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Review of chapter "Shameful Deeds" from Almadynis
Review:
Nice! I really like what you've done. Please keep going! And Willow with Yar is just plain FUNNY!
Comments from author:
I thought so, I wanted to prelude to Willow's lesbian or bisexual tendencies. Since vamp Willow didn't make an appearance in this fic, well I used the beautiful Tasha Yar. :) Thanks for the review, more coming soon.
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shameful Deeds" from Genuka
Review:
Willow faints and Angel came along?!?!?!?! Damn! I hope you update tomorrow that's an evil cliffhanger. More please!
Comments from author:
hee hee, coming soon. Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shameful Deeds" from (Current Donor)WildMartin
Review:
One of them is dead...are you certain they aren't undead? LOL Good update.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)WildMartin] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shameful Deeds" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny job on the new chapter, glad to see the crew will be going back to normal as well. I hope to read more of this story soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friends, Enemies and Misconceptions" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* This is gonna be a blast! Especially if they all wind up on Enterprise! *snicker* More please!
Comments from author:
Thanks I'm glad you like it. I'm really excited about it also. My muse has many plans for this. :)
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friends, Enemies and Misconceptions" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice work on the Sunnydale side, wish you had some for the "St:TNG" side. I hope to read more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks Jedi, TNG side coming soon. :)
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Friends, Enemies and Misconceptions" from AllenPitt
Review:
Anya shows a lot of character coming in to try to repair it (and a good sense of self preservation). Poor Enterprise -just as the insanity plague is finished off, they're invaded by slayers, a vampire, an ex-vengeance demon etc.
I wonder if Anya would recognize the Star Trek dimension. Also, will "Q" get interested, something like this doesn't happen every day.
Presumably once sanity is restored someone will finally use a tricorder and get some DNA scans and make the big discovery? One wonders how Willow ended up leaving the Trek-verse in the first place.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [27 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow Go Round" from JediKnight
Review:
Very funny work on the new chapter, I hope you'll post more soon.
Comments from author:
I hope so to Jedi. So far my muse seems to be cooperating. Thanks for the review.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow In Wonderland" from RockyWilliams
Review:
I'm sorry, I just can't see Willow being able to "hack" a federation computer. I mean, I don't think a person from twenty years ago could hack a modern computer, at least in that length of time, let alone the centuries between Willow and Star Trek.
Comments from author:
I understand your dilemma, but if you remember correctly a business man from a different era hacked his way into the system and found his way to the bridge also in one of the episodes. and also in this episode everybody is pretty much intoxicated and messing with systems everywhere. who knows what was messed up or opened up. That's my logic in that Willow was a pretty smart girl and even though she may not have been able to hack into a secure system a compromised one is easy pickings. :)
Review By [RockyWilliams] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow Go Round" from Wormbait
Review:
Damn I was hoping Willow would get to Tasha before Data did, TNG became so much more unwatchable after she died, Troy and Crusher could never pull off those romances from the female crew perspective (didn't help that the actresses were so bad). Thats probably why they kept having to bring on female gueststars for that kind of roll.

But anyway, yeah Willow with Tasha, thats the only pairing with a known crew member I could see working well, particularly as all the male crew are all so "please god no", Or rediculously cliche'd (Data).

Still well done and thanks for sharing, I look forward to seeing how this one develops and what surprises you have in store for us.
Comments from author:
Bite your tongue Wormbait. the development of both of those characters were amazing I think both Beverly (specifically her relationship with the trill and the Ghost entity not to mention the times that almost happened between her and Picard) and Deanna(the plethora of relationships she had, the less than half betazoid, the one with the guy nearly draining her of her youth :( not a good ex but that romance was intense if not one sided) Their romances were that of legend to me. But everyone has their own opinion I guess.

Sorry didn't mean to ramble on about my passion for those two women but you started it. LOL.

And if Tasha would have stayed surely her romances would have been epic ( if the glimpse of Yesterdays Enterprise was anything to go by.)

And there still may be a little encounter with the Yar, not promising Tasha won't regret it just as much as she did with Data, Willow being as young as she is now.

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Wormbait] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow Go Round" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Okay...I'll bite...where is Willow? A rather nice twist on Willow's real parents...if I think her mother is who I think it is anyway...
Comments from author:
Oh you'll have to wait til the next chap for that answer? I think you may be right on your guess to. :))
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow Go Round" from AllenPitt
Review:
Tasha Yar never did live down that episode. "It never happened!" ... Not the best intro to the Enterprise, not their best day.
So once that is over and they do a med scan on her, presumably they'll immediately find out something interesting in her DNA, ie her relationship to the Crushers?
Any chance "Q" will show up, due to the whole time/space/dimension hopping?
Comments from author:
Yes Tasha kind of regretted thing in that ep. It my be a double regret or not in this story. :) Yes I'm invoking the red head Willow rule, LOL. Q? Maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Willow In Wonderland" from CathalPicard
Review:
I can't wait to see what happens next!

This is exiting!

I bet anything her Mom's Doc Crusher.
Comments from author:
Thanks, now if only my muse will let me get back to this. :))
Review By [CathalPicard] • Date [15 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow In Wonderland" from DaedalusWorks
Review:
This is a very interesting premise. I like how you handle two time-lines (I guess that involve the transfer of more characters from the Buffy-verse to the Universe of the Enterprise).
I'd like to read more chapters of this story.
Review By [DaedalusWorks] • Date [16 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Willow In Wonderland" from dreameralways
Review:
Yay! You're back. Another lovely chapter and I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks. and sorry it took me so long, couldn't flesh out the next chapter til now. Glad you like it and I promise not to take so long next time. Hopefully :))
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [31 Jan 10] • Not Rated
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