This story is still alive? Yeeeeeeeaah!
Great to see you still have plans for it... and are acting on them.
;)

Yeah, I'll post a note in the last chapter next time I edit something, but this got a bump because I split a chapter in half. Tomorrow or the next day, I'll format the text up and insert a new 4000 word chapter in between Chapter 3 and Chapter 3, Part 3. Appropriately named... Chapter 3, Part 2.

Huh, well that was a redo chapter right? Rather nice to see something for this, it is one of my favorites. I particularly like the whole dark meat thing, funny in a rather morbid way.

Actually, just me splitting Chapter 3 in half so I can add a piece between the rest soon. I'm working on a substantial upgrade + continuation and I'm airing bits and pieces ahead of time just to see how people react.

Logan is going to flip when he finds out they went without him.

I hate to be one of the many that use the phrase, but here, it most definitely feels warranted. This has to be one of the best Xander-centered fics (albeit unfinished) I've read to date. Beyond that, I really love the world you've begun to weave around him, and the way you managed a rather fresh take on the Halloween fic.

I enjoyed the play between Xander, Cordy and Willow, as it felt very true to the characters and the situation throughout.

And I've gotta say, I adore you're portrayal of Emma, the Cuckoo's and X-23. You've managed to completely knock me for a loop with each and how they've played out so far.

On that not, I just pray, hope, and plead that this fic continues forwards. It's a great story, and I'd like to see how it keep on walking down the road it's already on.

Just between you and me? There may just so happen to be a story called "Blue Belle 2012" posted soon. With chapters that are a thousand words longer each, streamlines a few plot lines, introduces four new characters at a minimum (Carol Danvers, Rachel Grey, Jessica Drew, and Julia Carpenter), and then continues onward out past the end of the current material with text I never managed to post to this story and then finishes out the outline I originally set down for this story.

Just checked to see if the story was maybe, maybe updated. No joy. How about a bribe? If you update I'll give a really good rating. Nudge, nudge, wink, wink. Write some more.

Actually, I have been poking at this as I transition my file archives from Word's proprietary DOCX format to the more full-featured (even if it's just as proprietary) Scrivener file format. You might get your wish soon.

I so want to see more of this. Update soon!

I ever so miss this story... I hope you update it again someday...

just read the whole story in one go to then notice it hasnt been updated in a year. extremely unacceptable. update now please.

Ch 13: They'd wanna smurf your smurf really smurfing hard.

Liked the rest too, but it's too late to offer any more comments.

Anyway, Update soon.

Ch 8: "Yes, dear, I'm eating a Muppet. They're very juicy if you cook them right." ... "Well, I am really good at swallowing. I've had plenty of people tell me that, too."... I had to stop reading so I could breathe.

Ch 9: "The only ironic thing about that song is it's called 'Ironic' and it's //not about anything ironic// That's quite ironic."

Ch 10: Ni! And the argument at the mansion. I think you planned this whole story to create that.

Ch 11: With the green silk of her dress stretched tight across her derriere, it was like watching two angry midgets wrestle in a gunny sack. - LOL, I wrote that one down for future use somewhere.

Ch 12: Can't Mystique just create her own clothes? And tell Willow that I thought it was funny too.

Ch 4: LOL, disturbance in the force. Another at the Big Mac reference.

Ch 5: LOL @ Moobys. (just transform before you go there)

Ch 6: It's not paranoia if they really are out to get you. Here here. And those last 6 paragraphs were hilarious too.

Ch 7: Ministique. twelve step program.

Did you know there's a "Report to Moderator" link on your story? Isn't that like reporting a police officer to his partner?

It's an automated part of the engine that generates every single story page on the site. My stories can even be quarantined; I do it on occasion so I can fix things without people wandering into half-edited stories.

Decent enough rationalization for Xander staying female.

LOL. "This one time at band camp." And the toaster oven.

Only thing I didn't like was Cordy's soliloquy. Sure, it was needed background, but... just seemed like too much at once.

It's a good temporary reason and then we find out later why he can't turn into Xander either.

Great story so far. I hope to see more. There are so few stories like this out there.

Please continue! This is turning into an all-out Marvel-fest, isn't it? And what will Logan do when he and Willow meet?

CT