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Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Dragonwolftiger
Review:
Oh I almost forgot Walsh will never not be an Idiot. Happy to see you've kept Riley, Forrest and Graham on the side of the angels.
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Dragonwolftiger
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Great story, I vote send her to England for five years of study with her powers bound and if she still sees 'do as I will' instead of 'do as I should' then remove all of her power or geas her to feel all unjust spells that she performs AKA they never reach the target, she is the automatic recipient of unjust spells.
Comments from author:
that sounds like a practitioners answer, do you practice?
Review By [Dragonwolftiger] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Pardryll
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Great as usual, you've got a really good plot going. You already know my stance with Willow: Redemption!
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from Caliadragon
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Still loving this chapter. The scene with John was the best.


Thanks
Calia
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from drago
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Well you could redeem her after a few nice problems.
Review By [drago] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Pardryll
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Redeem her, I don't generally like MagicTox!Willow very much. She makes me want to go cry in snow.
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from bex
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On the willow issue? Get Cas to burn her. Done
Comments from author:
well i don't want to kill her.... maybe slight smiting?
Review By [bex] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from Caliadragon
Review:
This was a wonderful chapter and I love the way that you combinded vision and nightmare.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
that is exsactly how i saw this nightmare going in my head. of course this nightmare is going to reemerge until the halloween chapter (baring that i dont get writers block and have to write that chapter after halloween, i so want to post it on the day)
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [1 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from Caliadragon
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I loved the scene between Dean and Aya and hope that you have it a vision. Perhaps one shared with Xander? As for Willow, well, I actually love Willow and to be honest I usually go back and forth with her. Usually though I see her as a *part* of Xander. There can be no Xander without Willow and no Willow without Xander. I realize that Xander and Aya are twins and that you have put Tara with someone else. This has left Willow without her two most stabilizing forces in Canon. So if at least one of them cannot connect with her I can't see how she would have a reason to come back from the darkness.

Reading that I'm not sure if I answered your question or not. LOL!

Anyway, am continuing to love the fic and look forward to the next part.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
if i told you it wouldn't be a surprise. but no I'm not planning on Dean coming back until the Halloween chapter. Aya right now is dealing with a combination of guilt that he couldn't do anything to help Dean and Sam's guilt he couldn't save his brother. sucks being an empath.

As for Willow. i like her, i just didn't like her when she started using magic. if she really was a witch someone would have kicked her ass by now. personally i blame Giles, because he should have been teaching her, or at least found someone to teach her. he should know enough about magic to know that. that's why Willow is a bit power addled, she isn't thinking clearly, and she wont until something kicks her in the butt. that spell she placed on Aya and Xander could have gone wrong, she could have killed them; but it shows how far she's gone that it doesn't occur to her that she could have. it might take seriously hurting someone to make her see. which is why I'm doing the poll, when -not if- she hurts someone should Willow realize what she's done?

i really need someone to bounce with me!
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [30 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from DennSedai
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I'm split on the Willow issue. I mean it would be nice to see her get help, but I think it's a tad too soon, as she needs to hit rock bottom first and find out exactly how messed up she is, before she would accept the help, like any type of addiction.

Maybe have some of what she tries to do back fire on her in a very spectacular way or even have Hecate step in, since you already have Ares showing up a few times...*smirks* I can just imagine the 'discussion' between Willow and Hecate *snickers*
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from drago
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Still think it would make for more funnies had Xander stayed straight. Then him and his brother would a ton load of material to mess with the other with and cause trouble.
Comments from author:
if it makes you feel better think of Aya as a girl. i do....lol
Review By [drago] • Date [29 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Caliadragon
Review:
I love this story and I am thrilled to see that you have involved Forrest and Xander. I also love that you are going to save Dean and end the demon addicted Sam storyline.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
i don't even get the demon addiction storyline, but since it has to do with the current season and the End of Days i decided to skip it. gonna have enough problems with Adam and Glory later, which is as far into Buffy cannon that I'm willing to go.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [28 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from DennSedai
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Yay another chapter *smiles* Yep, Willow has her own world view and has for a long time. *sighs* She'll eventually learn, as will Aya and others I expect.
Comments from author:
that was kinda the point of Willow not seeing the error of her ways when Tara pointed them out. in real life people don't do that, and in real life things don't always get punished which is why also Aya didn't get into as much trouble as he probably should have. people don't change unless they want to, and people don't learn unless they have the lesson thrown into their face. Willow will get more chances and Aya is a little more willing to watch his actions, dispite probably doing something just as stupid again.

to Err is Human after all.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [27 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kayron
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I'm still enjoying this story! I like the way the Sacred Twins are incorporated into the cannon storylines. Buffy and her demon roommate. Buffy and the vampire thief Sunday. Having an ice cream/movie fest chick flick night that includes Aya, and I liked that grandpa/grandma moment with Jacob.
Comments from author:
do you like that while Aya and Xander change a lot of things, like Xander helping Buffy feel better about her self, that they don't solve everything. like the twins don't kick Sunday's ass for Buffy, but they are still there for her in Scoobie fashion. saying that, next chapter you'll find that the twins can get into as much trouble saving the day as Jack can.

i loved the grandpa/grandma comment too, I'm not sure how many people remember Salmac is female.

any quotes from this story you particularly loved? I'm looking for fave quote, i might the only one to think stuff is funny.....or good....
Review By [kayron] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Chaoskitten
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re: Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Chaoskitten
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You could always go very old and add in Methos (Highlander) as Xanders man.
Comments from author:
ill put that on my list of choices. any other suggestions?

Hmms- besides Alucard *erm* or Wolverine/gambit (or both) heh. . . why not have him end up in a trio??? *coff* not that it helps with the choices any.
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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