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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from AllenPitt
Review:
It took me entirely too long to realize who he really was, but I finally remembered that Star Trek episode where they found him. At least he hasn't descended to manufacturing girlfriends for himself yet. (shudder--Buffybot). And it stands to reason he'd intervene at this point in history... any chance of Gary 7 ? Probably not, that's too long ago. ...
Funny to think Picard/Enterprise might show up soon.
Daniel Jackson on the Empress' ship. Interesting. Meanwhile the E. expended a lot of her finest remaining troops, ouchie.
I hope you do a sequel set in the Kirk or Picard-verse....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
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Like Buffy, I'd prefer clear-cut 'good guys' and 'bad guys', but you do such a wonderful job of highlighting all the ambiguity that goes with human free will and what constitutes the 'greater good' in any situation!

Plus, I'm thrilled that you made yet another original Star Trek connection in having Micah/William turn out to be "Flint" (or some alternate variation thereof) of "Requiem for Methuselah" fame.

Excellent work.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from Xelab
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Another great chapter! Things are starting to move! Looking forward to the next update!
Review By [Xelab] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from leelaa
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Excellent. As always, well worth the wait. Looking forward eagerly to the next chapter, and hope real life and the muses let it be soon. Thanks a ton for a great read. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Current Donor)vladt
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excellent update to a fine tale. thank you for the enjoyable read.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [9 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Thedruid
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Thanks for the update!
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [5 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from RevDorothyL
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whoa! So Micah Brack has some surprises up his sleeve, still? Meanwhile, I have to give you many props for the action scenes, and especially the never-gets-old pleasure of seeing Buffy and her fellow slayer going primeval on their lame, high-tech, evil opponents. It sucks that Buffy feels she's been out-generaled again, though, since she's gotten more than her share of that from the First in the past.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from (Current Donor)MaxGSandeman
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Another raised heart rate chapter.
What's the response from the Key, with Daniel gone?

Edit: Not everything appears at it seems.
Review By [(Current Donor)MaxGSandeman] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from leelaa
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Superb. Well worth the wait.
Looking forward to the reveal of Micah Brack aka Akharin aka Flint the Immortal.
Also on the edge of my seat wondering what's going to be the reaction of the Key's 'bossy wench subset' that is Dawn to Daniel's demise. Maybe not on the Key scale, but even just on the Dawn scale should be *very* interesting.
Any idea how long it'll be before you can get the next chapter up?
I totally get it about real life, but this is going to be a case of tenterhooks waiting to see what development you next bring out in this story. And once again, kudos. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this chapter. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from michaelangelo
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Oh bloody hell, he's Flint isn't he? ah well, at least he can make with the "Tis but a flesh wound" routine now. Nice story, Really enjoying it.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from jayesh
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Awesome chapter. Good to see you are running with who 'Micah Brack' is. Suits buffy too... someone that's been around for that long.
Review By [jayesh] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from grd
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You still manage to write so agonizingly well that triumph, shock, and surprise come naturally. Curse you. Keep up the awesome work.
Review By [grd] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from leelaa
Review:
Glad real life is going well for you. Waiting patiently for an update and will continue to do so for as long as it takes, but any chance of a new chapter in the coming month of May, please? Or would things still be too hectic to have time to spare? Enjoying rereading this fic anyway. Thanks for a great read. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from leelaa
Review:
A terrific read. :) Any chance of an update in this month, please?
Comments from author:
After seven years with them, my company informed me that I was being laid off and they were moving my job to a Third World s--t hole where they can pay people ten cents on the dollar because they live in caves and eat rat stew.
Yes, it was going to Michigan.
I got a decent severance package, but this is not a good time to be looking for work. I figured I'd keep myself occupied by getting back to my writing while I sent off resumes. So imagine my surprise when four weeks after being laid off I was offered a job with similar pay and benefits. I was out of work for less than a month. I'll try to keep writing, and not be so long between updates, but with the new job can't make any guarantees.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from leelaa
Review:
Even if he wasn't guilty of the actual charge, he was almost certainly guilty of something closely related. An inveterate meddler, Q was incapable of leaving well enough alone, and continuously sought to use his power to 'persuade' lesser beings to do what he wanted them to do. All for their own greater good, of course. No matter how much that 'greater good' hurt in the short term. And for a Q, the 'short term' could be defined in centuries. Lesser beings tended to have somewhat shorter time horizons, and often resented the necessity for personal sacrifice 'now' for the benefit of their species long after they were dead. Q was burdened to be forever unappreciated by those he sought to help.
Not to mention, unappreciated by the Q. They did not tend to be amused by his efforts at 'guiding' lesser races. Especially since Q had his own ideas about what destiny best suited those lesser races He 'guided,' which more often than not were considerably different than the sort of evolutionary path those races actually sought for themselves. The turmoil created conflicts which had been known to cause some of those lesser races to unfortunately self-terminate. The repercussions of which tended to make other Q... annoyed. Which is why Q had been making a special effort to act with an uncharacteristically delicate touch when it came to the humans. Being careful not to do anything which might attract the attention of his colleagues. Working with only a select few individuals whose motives he understood and whose actions he could predict. Never leaving anything to chance. Unlike his counterpart.
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Love the fantastic detail, and the whole arc. Terrific.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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