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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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EXCELLENT IDEA. I never would have thought that the Angel+Buffy in that weird time-space thing would create the spark that is Dawn. its true... How could the monks have formed a soul?

VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRY interesting :) I like your crazy mind.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from organicmagic
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I like it so far but the one criticism I'd make is that there is not much prose. It is a bit dialogue-heavy, other than that, I'm looking forward to more.
Review By [organicmagic] • Date [31 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RocksandGlass
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This is actually gonna be pretty good. I like what you've written so far and the demon princess Dawn thing is an interesting idea that should tie well when the crossover starts. Looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Shezzi
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Hey :) Great idea. Never seen one quite like it. Originality is excellent, and this is very fun. One thing I will say, though: you definitely don't want to mix up defiantly with definitely, because it's definitely not a good look. Sorry :P :) couldn't resist. But seriously, that is probably the number one mistake in stories that just makes me wince. Loved it, can't wait for more, and I reckon it will be a teacher (quite possibly DD, in full purple robe and white bearded splendor) on the door step. Thanks for sharing! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Shezzi] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from payday
Review:
Nice plot. I like how you made dawn made from both buffy and angel from that day. I like the atmosphere of all of them there and the fighting is at a minimum. I can't wait to see who's at the door. PMS :)
Review By [payday] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
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I am enjoying your storytelling and characterization.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
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Standing in the doorway is... Harmony!.. Ok... the Cheese Man! Nope...maybe Dumbledore?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Naitch
Review:
I like your explanation for Dawn- being Buffy and Angel's kis from when he was human. Very original, very well done.

A few grammar issues, but other than that this story is off to a good start. Can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Sorry about the grammar - its my downfall - thanks for the honesty! You still like it! YAY :P ^_^
Review By [Naitch] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from spring
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Oh this story is so wonderful so far. I am loving the fact that Anya is being nice about things such as not saying things as everyone is crying in the living room and telling everyone about the visions being an extremely bad thing for Cordy to have. I love everything about the discussion that Angel had with Dawn, very very sweet. Again I love this wonderful story and I look forward to the next installment.
Comments from author:
Thank you ^_^ I know Anya gets a bad rap til she dies-she shouldn't have to work that hard! I mean Ripper did lots of bad stuff with a soul .... I always wanted to see Angel with Dawn - she was totally wasted on Riley.... Thanks again!
Review By [spring] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AllenPitt
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huh... and maybe his mother was a witch, with him being a squib and not told about the wizarding world? We never did get "Liam's" last name. Maybe it's one we'd recognize from the HP series? Also--does the Order of Aurelius have a vault at Gringott's? That'd be cool: lots of gold, and some neat magical artifacts. The Master certainly seemed to have a lot more 'power' than any other vamp, didn't use a wand but had lots of wizard-ly types of abilities.
Comments from author:
mums the word....but LOVE the speculations though ^_^ Thank you!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very plausible. Did I miss an episode where Angel was human for a day, or is that part of your AU?
Comments from author:
Thank you! The episode is real - its season 1 - titled : I will Remember You
Link: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/I_Will_Remember_You_(Angel)

And as I review that I find I spelled the demon wrong - its Mohra...darn...
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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