Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Hmmm... well good set up for further adventures... Cascade has lots of cultural stuff going on like Vancouver... but also a disproportionate amount of drug trade and other criminal syndicates that seem to use it as a weigh station for illegal goods. Thanks for sharing and continuing. Nice character moments.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the info on Cascade - it'll be helpful in the sequel.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
Excellent. Loved how the men were acting with Buffy! So Jim and Buffy should be fighting for dominance? Would that happening when she is better, or does her slayer side trust him?
Comments from author:
I think that if they met when they were both at full strength it would be a battle of wills - just like her and Faith in season 3. But as he will be one of the people responsible for helping her heal, it won't be as confrontational. That's not to say that she'll stay in Cascade though.
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from spring
Review:
This is wonderful. I love how Oz, Blair, and Jim were showing Angel how much they were going to be pertecting her, I also like how she was leaning into that comfort without actualy knowing she was doing it sometimes. Again I love this story and I eagerly await the sequel. ^_^
Comments from author:
Buffy was reacting to her pack and alpha. And until she gets stronger, Jim will have to be her alpha. If this were the Anitaverse, she probably would have curled up on someone's lap and held onto the hands of the other two.
Review By [spring] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from mithrilandtj
Review:
COOL! Loved the possessive show!
Can't wait for the sequal!
Comments from author:
I was going for sweet without overbearing - like *some* people.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from danielbuffyfan
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I can just see all the ways she can have fun in Cascade. Can you imagine her going to the station to see Jim and doing her blonde ditz routine?! That would just be too funny. I loved the story. I am glad that you don't ever pair her with Angel. He was such a tool.
Comments from author:
Buffy in a police station voluntarily? What a riot! Oh, that could be some major laughs.
*shudder* The only way I could pair them together would be in a nightmare scene - or if I had to follow early season canon for some reason. *shudder again*
Review By [danielbuffyfan] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from LNR
Review:
Excellent! I Just wish your chapters were longer.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I like to shoot for somewhere around 1500-2500 words per chapter. Much more and I start look for a place to split it - if I can. Exception to that is the oneshots.
Review By [LNR] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from AshDawnSoulmates
Review:
GASP! CHU BETTER TELL ME WHEN YOU POST THE SEQUEL!!!!!
Comments from author:
You'll be one of the first to know, you pyscho stalker fan! LOL
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5: Showdown at the Hyperion" from cjsplace
Review:
Love how you handled Angel so smoothly, allowing the 'boys' to show him he they weren't going to let him hurt their girl.
I like your portrayal of Buffy. She understand that she needs to heal and smart enough to accept the help being offered.
Job well done.
Comments from author:
Hey, thanks for the review!
Seriously, between a vamp with a soul and a Sentinel, his Guide, and a werewolf, it's a no-brainer who would win out. Especially when Buffy is giving her support to one side. Angel is just lucky that he didn't end up in a vase on Cordy's nightstand.
I think it helped Buffy that it was Oz offering the help. He's not one to do that lightly, so if he says she needs it...
Review By [cjsplace] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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