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Comments from author:
:-) i think its working...thanks for reading!
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Oh my gosh, you're writing is so haunting to me. This seems to be so Faith, if she grew up, if she fell in love deep and hard and then was betrayed by her love. Have I told you I love this fic.
Comments from author:
your such a doll, i love that you love this fic :-) thanks for reading!
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh dear I'm in tears now, poor Faith. I have never felt sorry for her before but now my heart aches for her. Let me get my tissue.
Comments from author:
AWW dont cry , Faith is my FAVORITE character, everybad thing that happens to her will eventually lead to an even better thing later...most of the time. Thanks for reading dearie!
ALI
Review By [christytrekkie] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
nice to see how they met before all went to hell *g*
Comments from author:
yes i wanted you to be able to see what lead to what, sadly i have been unable to write my keyboard was broken its working now so a new chapter should b up soon! thanks for r*r
aLI
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
I'm fascinated by this story, the style of writing creates the perfect vehicle to convey the surreality of the situation. Very well done. As to where the story goes; you do realize that both Harry and Hermione are pretty much dead people walking. You haven't mentioned Slayers and what's going on with that part of Faith's life, but I can only imagine what will happen when word gets out about how they've hurt Faith. Xander and his shovel will be the least of their problems and that is due to your last line. They are aware of how much Faith has been hurt in the past and now to have that repeated is devestating for her and while she might be willing to forgive, I can imagine that friends would be less inclined to be so understanding. Anyway, I can see Draco taking the kid and leaving or throwing Hermione out, either way he would cut off her access to their kid. As to Faith, I can see her finding that she has more of a support system than she realized and eventually healing her heart. As for H and H, I just see a lot of pain in thier futures.
Anyway, as I said before; great job, and keep it up.
PS I thought Hermione's rationalizations rang true, but they were just that; rationalizations because it is her fault, and she knows that.
Comments from author:
Wow that was long lol i love long reviews i got scared at first cause i thought maybe it was a bad one lol. Just like i went back with Draco i'm going to go back in time with Faith so everyone will get a better idea of who shes still friends with and all that good stuff. There will also be more with Harry and Hermione i know some ppl don't believe H and H could cheat on their significant others especially with each other so we'll get into that too, see what everyone has to say lol. Thanks for the Input! i'm marginally agreeing with you on most parts ;p
Ali
Review By [poe] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
christytrekkie
Hawklan
