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Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Looks like the start of another winner here! Heeheehee...Xander and blue boobies! heeheeheeheeheehee....
Comments from author:
Aren't those a type of bird?
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from manic
Review:
This was extremely amusing, and a neat idea. i look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Me too. Just need to write it now.
Review By [manic] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from pcody
Review:
Cool idea, a good portrayal of involuntary abilities. I look forward to seeing what you do next.

-PC
Comments from author:
Me too. Now I need to figure out what's up next.
Review By [pcody] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Harry
Review:
I see a crossover with the X-Men movies here! And Xander has become Mystique! Things are about to become VERY interesting for the X-Man here!!!
Comments from author:
X-Woman?
Review By [Harry] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Bobboky
Review:
awesome work
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from AllenPitt
Review:
This can't end well. . With his luck, there's no 'cure' or rather it'd be "maybe Ethan could help, but try finding him"... then again this could be really useful to the team....Weird he can only shift to female forms, presumably he only got part of Mystique's ability (note he can't shift the clothes also... or maybe that's something he can learn over time?)
I can just see it now: Willow fakes up ID for him, and her "twin cousin Wendy" enrolls in the school. Still, could have been worse. Could have gone as the Blob......
*ok, I'm being way too analytical but--if he changes into someone does he get their powers? I assume not, ie he can't become Buffy then be a slayer... how about various demon types?
Comments from author:
He can take male forms; the only form he's locked out of at present is his own. He's just limited to forms he knows well, such as Buffy, Cordelia, Willow, and Jesse, and he doesn't want to trample on Jesse's memory any further by running around in his body, so Willow it is.

And he can use the shifting to reinforce his body, meaning he could be as strong and fast as Buffy, and he can grow bone claws or wings or something, but strictly speaking he does NOT acquire abilities when he takes a person's form. Like how Mystique could mimic Wolverine's claws but his sliced through hers because she couldn't actually mimic adamantium. He can also heal faster because of the nature of his body.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from ladyfiana
Review:
Good chapter. I don't imagine he's going to have an easy time adjusting to a female body. Especially that body. Is Xander going to have any of Mystique's fighting ability or memories? Hope you write more soon.
Comments from author:
Willow is just a means to an end for the time being. He'll be in another form soon enough.
Review By [ladyfiana] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from russle
Review:
heh, you said that you don't like dc, so why not make him wonder woman in marvel? :-)
Comments from author:
Because that didn't match the challenge. It was doing Marvel characters IN Marvel; I just chose the movieverse and the Robert Kelly connection for evil giggles.
Review By [russle] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Hawkehunt
Review:
I loved it from the moment I read the summary.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I found the challenge floating around and had to do it.
Review By [Hawkehunt] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting start, I hope you'll be able to add more soon.
Though Mystique is able to get clothes when she shifts.

When might you update "Tha-at! Tha-at! Dude Looks Like a Lady!"?
Comments from author:
Xander's not Mystique.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
Very nice, I'm just hoping the poor guy doesn't get used as a mannequin for the girls when they go shopping and want to see if that dress makes their butt look big.
Comments from author:
Well, he can do most of Cordy and a good bit of Buffy, but Willow's the only one he can do a near perfect imitation of at the time being. He's not Mystique; he lacks the training to use his powers creatively (making up his own forms) and doesn't quite know how to fill in the blanks on real people. Unless Cordy or Buffy wants to get butt naked for his inspection (which Willow HASN'T; note the near perfect bit) so he can master their forms, there's probably no mannequin time in his future.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from cary
Review:
"How the hell does Xander keep landing himself in these situations?"

Shouldn't this be; Why does Joe keep putting Xander in these situations? :)
Comments from author:
Because I'm evil.
Review By [cary] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from TAO
Review:
So...does this mean Xander might run into the real Mystique?

That could be amusing.
Comments from author:
Mystique, among other mutants.
Review By [TAO] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Awesome stuff.
Comments from author:
Thanks. ^_^
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 01" from Jarvey
Review:
I agree with CPTSkip...

Re:

Why not both? ;)
Comments from author:
That Xander's gonna get lesbian action or that my fics induce pervertedness?
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [21 May 09] • Not Rated
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