Oooooo this has soooo much potential to be a great series. Please tell me you're going to continue in another fic and write about them helping each other.
Gotta agree with the other reviewer, this needs an update! The other possibility would be to see this as a sort of prequel to 'The Essence of Us' by Sheilynn. Other than he knows her name now and he didn't in the other story. But they do sort of tie together nicely.
Fab work there!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure I've read that fanfic, I'll definitely check it out to make sure I didn't impede on an existing plot. I do have an idea for a sequel, but we'll see how it goes. Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked this.
Review By [mmooch] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
GASP! SEQUEL!?! PLEASE!?!?! Pretty please with whipped cream, hot fudge, and a cherry on top!?! Yes...it was THAT awesome.
Comments from author:
I do have an idea for a sequel. I wrote it in such a way that it was possible, but I really don't want the idea to seem overdone. So, while I will try to iron it out as soon as possible, I also don't want to rush it. I am really glad you enjoyed it though. That makes it all worth it!
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [15 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
