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Review of chapter "A Demon Holds My Place on Earth Till I Die" from Marcel
Review:
Damn. Possession. This will definitely put the L&O gang right in the middle of a mystical case.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [17 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Demon Holds My Place on Earth Till I Die" from KJA
Review:
OK mysterious voice over (or is it narration?) that drops some clues as to what is going on. First it sounds like this is not going to be over any time soon. Secondly you drop an interesting historical tidbit that may have further baring on the case. The other thing that catches my attention is the individuals involved the last time. With the old council destroyed the Contingent my be lacking in historical information relating to the supernatural side of events. Interestingly however the coven involved could potently be the same one that helped Giles and Willow.

As for the rest of the chapter I am glad to see that you are involving L&O:SVU in this as it will make for the same kind of tension as in SlayerZ. Given the opening of the chapter it looks like some of the police might wined up in the know before it is all over. Then again maybe not given the capabilities of the team Kennedy and Buffy have recruited.

As the chapter concludes we also get the name of the person who has been effected by Jenny or whatever is doing this. A question that the events of the chapter have raised in my mind however is Frankie the only person being effected? If not the police could find themselves chasing numerous unrelated people whose only connection is of a mystical nature. There is also the possibility that Detective Green may be in danger given that Jenny thought he was the one to kill her. This has the setup to be as good as or better than SlayerZ.
Review By [KJA] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Demon Holds My Place on Earth Till I Die" from GwynApNudd
Review:
This looks just as well researched as it is written. I can't wait to see where you go with it. BTW, did the consulting detective that helped the Slayer capture Mudgett have the same last name as Mudgett's alias?
Comments from author:
Mudgett, caught in 1895, was executed in Philadephia in 1896, after this all went down; Chicago was simply where critical mass occurred.

But you have the consulting detective's name right. Just a gratuitous throw-in.
Review By [GwynApNudd] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Demon Holds My Place on Earth Till I Die" from AllenPitt
Review:
Huh. Interesting. A restless vengeful spirit who died on Handleman street thousands of years ago? Ok, maybe not.
Comments from author:
No maybe.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Jul 09] • Not Rated
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