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Review of chapter "Beginning" from amie
I really love this story so far and I hope that you do continue with the rewrite. I seem to be one of the few people who haven't read the original, so this is all new to me! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you're enjoying it and I'd recommend going and reading the original but it would ruin all the surprises. :)

Thanks for the review and you should have another update in under 24 hours as I've already started on the next chapter.

Review By [amie] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Beginning" from dawnieelf
I gotta love this story, i have read your original twice and I still love it, and if this one is even better that's great. I love quite a few of your stories but this one is definetly my favourire.

Thank you for finally continuing this universe.

Review By [dawnieelf] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shards" from ATye
Great start. I'm really looking forward to what you do with this rewrite. I enjoyed the original version, but I'm really interested to see what you do as far as adding complexity and depth (which you did I great job with in this chapter with regards to Buffy's mental state). Hope to see more from you soon.
Review By [ATye] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shards" from Krysstinia
I liked this a lot. You gave more depth to your characters, which I think was your intention. What I'd like to see more on would be Buffy's time in Gondor. In the original you kinda breezed over it.

Please keep this one coming!
Review By [Krysstinia] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shards" from (Past Donor)lckybr
I lyk it. Please do continue, i have a story of mine i need to re write but i don't want to take down the original since alot of people liked it and reviewed on it, i wasn't sure if i could re write it and post it, thats a good idea. (i'd probably not do it just cause the muse is lagging).


I really like the start here, i remember reading Wild at Heart Trapped in Cages, it was so long ago though, i shall go back and read to compare but i really like this one. Does Faith get transported too? Sigh i love Faith and i think she and Buffy work well together.

Happy Writing

Review By [(Past Donor)lckybr] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shards" from zimes
WOW. So I love the original (it's probably my favorite of all your stories) but I can see why you would want to go back and re-write. It's amazing how you basically kept the first chapter the same and yet it has more depth, more in-sight into Buffy and why she made the choices she made in the series finale. One of my favorite parts of the last story was Buffy's relationship with Legolas, so I really hope you either keep that the same or maybe even expend a little. One of the reasons I liked it so much was that through-out the series she never really had a strictly close platonic friendship with a guy. They either dated, wanted to date her, tried to kill her or were the watcher/father in her life. And even when Xander got over his feelings for her he still was crazy possessive. Anyway can't wait for your next part, also are you still thinking about the eventually squeal? MORE PLEASE SOON SO AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I was hoping others would enjoy the difference. I just kinda felt like I could do better. Not just by Buffy but all of the characters of the story.

And yes I intend to keep all of the relationships the same. And the story line. I just think I can flesh it out more and bring more to it now. Add more humor, more depth more...well everything. Plus my writing style has kinda changed if you look at the differences in the origional of this and say Life Past Death. I don't count the Anita Blake fic becasue I have to really switch over to write that one.

Thanks so much for the review and I already have the net chapter finished. Complete with the actual first meeting of Buffy and Arwen.
Review By [zimes] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shards" from jupitersdaughter
Rewrite? Shoots, we give it a chance. Looks good so far!
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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