Review of chapter "Unreal Reality" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Ohh, boy. Given Trelane, the Squire of Gothos, I think I know what Willow is.
Anya's spell is not at fault, it just let the Continuum know of Willow's existence.
I suspect that they have Willow on the most Q-plagued ship in the known galaxy so she can find her own answers.
(That, and said plague of a Q himself may be snarking back at all of us over the Marisa Picard fics by hijacking the author's Muse, but that's a bit closer to those cosmic headcases than I wish to be, so forget I said that, okay?!?)
Overall, this is of the strong. Please continue (while I beat Apocalypse bloddy for hijacking MY muse during the composition of this review).
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. That's a really good idea but alas Willow is not of the Q existence, but I will say this the Q do have something to do with this dibacle hee hee.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [30 Oct 09] • Not Rated
You have the characters and their voices,Snyder's the funny entrant to the speed bump category. If Willow is injured is she Q-lated? I remember the D'abo actress and her performance in STNG She went through an adjustment period too. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you and no Willow isn't Q-lated this is a real mother fic.
Like how you did Willow using her other senses trying to determine where she was. I got a very good idea where but waiting to see the big reveal.
Like Buffy's reaction to Anya and how you did Snyder.
Only thing that struck my as a little off was Willow saying/thinking swear words. Otherwise great chapter and looking forward to more.
Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. I always thought that their should have been way more interaction with the teachers and the principal seeing as Buffy seemed to be absent from class frequently. Yeah the swear words do seem out of character for her, so I changed it, thanks for your comments and critique.
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from MissingAuthor
Review:
Wonderful visuals and I'm wondering about the letter Q.
Wispr
Comments from author:
Hmmm, are you now? Well that's interesting.
Review By [MissingAuthor] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated