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Review of chapter "Blackest Night: Part Three: Dawn" from LFW
Review:
I have not read this since Willows power was sealed, so I am a bit curious as to how hyenaXander did not return, unless he is not part of her? I am confused by hyenaXander running around.
Otherwise I enjoyed the whole fic and I have to admit that Justice League Sunnydale and Sunnydale Big Band are impressive ideas.
Although, they are not as impressive as your first idea, which was Xander's costume.
Hoping for more. Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night: Part Three: Dawn" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the new chapter, I hope you'll post more soon.

-What fanfic of yours will you work on next?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night: Part Three: Dawn" from Stormrider
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I've been waiting for a new chapter with this. A lot of good fights. Loved how Dawn was talking to Buffy about her knowing the JLS members not to mention her hero Zarina. This is the start on how Dawn became Zarina's protege ( not to mention try to join JLS every chance she gets). The fights were good. Spike's reaction to Drusilla's dating Jason was funny. I think the arguments are going to continue between them. Not to mention I was right when I said Spectrum would be a big part in this, not to mention the people who came Lanterns. Since Jessie is a green lantern, is that the same Jessie from the verse that had Buffy never coming to Sunnydale? If so, I would love to see him join JLS I think he'll be a great member.

The introduction of Parallax and Predator was good, great fight, and I loved the fights that was in it. Love to see how JLS and the other group get back to normal. I love to see how this ends and how you do the sequel.

Speaking of Blackest Night did you read the last issue of Blackest Day, and it's shocking ending? I bet you never expected that to happen. Love to see how Brightest Day will continue. I also got some news, did you know Zatanna will have her own ongoing series. They did a preview in the last part of Blackest Day, along with other new series that will be premiering. (Including a new Birds of Prey series) What do you think about that. Personally I can't wait for the Zatanna series.

Great fight, jokes and fun was had by all. Can't wait to see how it ends. keep it up
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Dawn will try to join the JLS at every opprotunity she can. I'm even planning a few scenes in Magician's Intiative (The upcoming sequel) where Dawn has to explain to one of her teachers why she was able to do an assignment on someone in the superhero/supervillan community to such detail.

Teacher: Ms. Summers, your assignment was quite detailed. I was wondering how you were able to accomplish it.
Dawn: (shrugs her shoulders) I just read some stuff off my teacher's laptop and talked to her about a few things.
Teacher: Who is your teacher?
Dawn: (smiles) Zarina Zatara, why do you ask?
Teacher faints.

Spectrum was a big part but I also forced her to confront one of her own fears in that she is too afraid of her power which is why she lost against Parallax. If she hadn't been afraid, she would have wiped the floor with Parallax.

Yes, that Jesse is the one from the Wishverse or in this case the Chaotica-verse. He will end up joining the JLS.

I'm glad you enjoyed the fights.
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [19 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night: Part Three: Dawn" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Interesting, the Predator's choice to let Zarina go. I guess, LOVE really does conquer all. I'm glad this story will continue.

Peace
Comments from author:
Being what the Predator was, it had no choice but to let Zarina go. I'm glad you liked the story.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackest Night: Part Three: Dawn" from AonGealach
Review:
Great next chapter. I love the way you finished it all. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [18 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Who Taunted Murphy?" from TwoBlackDragons
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Any particular reason you didn't have the Scooby's tell Zarina about what killed Joyce? Because quite frankly I think one of them would.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Uncovered Truth" from TwoBlackDragons
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Zarina is being hypocritical about Angel considering she could have dusted Dru and Spike.



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“But her mummy is the Mistress of Magic and she would ask her little friends who [where] capes to help find us.”


Should be

wear
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil author\muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a good story, so please stop being an evil author\muse.
Comments from author:
I've got Chapter 15 almost wrapped up so give me a couple of days.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [3 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from Markelo
Review:
I'm a bad rapper.
But I'll try to rap this review.
To all who will view
this review.

I say having to rhyme this review
is very hard to do.

Nice story! Hope to see some more!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from Dragonelf
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You have done a good job with this story so far and I am looking forward to read anything your plot bunny inspires you to this story.

::Gives the plot bunny a cup of Almond milk::

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When everyone is against you, it means that you
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [13 Mar 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from FlashFreeze
Review:
This is brilliant, i especially like this Blackest Night section. I can't help but imagine what if it had occured in the cannon series around series Seven. I've probably missed something obvious, but who's Warp? I don't remember him beinin the story before now, so is he a new character?
Review By [FlashFreeze] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from (Past Donor)ridert
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Have to say at the end of chapter 13 I was more than a bit unhappy with this story arc but you redeemed yourself quite well.
I also must say that it will be very interesting to see who if anybody you let keep their rings, Giles would be interesting and maybe Joyce. whatever you decide I will definitely keep reading and looking forward to more.
Review By [(Past Donor)ridert] • Date [3 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from CPTSkip
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Holey moley! I did not see ANY of that coming. More, please, more! Right now I am totally confused and really need some more information. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I loved your twist with weasly. I hope you'll post more soon.

-Even though Giles has a yellow ring his is still good, right?
Comments from author:
Giles is still good. The reason I gave him the yellow ring is because of his past as Ripper. The yellow ring doesn't seek out people who are fundamentally evil but rather those who are capable of instilling great fear. During the Sinestro Corps War story arc, Bruce Wayne almost became a member of the Sinestro Corps because Batman works primarily by instilling fear in criminals.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blackest Night Part Two: Midnight" from Blackguard
Review:
good chapter, not entirely certain how I am feeling about the army of lanterns flying around Sunnydale though, must think on that one.
Comments from author:
It won't be permanent.
Review By [Blackguard] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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