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Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Morgomir
Review:
Nice and feral. Keep up the great work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TruthIsWhatUMakeOfIt
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I gotta wonder why they didn't use more powerful characters. Aside from Magneto the rest aren't that powerful. Like Xander could have gone as Nate Grey X-Man or Franklin Richards.
Comments from author:
Two reason's really. One as an author I didn't think that the final fight would be very interesting if they just went in and demolished the First's army without any challenge. The other reason is that Xander would have been really reluctant to use any characters of extreme power levels after seeing what having a large amount of power had done to Willow during Season 6. He chose Giles as the person to have an extreme level of power because he felt that Giles could control it and deal with having the power.
Also you have to remember for the most part Xander doesn't really know that much about the other girls. The only ones he knows very well amongst the transformed are Giles, Willow and Anya. All the other girls he's only truly known them for the past 3 or 4 months. Honestly, if you had been Xander would you be willing to give the power of someone like the Phoenix to a teen that you had only known for 4 months. He logically chose characters that when working together would be able to get the job done and he wouldn't have to worry about them trying to destroy the world afterwords.
Review By [TruthIsWhatUMakeOfIt] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Iris" from Darklight
Review:
Like the fic, didn't know all of the characters, but could find out how they look and there powers are. Everybody got mentioned who they were going to get their powers from but Andrew, he got healing powers, who got Andrew turned into?

Nice mix of different comic powers, would had added Moonstone to the mix, with her back ground you had Andrew heal their bodies and her healing their minds and keep the peace in the group.

Nice twist of not only getting powers but also have their bodies turned into their character

Get more chapters out.
Comments from author:
OOps, sorry I forgot that I had deleted the part where I said who he had transformed into. Sorry about that. I'll either correct it in the next chapter or revise the current chapter where its mentioned who everyone is. Thanks for pointing that out.
But just so you know he was linked with the character Elixir from the most recent incarnation of the New Mutants. I thought the crossover would fitting.
Review By [Darklight] • Date [2 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Iris" from neverwill
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Cool. Faith actually gets a completely new start because of this. She can't be tied to anything physically or genetically, so clean record and no penalty for the jail break or the murder conviction.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Iris" from MistofRainbows
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Mutters F.U. for losing their magic and actually physically changing. It was an interesting story until then. Ah well thanks for the first four chapters. And good luck on your writing.
Comments from author:
For the most part the physical changes that I'm talking about in this chapter probably aren't as extreme as you think. Faith is actually the most physically changed, simply because this version of X-23 is actually Asian. And I'll explain more of what I mean by physically not being who they are anymore. I mean after all if you gift someone with superpowers would they be the same person physically that they were before the change. As far as mystically, I'm sorry it was always my intention to get rid of their magical side, and make them into something that neither the Powers or the First have ever had to deal with before. On a side note could you imagine what Willow would be like if I let her keep her magic. I mean how scary would that be, give the most powerful witch in the western hemisphere the added ability she would get from Sage, yikes.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Iris" from TweedWizz
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'Faith started, but then stopped as she looked down at herself, “Where the fuck are my tits?”'

Noooooo! Now she'll sink in the bath!

Not sure about some of the costume choices, but still a very entertaining story.
Review By [TweedWizz] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Iris" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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Xander chose Sabertooth over Wolverine? That makes no sense unless of course you were planning on a Faith/Xander pairing, in which case it makes perfect sense for the author to have chosen it for him.
Comments from author:
Actually the relationship I was looking more at is the kind of father/daughter relationship that Sabertooth/Blink had in the Age of Apocalypse story line. I guess I could have used Wolverine but then I would have had to either use Shadowcat or Jubilee to get the same kind of relationship that I was planning for. And unfortunately from what I remember from either character Shadowcat only had the attitude for the upcoming battle with the First in the Age of Apocalypse story line and Jubilee never had that attitude. Also I was already planning on using Blink so it was easy to choose Sabertooth over Wolverine. Also there have been some amazing authors already doing the Xander/Wolverine cross so I wanted to do something different. Plus the Sabertooth from AoA was a lot more group oriented that Wolverine.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedJedi
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So Dawnie is Iris; the goddess of Dawn. Fitting. Will Iris/Dawn be extending the offer of power to the other potentials? Post story end, are you considering a sequel, given that Shannon has Lila Cheney's power (She can teleport accross the universe at will) is it your intention to introduce the Scoobies to the SGC?

Peace
Comments from author:
Actually I've got this idea about how broad the Powers plans were that brought them to power bouncing around in my head. If I go through with it then I probably would lead to a second story in which the SGC would become involved.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Iris" from Morgomir
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Cool idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spell" from neverwill
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Well, I'm going to be optimistic and say of course Eris is enjoying the chaos the spell is generating and of course physical, metaphysical, and mystical changes are going to HURT the recipient. I'm just hoping Dawnie's OK.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spell" from copycatloki
Review:
Your choices are pretty good and well-rounded...also Xander as Sabretooth = OMG awesome! in my book
Comments from author:
Thank you, I kinda wanted someone that would be a good sparing partner for Faith/X-23 but didn't want Wolverine, because Xander/Wolverine has been done alot, but I've never seen Xander/Sabretooth.
Review By [copycatloki] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Spell" from GypsyDruid
Review:
WTF?!?!

OHHH, you gotta keep writing this one!
Review By [GypsyDruid] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spell" from BlueEyedJedi
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Well as they say; no pain, no gain. (At least that's the attitude I am choosing to take.) The next Chapter should be interesting.

Peace

P.S. Who did Andrew go as? The Mutant Morlock Healer (Name unrevealed)?
Comments from author:
His code name is Elixir. He was a member of the FoH before he found out that he was a mutant, actually he was helping them hunt down a mutant when his powers activated. I figured it was a good choice for a character that had been evil and was now working with the Slayer.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spell" from Morgomir
Review:
Cool choices. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Spell" from (Past Donor)mpop
Review:
Wow, I didn't think she would actually betray them. Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Ahh but did she?
Review By [(Past Donor)mpop] • Date [30 Jun 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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