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Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from nightshadowlife
Review:
AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! I love this story so far!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! Does happy dance!
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from Marcel
Review:
Hmm... I didn't like this chapter. There's a reason "show, don't tell" is such a big rule. This feels like you just wanted to get rid of some stuff as soon as possible.

Will Ishta be a character in the story? If not, I suggest you remove that portion, at least, from this chapter - it is unlikely that we need to know anything about her.
Comments from author:
i appreciate your feedback. Ishta is not about whether she'll be in the story. Ishta is about understanding Teal'c. Just as Drey'auc is... This story starts soon after that episode (Birthright). it's natural that if he's looking at his life, he's going to look at something that made a big impact. Anyway, it's my opinion that it works. I'm doing the best I can with what canon gave me. Fleshing Teal'c out, means getting into who he is inside, because he's very internal.


I think why Ishta is there is that she's one side of the coin, Sam's the other... Buffy's both... no better way to convey that, in my opinion.

Peace

Blue.

Hope you are enjoying the rest.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I would say that you were back on track with the Teal'c/B part of the story. More, soon!
Comments from author:
Yes, ma'am! I'll keep working on it.

peace, thanks
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from AllenPitt
Review:
well, at least the chain of misunderstandings is slowing down. both groups are strong willed, used to saving the world and regarding everybody else as 'them' vs 'us', so it's hard for them to get along with other teams that are like them.
At this point.... I'd kind of like the scoobies to see somethings about the SG-1 team that impresses them. Maybe a teleport to Daedalus...or something like that.
Comments from author:
i think that can be arranged... we'll see whose reality shows up in spades first. I think once they trust each other they'll get along with each other as well as the scoobies do as a whole... there will be drama... but also love and laughter. being SG-1, there was less drama... but jack and diane, oops i mean Jack and Jill... no that's not right either... Right, Buffy and spike... no, no no... Buffy and Jack will learn to work together, and the rest will fall in line... they've already started working together anyway... Giggle... sorry... I'm in a silly mood. Reviews make me feel good... especially the happy kind!
KthnxBlue
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from mokahi
Review:
Read this for the first time today. You've really drawn me in. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad. Hope to have at least a few more chaps before the weeks over.

peace & thanks
Review By [mokahi] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Sweet ending beat for this chapter. Thanks bunches for sharing and continuing.
Comments from author:
glad you like. smiles... your feedback means a lot. thanks for taking the time.

Blue
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I'm not Naked" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very vivid. Nice combo of arguing and physical description.
Comments from author:
thank you. it's hard to get the balance right some times.

B
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diminishing Returns..." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool!
Comments from author:
grin!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from ripple
Review:
Augh internet borked my review. Just wanted to give you a thumbs up for the argument last chapter - thought Buffy and Jack's immature clash was realistic. More importantly, they got told, they listened, and they weren't made to look like idiotic, inferior characters in the process (it seems half the time when a character makes a mistake in fanfic, they're made to look a complete ass, because the author dislikes them. The other cliche you've avoided here is having one side win the pissing match, which suggests that a. pissing matches are totally reasonable ways to settle issues when two world-saving groups meet, and b. one group is superior to the other). Your way makes for a much better story :). Sorry for the rant - nice work, is my point.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry about you getting borked! Haven't heard that expression in a while. This site's been wonky today, DKW.

I'm glad you liked the overall picture. I think some were afraid I was going to turn it into a bash fic, but I don't do bash fic. I think the best people make mistakes, and if they're really quality people, they're better for coming out the other side. I don't have any particular axe to grind. I have a few favorites, but i don't 'play' favorites in my fics, though I tend to write about them more.

Usually i just don't bother to write about characters I don't like, especially one in particular, but in one of my other fics, though I do kill her off in the end, she dies a hero's death. (write me if you want to know who). You'll have to read all the way to the end b/c I haven't published that part yet! I'm not saying which fic either... at least not here.

Anyway, IMO, people are people, and it takes all sorts to make the world. if we were all the same it would bore me to tears.

Sometimes in my life, the people who've ended up teaching me the most were the people i didn't like or even respect. Sometimes I still didn't like them after the lesson. Sometimes l learned from their mistakes, sometimes I just got to know them and sometimes, they just did something *amazing* I would not have expected.

If you're true to characters in your writing, and try to understand their motivations, they're like that too... which is why that chapter about my least favorite character is one of my favorite pieces of my own writing... ever.

Thanks for your review. It is appreciated.
Review By [ripple] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was pure Teal'c... you really captured the very deep thinker he is. Love the ending scene!

Wispr
Comments from author:
So glad... he's such a good person... in a really deep, endless sort of way... and very complex. I hope I can keep discovering his depths.

blue
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Love the Buffy & T pairing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad.

blue
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Wish You Peace" from Aeryn
Review:
phew, getting back on track with T. This fic is like chocolate, very moreish
Comments from author:
glad you're liking it and want more... I've been a fan of Teal'c for a very long time, and always wanted to see him have a bigger role in fics... i think he's hard to read, so he gets a very small place on the page where his presense isn't as easy to convey as it is on screen. Also, people tend to write what they know...

Peace

More soon

Blue
Review By [Aeryn] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's got to be a morning after" from Mcspender
Review:
So... Buffy likes Teal'c... nice =).
And at last, someone told Buffy & Jack how immature was their behavior; I mean someone has to be the mature one in that household.

See ya!!!.
Comments from author:
every now and then someone has to call us on our crap... Xander and Daniel decided it was their turn to call time out.

peace
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's got to be a morning after" from PATM
Review:
By the end of this chapter is was laughing continuously. Jon and Dawn!!!
Comments from author:
glad you liked it. smile
Review By [PATM] • Date [19 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's got to be a morning after" from Thedruid
Review:
Huh, well, that's one way to settle an arguement. Hopefully cooler heads will prevail later, and you don't see something like this happen in many fanfictions. Or real life for that matter.
Comments from author:
Sometimes someone has to call a halt when the kids get to squabbling! smile.

Blue
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [19 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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