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Review of chapter "Transitions I" from eriktheviking
Review:
And the hidden depths start to shine through. Well written, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the compliments, and thanks for the review, glad you liked it.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from Sandi
Review:
Scary vision of Willow but VERY believable. Please add more to this. May he develop Erik's powers too?
Comments from author:
Wait and see, wait and see.

Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
Interesting fic.

Just one question.."I was I didn't." ? Did you forget some words or were you going for "I wish I didn't."
Comments from author:
Its I wish, went and corrected it now. Thanks for the review and glad you found things interesting at least.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice job on the new chapter, looking forward to more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from karisusa
Review:
love the story so far. i has few questions though. is xander gonna have a romantic relationship? and what about faith? Angelous? and is there going to be any actual x-men action, like xander gets transported to their demention or something like that, or is it just going to be only like how it is now. and is xander eventually gonna get powers or just be the cute lil non-powerey thing he is now. and what about collage and the initiative? nerg. so many questions so little answers.
Comments from author:
Only one answer actually.

Wait and see ;)

Thanks for the review.
Review By [karisusa] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from DonWar
Review:
AWESOME F&^%$#$ STORY

Why does the plot bunny not like me? Is it the swords? Cause there blunt. The knifes... no. The metal carrots... it's a magneto bunny. Why does it not like me.

(looks of to the side)
Stop trying to bite me and I'll bring normal carots from now on ok bunny.
(the plot bunny backs of and nods its head)

THIS BUNNY CAME TO YOU WITH AN AWESOME PLOT.
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!
Comments from author:
Well, glad you're liking things so far.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [DonWar] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from bigreader
Review:
Quite interesting. Wish he had some of Magneto's power. But good story telling.
Comments from author:
Well, I like to think that good story telling can be done without pulling out too much...

Wait and see just what happens, you might enjoy where things finally go.

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [bigreader] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from TheDon
Review:
so he didnt get any powers just a major personality boost with some awesome knowlege with creeping holocaust night terrors as desert?
Comments from author:
Maybe, maybe not. *shrugs slightly*

Wait and see.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from kayron
Review:
I like Xander's addition. He always did everything that he could to help his friends. Now he is wiser and more mature. Now he is able to talk to and advise his friends from a more experienced viewpoint. I thought his talk with Jenny/Janna was just right. There were no accusations, just an acknowledgment. He helped Cordelia see that she had more changing to do before she was ready for a real relationship, and acknowledged the same about himself. With his knew insights, he realized the potential danger from Willow, and let Giles and Buffy know so that they could be on alert. He took the blinders off of his eyes, and realized that his 'bestest friend ever' could become what they have to stop.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. I always thought it was in Xander all along, we see enough of it through out the show, just always cast aside once the moment's over.

Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from Rob
Review:
This is quite good.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Review By [Rob] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from TheLaughingMan
Review:
I'm REALLY hoping for Xander to get more of ol Mags' power. Maybe he will come upon a situation where he needs that power, like the Initiative, and he has somebody do a spell to grant that power or he may already have it but is afraid to use it.
Comments from author:
Wait and see. I know how things are going to go, in the end at least. But, most of the fun is in the journey. ;)

Thanks for the review.
Review By [TheLaughingMan] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from johnbr
Review:
Feed me seymore! must have more!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [johnbr] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from OdinMage
Review:
I'm loving this story, a couple things I noticed in this chapter though.... near the end you have 'I was I didn't' I think it should be 'wish' not 'was'.... and earlier in the chapter you call Ford 'Billy Fordman' it was 'Billy Fordham'.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you enjoyed it and I went and fixed those errors, thanks.
Review By [OdinMage] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent update with some interesting insights into Our Heroes and their personalities. At the end of the update your write: β€œI was I didn't.” β€œMe too.” I think you meant "I wish I didn't." All in all, I am enjoying your story a lot but it has a definite melancholy feel to it. I can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah, missed the last little mistake I made. Fixed now.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Transitions I" from Bluesnowman
Review:
Great will he ever be a magnokine?
Comments from author:
Wait and See, thanks for the review.
Review By [Bluesnowman] • Date [10 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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