Great start, I like how faith is fitting in with the Cullens. Love how she found out about them being vampires. Hopefully she won't listen to her watcher or at least convince him. Even if the watcher does call Buffy I don't see her going on a killing spree without hearing the story she did pretty good of not killing something just because it was a demon, like Clem. I hope you PMS :)
Review By [payday] • Date [3 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome To Forks" from KzintiKiller
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It needs a beta, but otherwise it's pretty cool. So, is Kakistos out there somewhere? Mr. Trick? I'm thinking that Emmet and Jasper could take them apart like a couple of roasted chickens.
KK
Review By [KzintiKiller] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phone Call to LA" from AllenPitt
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Sounds like her Watcher might make trouble. Or even if she's ok with it, if Quentin Travers hears of this.... And hey, the werewolves aren't as nice. So maybe there'll be a conflict here somewhere. Meanwhile the Cullens finding out that Angel(us) is a friend of Faiths---funny
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Phone Call to LA" from SwimTeam
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Good job! Please update soon. Rory:)
Review By [SwimTeam] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Phone Call to LA" from SariLane
Review:
more please
Review By [SariLane] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated