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Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from bliss
Review:
This is fabulous!! I can't wait to read more!! Please post the rest of the chapters soon!!!
Comments from author:
Im trying Im trying.... works been shite lifes been bad and time is just slipping away
Review By [bliss] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from crystalwings
Review:
Really love this story, please write more.
Comments from author:
wish granted and thanks for reviewing
Review By [crystalwings] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from KatieKat
Review:
This is an awesome story and I can't wait to read more please update again soon
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [10 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Nyvanna
Review:
Love this story so much and yay finally, once more we get to see her with the AB characters :) Can't wait to read more!
Comments from author:
thank you
Review By [Nyvanna] • Date [9 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from wickedfire
Review:
I just found this story, and I'm loving it, it's definitely a unique Dawn crossover. I really really hope that you update soon.
Review By [wickedfire] • Date [8 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Glongi
Review:
Magnificent!

Great drama, and interesting read. I just hope there would be more episodes shortly.
Comments from author:
thank you you so much - reviews like yours kicked my butt to keep on writing... sorrty for the delay
Review By [Glongi] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Theory
Review:
Awesome Story, cant wait to see what happens next
Review By [Theory] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Banditcat
Review:
Yeah, new part.
Way to leave us hanging.
Am loving this story.
Looking forward to some answers to those big questions.
Comments from author:
hope you like the new chapter
and thanxs for review
Review By [Banditcat] • Date [7 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from WinterRayne
Review:
Still think this fic is AMAZING!!!!!
Comments from author:
wow thanxs
Review By [WinterRayne] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Almadynis
Review:
Oh good grief...wow...I can't wait for more! Please keep going!
Comments from author:
new chapter just up - enjoy
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from NeedlessNoodles
Review:
For a moment I was utterly lost. But now I remember. Boy, I would love to see more before Christmas if you can manage it.
Comments from author:
i know i know you menat last Xmas sorry
Review By [NeedlessNoodles] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from LeaFairy
Review:
Completely loved the Dawn/Jean Claude scene! I especially loved reading it from JC's POV. I wonder what Dawn's spell will really do though? Will it do what she think it does, or did she remember it wrong and it does something completely different/dangerous?

I also loved the bit with Spike and his being tied up :-)

The beginning though with Dawn and the boy (Matt) was a little weird and out of character, I think. *shrugs* Dawn *is* really young and would be flattered by being asked out, but from living in Sunnydale and having a family like hers who have had horrible luck with romance/dating (especially Buffy), wouldn't she be more suspicious? Also add in the situation she's in with her not knowing where she is, having been 'kidnapped' by people who think they know her and are saying she's someone else's daughter with also Spike, Willow and the others nowhere to be found, it just seems kinda ridiculous that she would just go on date with some unknown boy without a thought of the danger or even second guessing it being wise... *shrugs* Maybe as an idea, she could still go on the date if you want, but instead make her more cautious of Matt and their surroundings?

Anyways, I really did enjoy this chapter and I'm very happy for the update! Sorry if my comments seemed offending though, I definitely didn't mean for them to...

I really do look forward to reading more, especially to see Dawn's reaction to Jean Claude's saying he's her father!!
Comments from author:
hi thanks for the great and very long review - its wicked!!!

yep good points with Matt. The Matt situation wilkl crop with later storyline but I also wanted to show how dawn is behaving recklessly and careless. Kind of like when she was shop lifting in series 6 in buffy

But Thanks for reviewing and will try and keep more believable going forward
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Darksidhe
Review:
Yes, an update! Jean-Claude is Dawn's father! Tied-up Spike! Hat-trick of greatness.
Comments from author:
hee hee its all much goodness and darkness.... new chapter just up xx
Review By [Darksidhe] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from PSchri
Review:
Wow!!! Very cool story. It's a very unique plot, and well written.

I'm glad to see that Spike is remembering Dawn, even if only in his dreams. Is he going to be dropped into St. Louis? When Buffy is resurrected, will she remember Dawn, due to Slayer powers?

One thing I'm unclear about is, is how old is Dawn in Anita-verse?. The way Jason was thinking about her 'spinning her in circles, pouting' made her sound younger than she is in Buffy-verse.

Great cliff-hanger. Build up of magical power, and Jean-Claude claiming he is Dawn's father. I was wondering in the previous chapter who the father is, but I guess Richard and Asher (and Micah?) all care for her like a daughter.

Thanks for sharing your writing with us. I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
thanks for your review - you rock and apologies for the delay in reply.

ohhh spoilers cant say too much

but Dawn is same age about 14 years old, but remember shes been jasons little girl (its like Jason her older brother) since she was born and so hes been twirling her around since she was a kid

re the father... oh this will be interesting
Review By [PSchri] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Magic Whispers" from Xeelia
Review:
OMG OMG OMG!!! Great Chapter!!!! YAY!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!!! :D
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [6 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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