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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from banner
Review:
I'm pretty sure I've never read a Xander Jackson story. This is an intriguing idea.
Comments from author:
Well someone asked for it as a challenge so here it is . Yep Daniel and Jack are going to be an item. Xander and who, I don't know yet.
Review By [banner] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
Review:
I love 'Xander's Real Family' stories! Usually Jack gets to be the dad. Having Daniel be the dad is a nice twist. The first thing I thought was..Boy, Daniel's going to be disappointed when he finds out about Xander's grades! How did Jack find out about Daniel being Xander's father anyway. If a kid gets hurt in California, how does that alert the SGC in Colorado? I'm interested in the story, so I'll be tracking.
Review By [kayron] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written great opening, here's hoping it develops, thanks.
Comments from author:
More coming this Friday, I promise. Two parts it's looking like, but slowly advancing the story line.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
More please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from whitesin
Review:
I love this little fic a lot. Daniel as Xander's father isn't done that often, so it's a lot more interesting as normally.
Comments from author:
*smiles* glad you're enjoying it. Sorry posted the reply to the wrong comment. *groans* But yep that was an intriguing idea so I ran with it . Now who to set poor Xander up with? *wanders off pondering that bit of madness*
Review By [whitesin] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
A very promising start. I hope you continue. Two paranoid groups getting together. Oh, boy! I wonder if their paranoias will get together and make little ones?
Comments from author:
*smiles* glad you're enjoying it. Yep I can see their mutual little paranoia's breeding and creating far worse ones than either set has alone...can you just imagine Daniel, let alone Jack's reaction to what really happened at Graduation? Or even worse, Xander finding out about The Initiative and then Daniel and Jack learning about it *evil cackle*
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [14 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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