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Review of chapter "Mistakes" from Swordchucks
Review:
I like this story a lot. I've always been a fan of gender switch stories (with the exception of "guy into girl goes after guys" fics). This one is especially fun. I like how bad Xander is at keeping his identity a secret, too.

Also, I notice you're looking for a beta (or so the little bar tells me). If so, I'm willing to help out.
Review By [Swordchucks] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Mistakes" from CPTSkip
Review:
I am enjoying your story a lot. It reads like a strange combination of comic story and Buffyverse story. I look forward to more four color action.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mistakes" from deathgeonous
Review:
Fun. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mistakes" from (Past Donor)ridert
Review:
nice new chapter kind of sad that you still had to kill Faith's watcher but then if you hadn't she wouldn't have really had a reason to run to good old Sunnyhell. interesting choice of villians as well Victor Freeze and the Gentleman Ghost something of an odd couple but will beinteresting to see how they react to the Dale or should I say how the Dale reacts to them.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it and I knew I had had to do it too. Originally, I was just going to have Gentleman Ghost as the villian for the next chapter but then I got looking on DC Wikia and Mister Freeze kinda shot at me and I couldn't resist putting him in here.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Mistakes" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
Nice chapter.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [19 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from AonGealach
Review:
I love this story so far! I love the idea of Xander becoming Zatanna's "daughter" and growing as close to her as the real thing. Zatanna always seemed to really need someone to love who would never leave her and a daughter would always be her family so she would be unable to really leave. I am happy you made Xander more care-free as Zarina. I know she has some more and different responsibilities but she also seems more at peace with herself. I really am looking forward to the next update, so make it soon please!!!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [18 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from SamDragon
Review:
Pretty good.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from lorwen
Review:
This story is great...
Can't wait to read more...
:)
Review By [lorwen] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Interesting.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [16 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
What was Xander doing during missing months, in one word THERAPY. It is nice to see you weave elements of Buffy with the DC wolrd in every fresh manners.

Peace
Comments from author:
ROTFLMAO! I like how you put words together and I thank you for the compliment.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the first chapter, it just seemed like you needed to fill in the months before going backstage at the performance. Please do your best to add more soon.
Comments from author:
They will be filled in over the course of the story. Mainly flashbacks but they'll still be filled in.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from zafaran
Review:
This was interesting. I'm looking forward to finding out how the-character-formerly-named Xander is going to work out what he's going to do about his old friends, and where things are going to go in the future. Nice visit with Faith, by the way. It will be nice for her to still have her Watcher and not have to flee in terror after watching Linda(?) tortured to death. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it and I will try to update as soon as I can.
Review By [zafaran] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from Susly
Review:
This is somewhat interesting and well written, but the history of both the Marvel and DC universes makes the need for a slayer irrelevant. The origin stories just don't mix.

IMO the best kinds of crossovers with these characters is AU where for example Xander would wind up in the DCverse somehow. Or the chaos magic reaches into other realities.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the compliment but IMO I don't see how the histories of both universes DC or Marvel not needing a Slayer. The origin stories don't need to mix because since this exists in a crossover universe where the DC Universe and the Buffyverse. It's already AU because of that.

I kinda agree with you about the crossovers though.
Review By [Susly] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from cjcold
Review:
Interesting.

At first I thought it would be the standard Xander turning into his costume, but the surprise of the Justice League being real in that universe and his acceptance as Zatanna's daughter makes this interesting. The snippet with Jon apparently being the son of Canary and Green Arrow is interesting. I loved the part where Kyle was praying no one dressed as him that night.

I would like to see Xander's reaction when he first woke up, met Zatanna and also started his new life.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you think its interesting. Zatanna, I think, would make a great mom. Jon, being the magically created son (Well via chaos magic altering his DNA) of Oliver Queen and Dinah Lance, was more of a way to turn him into a hero than rather a villian best known in Season Six. Plus, do you think that Dinah (Since she's unable to have children) would let Jon go? With Kyle, that part was for humor. Maybe I should add in the humor tag on this story...

I will show flashbacks over the course of the story detailing Xander's reaction.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Raziel
Review:
Great so far looking forward to your next update.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliment.
Review By [Raziel] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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