Review of chapter "Chapter Three: The Letters to No One" from scarlett
I have read a few stories with Buffy being Harry's twin as well, and I think you are doing a fantastic job with this one! I like how you inserted Joyce and Hank into the Harry Potter 'verse and made them into Griffindor and Slytherin. Hank would act more like a slitherin, lol. Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Review By [scarlett
] • Date [20 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from VillageOrchid
I'm a little uncomfortable with some of the mixture of the two universes such as putting the Summers in the UK, but the characterization is quite good. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid
] • Date [18 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from divaslayer
Awesome first two chapters, I loved it. I can't wait to read more.
Review By [divaslayer
] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from Leon
Interesting, can not wait to read more!
Review By [Leon
] • Date [30 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from CrystalBlaze
As Hank is possibly a Pureblood sympathiser or just prefers to protect his daughter by blood from the Order jamming a hot target into the family, I think things may just get.. nasty.
The Scourge of Europe might just have settled in the vampire clans of the Potterverse, as well. Since you're Potterising the setting as a whole, why not go all in?
Review By [CrystalBlaze
] • Date [19 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from FireWolfe
Nicely done story so far. Adopted children deal with their families the same way biological children do. Ok sometimes we can be extra bitchy but in the end we know we are wanted. I mean our folks had to pick us out right. They had a real choice in the matter. So Buffy will deal just fine.
Review By [FireWolfe
] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two: The Fire From Within" from Cmiller
I am greatly curious as to where you are going with this story and thus I can't wait for more.
Review By [Cmiller
] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Girl They Kept Hidden" from payday
Fantastic beginning. I love sibling crossovers especially twins. I don't think I read a plot like this before so I can't wait to see how you do this. I like your giles, he already has a strong bond to the potters, especially Elizabeth (buffy). I hope you PMS :)
Review By [payday
] • Date [28 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Girl They Kept Hidden" from AngelBlack
Ooh, I do indeed like the direction this story is going in. The only thing that saddens me is that there won't be any Willow, Xander, Angel, etc.
Oh! Also, there were a few grammar mistakes, so it would be beneficial for a beta to look over the fic.
Review By [AngelBlack
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Girl They Kept Hidden" from Kimmy
Wow. Cant wait till you update it is awesome. Are you gonna do the next chapter when they are 11 or older? Hopefully when they are older. Also is elizabeth buffy? And is sirius gonna be in azkaban? I recon sirius is the best and i cryed when jk killed him off in ootp lol.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. And for the sake of not giving too much away, chapter two will start when they are older.
Yes, Buffy is Elizabeth. And for now Sirius will more than likely be in Azkaban. (I tend to bend canon to my will but not change it completely.)
Review By [Kimmy
] • Date [20 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: The Girl They Kept Hidden" from Cheese
Ah very good. I like Buffy as Harry's twin stories too, and this is an good start to the story. I will be interested to see how Giles' role as watcher will be worked into the story (if at all, lol). I really hope you update soon
Comments from author:
My first review. *squeals with delight*
Thank you very much for reviewing my first crossover fic. I'm still working on how Giles fits in this story. Since he is one of my favorite Buffy characters I want to make sure I do him justice.
I'm currently working on chapter two and hope to have it up soon. Hooray for actually doing some pre-writing.
Thank you again for reviewing my fic.
Review By [Cheese
] • Date [19 Jul 09] • Not Rated