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The Child of the Mother (Beta'd & revised).

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Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from JediKnight
Review:
Great work on the new chapter, but why stop right before the fight. I hope to read more soon.

-Edit: I'm not going to kill your muse; I'm going to make it wish it was dead(48 hours of Barney)

-Edit 2: I could make it 72 hours.
Comments from author:
My muse again, Sorry don't kill it please. :)

Edit: Dude, that's cruel and unusual punishment, LOL.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Genuka
Review:
Well that's a fight I don't want to miss! Worf might be able to ground and connect with Faith better than virtually anyone else on Enterprise. Looking forward to the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think so to. Now if I can write it as good as I see it in my head. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from AllenPitt
Review:
Worf vs Faith should be fun. One problem is Faith will be fighting to kill, most likely. Then again if anyone on the Enterprise had to fight her, Worf is the guy. Hopefully someone will come along with a stunner and stop them. Although who knows, could be the beginning of a beautiful friendship.
Angel won't be pleased to find himself in a morgue, ouch.
Tricorder scan will be most confusing for poor Dr. Crusher--he's dead, but moving around.
Assuming they finally do a genescan of Willow, the big question of course is, how did a daughter of Dr. C's end up in Sunnydale?!
Comments from author:
Worf is definitely going to need some backup soon, but I think he needed to be knocked down a peg because of his thoughts on how weak humans are, LOL. Angel will be livid if not seriously damaged (think watery grave he couldn't get out of because of Conner) Not as bad or long but still torturous. Hopefully Beverly won't end up pulling her hair out or worse when things start to be revealed to her.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Pane
Review:
Spectacular story, one of the best I've ever read.

A showdown between Worf and Faith? It's going to end with one of them dead, at least one of them injured, or very possibly both of them naked.

The explanations that are going to need to happen are going to be hilarious. Not to mention Crusher's trying to figure out Angel's "condition".

Look forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you like it. Hopefully the showdown will be epic. Hmmm nakedness sound intriquing and definite injuries to go around. I'm pretty sure Worf will have a lot more and need to be saved from a rogue slayer that doesn't play by the rules.

Yes Beverly will have a big headache coming, dealing with Angel and soon to be found long lost daughter. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Pane] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Strange Places & Things" from Eureka
Review:
GAHHH! Did you have to stop there? Faith and Worf fight! I wannna see!!! So that is how they explained Angel..Disease that makes him seem dead when "asleep" huh? Can't see what you come up with next!
Comments from author:
Sorry my muse is an evil dark bunny that likes to torture people with cliffhangers, Anya would be terrified. LOL thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from Genuka
Review:
Oh, dear. Wonder how security will react with a freaked out slayer on their hands? *snicker* I love the fact that no one's noticed yet that Willow is Beverly's daughter yet. *Snicker* More please!
Comments from author:
More coming soon. I'm glad you enjoyed it. The chaos will be epic, I hope. LOL and as soon as the chaos dies down a bit then surprises will be revealed. Thanks for the review
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from Eureka
Review:
Hmm so Buffy is now awake, Troi is down, and Wills has to take care of her. Oh boy this is being set up for lots of laughs!
Comments from author:
Yes plenty of. But are you sure you got the right slayer? :)

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Hmmm. Might Willow be empathic? I am a bit surprised they don't just let her see her friends, it would aid with identification. Also Willow, from the numbers, ought to be able to guess that it's just the Scoobies. We'll put it down to emotional overload.

Thanks for writing.

Edit: She did? My bad. But thanks for clarifying.
Comments from author:
Well she saw only five come into sickbay two of them being Anya and Faith. She never saw Angel and don't know that he's there.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from AllenPitt
Review:
will Angel 'wake up' or does vampirism not work in this dimension? Weird thought. Especially if Deanna sees Willow do a "oh, it's only Angel who's dead, everything's fine!"
Buffy likely isn't too happy waking up in the sickbay. Now if she runs into worf or some other demonic looking alien, it could get ugly of course.
Comments from author:
He may or may not be awake,but where he's located he definitely can't get out. :) Think starfleet Mausoleum, and early tortured buriel for our Angel.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Tangled Webs" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the new chapter, I hope you will be posting more of this soon.

-Something tells me sickbay might be a shitstorm in the next chapter.
Comments from author:
Ya think. LOL :))
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [15 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're off to see the... uhm Willow?" from Almadynis
Review:
Oh good grief...literally. Poor Willow...
Comments from author:
I know right. lol, thanks for the review.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're off to see the... uhm Willow?" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the chapter, but I'm not at all found of cliffhangers. I hope to read more of this soon.
Comments from author:
I apologize, but that's the way my muse ends it so nothing I can do about it at the moment don't want her to hit the road on me again. Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [4 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're off to see the... uhm Willow?" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* she's gonna be pissed in true Willow fashion when she finds out that both Giles and Xander are fine and that they mistook Angel for being truly dead. *snicker* This is going to be ^!FUN!^!!!! *snicker*
Comments from author:
Yes she will right before relief hits her. But it will be funny getting there. LOL. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're off to see the... uhm Willow?" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
Oh man, Angel (or Spike if the story includes him) sure do cause problems. Bet it will freak them out when he wakes up...assuming they haven't jettisoned him out into space.
Comments from author:
Lol, hmmm jettisoned into space, I do kind of love it when Angel is in turmoil, makes for good reading, :) nah can't do that to him, too cruel. Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're off to see the... uhm Willow?" from Eureka
Review:
Umm wasn't Angel one of them? So it would be Un-dead although they wouldn't know that. I don't think they even had vamps that far in the future. LOL
Let's see..Buffy, Giles, Xander, Angel, and Faith so yeah.. Also I don't think that they would have brought what they thought was a dead body to the medi bay, so Wills wouldn't see that it was Angel. LOL What did they do with Angel?
Thanks for the quick update.
Comments from author:
Thanks E, I do believe I'm on a role with the updates. I am happy that my muse has returned after it abandoned me for so long. Thanks for the review.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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