... lovely piece of word twistage!

Only thing that seems a little off was Sam talking about Buffy's background check she did. It seem very odd she hadn't said anything before hand. Otherwise fantastic writing and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Wispr
Comments from author:
She didn't really get a chance to talk to Jack privately... I don't think it was something she would have revealed publicly at all, but things were going to hell in a hand basket and she had at least a bit of relevant extra knowledge...

Thank you for your review and your insight...

So glad you like my Willow-age... smile.

Peace,

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from AllenPitt
Review:
hm...of course, two can play the 'impress them' game. Imagine Jack making a call and suddenly they're all Asgard-transported into an orbiting ship like the Daedalus ... or have 'em meet the Asgard. Even funnier the various Goa'uld System Lords ie "Osiris" would be weird (the deity invoked to resurrect Buffy).... that would have been the real Osiris, but still....
So if the British gov. now knows about the Stargate program, odds are the council will get told....
Comments from author:
odds are... and of course we know the brits did lay claim to their place in the program

The real Osiris would probably not be pleased to be invoked... could be... painful for the goa'uld.

When they meet the asgard... well that will be interesting won't it? Smirk

Blue
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
That could've had ended badly. Glad that it didn't... So far.

More soon I hope.
Comments from author:
more confusion! definitely... Of course it will end well... eventually... the road to true love however is fraught...

Blue
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
So who made Teal'c sad? Buffy or Jack? Thank goodness no one ended up getting shot! Did the others see that Buffy and Daniel were glowing blue, or was Buffy's from a previous time? Looking forward to meeting General Hammond. Hope he had heard about the Initiative and who Buffy was. That should halt the confrontation in its tracks.

Good work. Get a take out pizza out of petty cash.
Comments from author:
Teal'c sad b/c his old friends and his new friends are going through a rough patch

Buffy glowed blue from a previous spell... so only Daniel was blue this time. Willow's not about the big give aways...

Poor George...

thank you darlin' -- I'm very grateful for the pizza pie... may have to put in freezer for now... all these lovely reviews are fillin' me up


thanks for makin' my day!

Blue
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from CassiopeiaHastur
Review:
Great Chapter!! i Love the looks/attraction between Buffy and Teal'c



But i think i might stop reading now ... for about two weeks

And than i read chapter after chapter, chapter and chapter ..... and be veeeeeeery happy.

well i can try, if i last that long
Comments from author:
good luck with that... just as long as you don't let it get in the way of work or school... that would be bad... I'll be here whenever you come back.

Thanks for your review.

Bleu
Review By [CassiopeiaHastur] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from imokit
Review:
Great chappy!!!!
Comments from author:
thank you!
Review By [imokit] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool chapter... not a full reveal on either side. Well done.
Comments from author:
Don't think the Scoobies are ready to reveal all, despite the hints... Notice no mention was made of slayers...

Of course, they've pretty much figured out the Stargate program... and a few hours on the computer will show Willow pretty much anything else she needs to know.

peace

blue
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're gonna find out what it is all about..." from FireWolfe
Review:
Wonderful chapter
Comments from author:
thank you kindly

blue
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
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