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Review of chapter "I'm not Naked" from (Past Donor)MyTia
Review:
Yay - some bedroom action! Event if it was not the kind of action most people would have expected ;)
Comments from author:
heheh... glad it was unexpected... even if it was not unexpected. thanks for your review.
Review By [(Past Donor)MyTia] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I'm not Naked" from grd
Review:
This story is just too funny. Loving it. Hope Jon/Dawn do get together. Their similar origins is too funny.
Comments from author:
yeah, they fit... glad you like... so very glad... happy dance
Review By [grd] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from AllenPitt
Review:
hm, Dawn is acting pretty recklessly, had to know she'd get caught by Buffy on this one. May have been a desperation move, ie she could see Jon was attracted, but running for the hills . plus maybe she's just plain ready to make it clear to Buffy that's she's all grown up now...
Anyway, I'm sure Buffy and Jack will handle this like calm, rational adults. Heh.
* You know, the Key as a ball of green energy--kinda/sorta sounds like an Ascended being who's lost her memory. Heh. If she got it back, maybe she'd know how to power up ZPMs.... maybe that's what the key does, in fact....
Comments from author:
I think calm and rational have left the building.... in Jon's truck!

those are some interesting ideas... hmmm.... hmmm...

Who knows what the key knows...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from (Past Donor)MyTia
Review:
“Where’s Dawn?”

Uh oh...

After that question at the end of the chapter I'm really looking forward to the next posting;)
Comments from author:
fasten your seat belts... it's gonna be a bumpy night!
Review By [(Past Donor)MyTia] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from AzrielSunHawk
Review:
COOL!!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! :-)
Review By [AzrielSunHawk] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Yikes! I have the feeling that only Thor or the Nox would have the chance at defusing the upcoming explosion.
Comments from author:
I used to know someone who told me that when a whirling dervish started to whirl... i should get out of the way and let it whirl... I'm sure Thor would be somewhere in another galaxy far far away... with the nox should they need a ride... they, after all were the ones who buried the gate... hehe.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from Mcspender
Review:
Just found out this fic, and it's quite a riot=).
By the way, I don't really think this is the best moment for Dawn & Jon... 'cause The-Short Overprotective-Older(Favorite-Solving-Problem-Method-Is-Violence)Sister-is-gonna-walk-on them-doing-good-things-that-look-bad-to-jealous-siblings =)(Ran out of breath just reading loud this attempt at Willow-babble=P).

Cool series, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
yes, but this is Dawn... mouthy Dawn... and Jon... aka Jack... should be VERY Interesting... poor neighbors...
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Poor Jack I do beleive he has met his match in the snarkyness area... lol.

Glad to see Willow and Sam starting to get along again, even if there isn't any pairing between those two, they still would be a blast as friends!

Now where is Dawn!?!? (EG)

Wispr
Comments from author:
Yes, snark is us for the scoobies! Poor Jack indeed!

Willow and Sam. Hmmm... that would be fun, but nope, not this time. They will be great as friends, though... I think that the SGC would be a really great fit for a girl like Willow!

Dawnie? (tries to look innocent) I think she's off making trouble somewhere.

Blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from immortalwizardelffan
Review:
Ruh-roh, B and J jrs. gonna get in trouble LOL.
Comments from author:
It sure looks that way... smirk...
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from AllenPitt
Review:
The obvious solution is for Willow to do the same thing she did when there were two Xanders-- merge the two together ; you'd get a Colonel O'Neill who was in his 30s.
Ok, maybe not so obvious. But don't you just want to put them in separate rooms and do experiments? Buffy will certainly want to get a knife and start making incisions when she finds out what Jon & Dawn are doing
Comments from author:
That would be funny... 30 year old O'Neill... "does anyone else wanna lock them in a room and do experiments" channeling Riley

hehe..

no not so obvious...

Yeah, writing the scene with Buffy and her interesting discoveries... Poor Jon. Poor Jack... Poor Buffy... Yes! Poor Buffy!

heh heh...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
(Giggles madly) Oh bloody hell that was a great chapter, love how you did Jon's thoughts. Such a sweet mixture of a 50 yr old Jack in a teenagers hormone laden body.

You do know with his experience Jon would be an invaluable addition to the Scooby gang... whereas Dawn with her flair with languages would be the same to the SGC.

You could say they would be the perfect people to bridge the two groups together and now that it looks like they're ready to 'lay' a nice solid foundation real soon... ;)


Wispr
Comments from author:
well when you see a chapter called laying a good foundation....

hehe
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Good chapter and cliff-hanger. Thanks for updating!
Comments from author:
you're totally welcome. glad you like

blue
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
ahhhh how sweet - kisses!
Comments from author:
sweet kisses.... but there's always consequences...
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Thanks for giving Jon a chapter mostly to himself! Looking forward to seeing what happens next with everyone.
Comments from author:
I think he may become a bigger character than i planned. i like being in his head... it's dark, warm and scary... and delightfully randy.

smirk. I like it here... think i'm going to have to stay a while... or come back soon...
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Take your time and dance with me" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Poor tortured Jon! Buffy really needs to cut the guy some slack and ease up. Maybe she'd listen to Teal'c's endorsement of Jon/Jack's character? And I just had a wicked thought, albeit an unoriginal one! Jon may not be able to head a team for the Air Force, but his unique qualifications would make him a *huge* asset to the new Council. Hope that's where you're heading with him. Fab work!
Comments from author:
we'll see... first Buffy and Jack have to call the war off... then Buffy and Teal'c have to... well... you know... or maybe i need to explain this to you?? smirk.

Jon... poor Jon... I feel his pain.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [18 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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