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The Child of the Mother (Beta'd & revised).

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Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Ohh, boy. Given Trelane, the Squire of Gothos, I think I know what Willow is.

Anya's spell is not at fault, it just let the Continuum know of Willow's existence.

I suspect that they have Willow on the most Q-plagued ship in the known galaxy so she can find her own answers.

(That, and said plague of a Q himself may be snarking back at all of us over the Marisa Picard fics by hijacking the author's Muse, but that's a bit closer to those cosmic headcases than I wish to be, so forget I said that, okay?!?)

Overall, this is of the strong. Please continue (while I beat Apocalypse bloddy for hijacking MY muse during the composition of this review).
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. That's a really good idea but alas Willow is not of the Q existence, but I will say this the Q do have something to do with this dibacle hee hee.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from PATM
Review:
You have the characters and their voices,Snyder's the funny entrant to the speed bump category.
If Willow is injured is she Q-lated? I remember the D'abo actress and her performance in STNG She
went through an adjustment period too. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you and no Willow isn't Q-lated this is a real mother fic.
Review By [PATM] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank You. :)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from rhiowen
Review:
lol, i love this story so far :D, please update soon
Comments from author:
Thank you, and I promise it won't take me as long to update this next time.
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool chapter. Thanks for continuing the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you and your welcome. :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from (Current Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Awesome chapter, love how Willow reacted when she found out she was on a starship... looking forward to your next update!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks and her reaction will get quite colorful in the future.
Review By [(Current Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from Ramenth
Review:
Very cool. Only thing I'm confused about is who the french person is. Jean-Luc's from France, but clearly British in accent.
Comments from author:
Thanks and changed that. hits herself upside the head, I should of had a V-8.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from Darkblood
Review:
i love the story please update soon
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Darkblood] • Date [28 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
So the red tree is related to Crusher and Wesley, my won't her friend's be suprised.

Peace
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unknown" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unknown" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting story so far, please do your best to add more soon.

In what chapter will we find out the crossover?
Comments from author:
I'll do my best. I'm trying so hard to finish all my stories I have out there.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Unknown" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Well, the crossover so far appears to be Voyager... but the Twin thing...thought it might have been a Harry Potter crossover....
Comments from author:
Okay, would like to know how you came to the conclusion of Voyager. :=0
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unknown" from (Current Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Like how you did Willow using her other senses trying to determine where she was. I got a very good idea where but waiting to see the big reveal.

Like Buffy's reaction to Anya and how you did Snyder.

Only thing that struck my as a little off was Willow saying/thinking swear words.
Otherwise great chapter and looking forward to more.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I always thought that their should have been way more interaction with the teachers and the principal seeing as Buffy seemed to be absent from class frequently. Yeah the swear words do seem out of character for her, so I changed it, thanks for your comments and critique.
Review By [(Current Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from (Current Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wonderful visuals and I'm wondering about the letter Q.


Wispr
Comments from author:
Hmmm, are you now? Well that's interesting.
Review By [(Current Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Unknown" from SAK
Review:
Sounds like she landed on the bridge of the Enterprise.

Please update again soon.
Comments from author:
You were correct. :)
Review By [SAK] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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