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Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from spk
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Loved Buffy's showdown with Kennedy and Cordy's "welcome home" at the end. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [29 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from drago
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Hum in chapter 2 there was an easier and more belivable way of letting them out of prision. Any compentent lawer would got them off or at least in juvy hall. I should know my stupid sister killed someone in CA when she was 17 and her lawer was able to get a appeal based on the fact that she was minor at the time and didn't receive counsel while being questioned. The appeal judge ruled that as she had spent 3 months in general pop of the state prision that was adequate punsihment as she should have only got juvey.
Review By [drago] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from AllenPitt
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huh... kind of surprised she didn't take the knife away & break K's arm in the process. Also, if being a 'murderer' is so bad, why is Willow ok with K. trying to become one? Weird.
It occurs me to also that if B's powers are unbound, Willow is going to get jealous, and maybe start to feel a bit useless... (she's very insecure about stuff like that). hm, it's also pretty sad to see W & X both that against Buffy. X. I can understand, he's always either a best friend or worst enemy to someone, there's no middle ground with him... I think though that Willow might realize that she made a mistake with Buffy at some point...
So... I wonder what Giles wants to say. "Please don't kill the potentials" .. hm... does anyone yet realize that Buffy isn't a Summers?
And most of all--how come B's real family has never contacted her? Wondered if she was still alive? etc?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
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I really like this so far. Keep up the good work. Update soon please.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [28 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from payday
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I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see how this unfolds. I like the daughter part and how Buffy is a halliwell. I'm guessing they don't know that she is the slayer. I like how faith and Buffy are close. PMS :)
Review By [payday] • Date [27 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from spk
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I am definitely intrigued right now. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [25 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from CPTSkip
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Bad bard! Terrible cliffy! No bard biscuits for you! I am still totally confused about what is going on. But my confusion is a really good thing. So many questions and puzzles and we get to look forward to finding out all the answers! We do find out all the answers, right? Eventually? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [25 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
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huh... so, do the Halliwells know what happened to her, or do they just think she's off "living a normal life"... with maybe slaying added in? It'd be kind of weird if they didn't know... Maybe they thought she was 'safer' out of their lives?
* If you want to get weird, you could have Faith turn out to be Phoebe's first child, by Cole, the one she thinks she lost.... just a thought!
First Evil at the door? Just as an intro....
So --this is going to be like when Faith showed up in S7? At least then she had Willow's backing, which meant Xander went along, and nobody else really knew anything about Faith. In this situation, W/X, who all the potentials probably look up to, will be against them, and probably turn everyone against them at least at first...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
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huh. Ok, First Evil in Sunnydale and Jasmine in LA...check. Next I'd love to know why both Willow and Xander turned against buffy. I could understand them turning against Faith, but Buffy also?! Hm. maybe the wounds from her 'runaway' at end of S2 never really healed? They never had the "Amends" episode where Xander reconciled with Buffy?
Is Joyce still alive? If not, who's got custody of B's daughter?........ Oh wow. Is there a Dawn? It would be great if there's a Dawn Summers, but Buffy doesn't know her, but everybody thinks Buffy should. That would be very weird. OR Dawn is somebody else, ie related to Willow or somebody like that (ie 'sent to someone who could protect her' )--
So this will be like when Faith showed up in S7, only twice as tense?
And you haven't even brought the Halliwells in yet, neat.
Comments from author:
ok the First Evil will be in Sunnydale but no Jasmine cause i need Angel and his group in Sunnydale. The other evil would be the Source for the Charmed ones. They turned against Buffy and Faith because they see them as murderers. Maybe there is some animosity between the group but thats the main reason. Dawn is still Buffy sister she will just be born into the Halliwell Family. Ok now I'm confused are u happy that i haven't brought in the Halliwells or not? But they will appear in the third chapter. Thanx for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from CPTSkip
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I like your story! I'm still not sure about Buffy's new name or names. I hope this doesn't mean Joyce wasn't her mom. I loved Joyce. If it is the First causing all sorts of Hell, you need to explain how It got to manifest in the mortal world since the only reason It was able to on the show was Buffy being brought back to life upset the Universal Apple Cart. And since she didn't die saving Dawn, how is Firsty here? And is Dawn here?

Wardens in the US can't just release prisoners. But if Giles and Wes got the Governor of California to issue the Two a pardon, everything is totally kosher. Got to say, I really love the 'Sisterhood of Slayers' vibes going on between Buffy and Faith. Somehow after four years in prison, I don't think Buffy is going to be quite as prissy as she was on the show. Lol! I look forward to more of your intriguing story.
Comments from author:
Ok thanks for the review. Um Joyce will be in the story but she is no longer Buffy's mom, she is more like a really close friend of the Halliwell family. Why Buffy is living with her will be explained in the next chapter. Even though i changed Buffy's name she will still be called Buffy, Changing her name just showed that she is a different character while still being buffy. Dawn is still in the picture. Now with the First, since there are many great forces of good i think i will use the death of Prue when time was messed with. Since Piper didn't die and Prue did it will mess with the balance because of the back and forwardness. Thanks for the info on wardens, i'll make sure to change that. I think i will have Giles and Wes say that they went to the Governor of CA first and then the Warden. Yea i was really iffy on the relationship between Buffy anf Faith but i figured after being together for four years the prolly burried all the hachetts. Thanks for your ideas and for the review. :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
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I figure the scoobies + Angel managed to blow up the mayor at graduation, but with a higher body count, maybe? Though it might be interesting if the now demon-mayor is allied with the Source or something like that.
Did Buffy's friends turn against her after she was convicted? For that matter how were they convicted? Not enough evidence unless they confessed. And only one one killed him. Maybe it was 'one killed, the other was an accessory' ?
So... if they have a visitor then it maybe means they're out legally, won't have to escape?
Comments from author:
You are following my thinking very well. Now i'm going to be putting up the second chapter as soon as i can so i dont want to give it all away, but i will tell you this. The girls did confess and were convicted of accidental homicide. Your other questions are answered in the next chapter but idk it that one is so i wanted to give you that answer. Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spk
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Definitely an intriguing story idea. Good start. Can't wait to see what you do with this. :)
Review By [spk] • Date [22 May 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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Interesting start so far. Please continue.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Anzobre
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It's interesting so far. It's something that I think hasn't been written about a lot but the question then is: if both Faith and Buffy were in jail who took out the Mayor? I'm not asking about the daughter because I figure that's going to be one of the things you introduce later.
Comments from author:
I believe that your question will be addressed in the second chapter but i bet you can guess who the father is. Lets put it this way, Buffy was 18 when she was arrested so just think about the relationships she had around that time. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Anzobre] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
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