Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from morgyair
Review:
I was intrigued and really do hope for more......why was it marked complete?
Comments from author:
Sorry that was my mistake I hit complete button accidentally. :))
Review By [morgyair] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you sir. :)
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Child Of The Mother" from norgco
Review:
I would have rated it higher except for the 'this story is complete' following a WTF? ending.
It certainly has the feel of the first part of a multi-part story, which would make sense of the situation. So I look forward to part 2 or the second story in the series, because ths (hopefully chapter 1) is quite good!
Comments from author:
I'm so sorry this story is not complete, I will change that immediately. Thanks for the review and I'm so glad you like it.
Review By [norgco] • Date [1 Jul 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]