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Review of chapter "Unanswered Questions" from JediKnight
Review:
You are doing a grteat job on the story, just please try and cut down on cliffhangers.
Comments from author:
Thanks Jedi, I'll try but no promises. I'm a slave to my muse and she's an evil taskmaster. :)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unanswered Questions" from SpacedCadet
Review:
At one point you have Tasha using a Taser, then a Phaser. Was Taser a glitch ?
Comments from author:
Buffy's side exploded in pain by what felt like a taser shot, sending a mild electrical shock through her body.

I was trying to convey what the phaser shot on stun would feel like to Buffy not that she was shot with a taser. Didn't mean to confuse.

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unanswered Questions" from CageFire
Review:
Another great and somewhat frantic chapter. It's been a while. Keep up the great work. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks CageFire. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unanswered Questions" from AllenPitt
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So ---full med scans for all. Multiple surprises in store. Willow, related closely to someone on the Enterprise; Faith/Buffy scanning as completely normal (?). Angel scanning as being dead--which now that I think of it, might well be taken as strong evidence of Q-involvement. What other explanation is possible, after all?
But the "Willow is a close relative" thing would be huge. Which then leads to, either Bev (or whoever) had a child that they lost, or ... not. i.e. is she (if it is her) aware of a missing infant or child, or is this a total surprise.
It's a good thing Anya isn't still a vengeance demon, that would make things even more confusing. Meanwhile they'll be going "Eugenics War?" what's that?? i.e. in Star Trek (tv) canon that all happened in the 1990s, I think, before their time.
Comments from author:
yeah, lots of test and scans and furrowed brows to last a life time, lol. Didn't they say around 1999 for the EW's though and doppelgangland was set in 99. Thanks for the review and your great idea Allen:)
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Let Slip The Dogs Of War" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on the new chapter, but I wish there was a little more to it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Let Slip The Dogs Of War" from AllenPitt
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Angel no doubt flash backing on that watery grave thing, as you noted. Ouch. But the hallucinations are fun, surely. Something out of Bosch... Boy, Beverly is going to be surprised by the tricorder readings. Meanwhile... was that Willow who stopped Faith? If so, she's going to have to bake her a lot of cookies.
This being Starfleet, hopefully at some point they're going to do gene scans of their visitors -after all, Faith seems like one of those Eugenics warriors from the bad old days, they'll want to check to see if they are... and that could lead to realizing who's related to who. Or is it whom? And then it gets really interesting. How exactly does one misplace a child, let alone into a different reality? Maybe "Q" was involved?
Comments from author:
Wow thats a good idea, I was wondering how I was going to get them to find out about Willow and her connection to one of the crew. If I decide to do that definite credit going to the amazing AllenPitt. Thanks for the review and your thoughts on things. :))
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [3 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from CageFire
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Interesting story, it's been quite some time since the last update though. I'm wondering exactly who willow's parents are supposed to be. I'm guessing beverly is one. Is wesley her twin brother?
Review By [CageFire] • Date [27 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from JediKnight
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Great work on the new chapter, but why stop right before the fight. I hope to read more soon.

-Edit: I'm not going to kill your muse; I'm going to make it wish it was dead(48 hours of Barney)

-Edit 2: I could make it 72 hours.
Comments from author:
My muse again, Sorry don't kill it please. :)

Edit: Dude, that's cruel and unusual punishment, LOL.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Genuka
Review:
Well that's a fight I don't want to miss! Worf might be able to ground and connect with Faith better than virtually anyone else on Enterprise. Looking forward to the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think so to. Now if I can write it as good as I see it in my head. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from AllenPitt
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Worf vs Faith should be fun. One problem is Faith will be fighting to kill, most likely. Then again if anyone on the Enterprise had to fight her, Worf is the guy. Hopefully someone will come along with a stunner and stop them. Although who knows, could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
Angel won't be pleased to find himself in a morgue, ouch.
Tricorder scan will be most confusing for poor Dr. Crusher--he's dead, but moving around.
Assuming they finally do a genescan of Willow, the big question of course is, how did a daughter of Dr. C's end up in Sunnydale?!
Comments from author:
Worf is definitely going to need some backup soon, but I think he needed to be knocked down a peg because of his thoughts on how weak humans are, LOL. Angel will be livid if not seriously damaged (think watery grave he couldn't get out of because of Conner) Not as bad or long but still torturous. Hopefully Beverly won't end up pulling her hair out or worse when things start to be revealed to her.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Pane
Review:
Spectacular story, one of the best I've ever read.

A showdown between Worf and Faith? It's going to end with one of them dead, at least one of them injured, or very possibly both of them naked.

The explanations that are going to need to happen are going to be hilarious. Not to mention Crusher's trying to figure out Angel's "condition".

Look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you like it. Hopefully the showdown will be epic. Hmmm nakedness sound intriquing and definite injuries to go around. I'm pretty sure Worf will have a lot more and need to be saved from a rogue slayer that doesn't play by the rules.

Yes Beverly will have a big headache coming, dealing with Angel and soon to be found long lost daughter. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Pane] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Eureka
Review:
GAHHH! Did you have to stop there? Faith and Worf fight! I wannna see!!! So that is how they explained Angel..Disease that makes him seem dead when "asleep" huh? Can't see what you come up with next!
Comments from author:
Sorry my muse is an evil dark bunny that likes to torture people with cliffhangers, Anya would be terrified. LOL thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from Genuka
Review:
Oh, dear. Wonder how security will react with a freaked out slayer on their hands? *snicker* I love the fact that no one's noticed yet that Willow is Beverly's daughter yet. *Snicker* More please!
Comments from author:
More coming soon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The chaos will be epic, I hope. LOL and as soon as the chaos dies down a bit then surprises will be revealed. Thanks for the review
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from Eureka
Review:
Hmm so Buffy is now awake, Troi is down, and Wills has to take care of her. Oh boy this is being set up for lots of laughs!
Comments from author:
Yes plenty of. But are you sure you got the right slayer? :)

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Hmmm. Might Willow be empathic? I am a bit surprised they don't just let her see her friends, it would aid with identification. Also Willow, from the numbers, ought to be able to guess that it's just the Scoobies. We'll put it down to emotional overload.

Thanks for writing.

Edit: She did? My bad. But thanks for clarifying.
Comments from author:
Well she saw only five come into sickbay two of them being Anya and Faith. She never saw Angel and don't know that he's there.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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