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Tales from the barman... Part II

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Review of chapter "Taking a Break" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting job, but I will not comment on your OC.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Taking a Break" from Harry
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*Applauds* When a man has seen as much as he has, and lived as long as he has, a break is truly called for. And I hope that Mister E finds that time for a break at Nights.
Comments from author:
Me too, the full story of events leading to his retiring (for a while at least) is at Fanfiction Dot Net, and named Wild Horses Can't be Tamed. It started out as a Ranma Saotome becomes a Hero story. or at least that was the intention. Instead it became a tale of the Freedom Society's last days, with Ranma being a minor (yet important) character. Mister E is his world's equivalent to Superman, and was cursed for a crime not entirely his fault to live until he atones. Atones for what? The creation of atomic power since it was his hydrogen generator plans which were used in his world to make the atomic bomb, replacing water with plutonium for the fuel source. Something done while he was in a coma.

Funny thing, his costumed identity stems from when he first stopped a bank robbery by accident. When an officer asked him what happened, Smith said "That my good man is the mystery."
Review By [Harry] • Date [19 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from RojoOjo
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Only one word for this chapter AWESOME!!!
Review By [RojoOjo] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from burmafrdnow
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I think preventing an all dimension big bang beats saving one dinky galaxy by a factor of say -

ONE MILLION OR SO
Comments from author:
I did leave an A/N at the bottom about that... also "one dinky galaxy"?
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting, but I don't know anything about "Mass Effect".
Comments from author:
It's a future based 3rd person shooter RPG about one Commander Shepard.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from Raider
Review:
a well written mass effect short.
Review By [Raider] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from Cutiepie
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Pretty good story, but what is this with Athena having children? First, there was Annabeth from the _Percy_Jackson_ series, and now Shepard's her daughter, too? Athena was supposed to be one of the three virgin goddesses (along with Artemis and Hestia). The promise was that as long as Athena's "walls" remained "unbreached," the walls of Athens would stand as well . . . . Um, are you maybe trying to make a political statement on the state of affairs in Greece? ☺

(PS, I am NOT trying to flame you or anything. I do like your storyline, mostly. I've studied Greek and Roman mythology for years, and this is just one of my own personal issues. About on par with what Disney did to Hercules.)
Comments from author:
I have similar issues with what Disney did to Hades.

As far as Athena's deal and the Athens walls remaining standi... I don't think it's even a walled city anymore thus it's walls no longer stand.

Edit: Also at least one of the gods was born with absolutely no sex at all involved. Aphrodite for sure.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from Selias
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Meh.
Review By [Selias] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from Valandar
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My one problem with Shepherd's snarking against Buffy was that at least ONE of those times Buffy and Company "saved the world", the phrase "World" did not mean planet - it meant the entire plane of existence. Top THAT, Shep!
Comments from author:
Shepard saved all organic life period, also she would have no idea of exactly what Buffy had done. It DOES just say world.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from Harry
Review:
Very Nice. Now, I HAVE to come up with one for a pair of State Alchemists for Nights! *CHECK PLEASE! {Check is replaced with gold created via alchemy}*
Comments from author:
Tsk Tsk. Gold made by alchemy doesn't stick.
Review By [Harry] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Spectre Appears." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Of course she funned on the Buffster; they've both died twice in the line of duty. Shepard needs all the camaraderie sghe can *get*!
Comments from author:
IMO Buffy died a third time on the operating table when she was shot.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [12 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Further Up and Further In" from Selonianth
Review:
There's a problem with this one. Xan's already met Q.
Comments from author:
Mayhap in another one of the stories, but I will admit I didn't read all of them...also, the way and personalization of THIS version of Q is more of a standby for Alissa
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [10 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "We're All Stars Now" from Eureka
Review:
Sorry I hate Manson, but pretty good story otherwise.

Nice to see someone is writing again. Missed seeing new stories in here.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're All Stars Now" from JediKnight
Review:
Interesting story, but not a fan of Manson, at all.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "We're All Stars Now" from Harry
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Weird. Very weird. Outside of the regulars, I did not recognize ANYONE else in this story!
Review By [Harry] • Date [4 Mar 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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