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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from yuiop
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [12 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Saphrine
Review:
I loved it and cannot wait for the next update
Comments from author:
Chapter 14 is almost done, just give me and my beta some editing time.

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Review By [Saphrine] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Demonspawn
Review:
Great story so far.
Love the idea of the all-male harem!!! Gimme!
Otherwise I can't wait for Bumblebee to get what's coming for him.
Comments from author:
I actually have to confess that for every vote I get for a harem, I get one against. I have decided to let Harry grow up and I will decide who he falls in love with then.

As for Dumbledore...he will get what is coming to him, I promise.

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Review By [Demonspawn] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from wackyninja
Review:
I am ecstatic that you have updated this story....

Are you going to go through year by year of Harry's life at Avalon or will there be a time lapse? Will Severus be punished for not killing Sirius before he escaped with Harry? Will Dumbles evilness be revealed?

looking forward to more :-)
Comments from author:
There will be some time lapse and some time explaining Harry's education. I will all work well, I promise.

Severus won't be blamed, Dumbledore isn't that smart.

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Review By [wackyninja] • Date [11 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from absinthe
Review:
Oooh! Are we going for some time hopping shortly, or will we be following things in real time for a bit? Really curious about Avalon, and who else might pop up there.
Comments from author:
There will be both real time and time jumping in Avalon. I needed a place for Harry to grow up out of Dumbledore's sight and Avalon seemed like it would be an interesting way to do that.
Review By [absinthe] • Date [10 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from ChaosLady
Review:
Okay. I love this story! You really need to update more often. I think it's been six months to year(?) since the last time you updated. I really would like to see how this story goes and ends. At this rate I will have graduated college before this story ends and I start in a few weeks!
Comments from author:
The lack of update was three fold- I had to move for work, I became really ill...like hospital ill, and I got writer's block like woah due to the stress.

The good news, though, Chapter 14 just needs edited and beta'd.

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Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [31 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from bunnygrl
Review:
This is one of my favorite stories. I'm a bit disappointed that it hasn't seen any continuation in so many months but I hope that you decide to pick back up soon. I can't wait to see where it goes. Good work.
Review By [bunnygrl] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from justapiranha
Review:
I really like this story so far, even though I stay away from the ones that are boy/boy relationships. It's a good story so far and doesn't give everything away in the first few chapters but also gives the right amount of info as the story develops.
Comments from author:
Slash isn't for everyone, but I will warn before the sex. I am glad you like the story though. It is sort of my pet project.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [19 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
Review:
great story so far - I am really enjoying it!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from twlight
Review:
Oh this is wonderful. I love the threat that Padfood gave the Headmaster even if it made him want Padfoot dead. Snape could always have him fake his death couldn't he or make him die and then bring him back to life? I have to wonder how Moony and Padfoot will react when they learn that Harry likes Snape. I am as always eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Comments from author:
I am glad you like it...I am still working on what to do with Sirius...my muse hasn't told me yet.

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Review By [twlight] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Sandi
Review:
That's going to be difficult for Snape. It may be time to come clean to Sirius. A little honesty would give Harry solid back up.
Comments from author:
Oh I am sure that with enough time, and *ahem* friendly arguments they will become the best of friends.

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Review By [Sandi] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from wargear
Review:
I don't read slash stories. I cannot understand the attraction. That aside, I have enjoyed your story to date. Your ideas about the Empire and the Malfoys place in it are very interesting.

Keep up the good writing, and please make it very clear when the slash is about to start.
Comments from author:
I can understand slash not being your thing. It isn't for everyone. I got into it just because I got sick of how most women are represented in romance novels and fanfiction. At least if men in a slash story assumes a gender role it is because that is how the feel, not what they are assumed to be by society. But that is just my soapbox.
I'll warn for sex scenes, I promise.

I am glad you like it so far.

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Review By [wargear] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from absinthe
Review:
Oooh, Bumbles isn't too popular with the Godmutt, not at all *g*. The tale of Luci's prank and Sev's revenge...ROFL! And excellent that Harry disapproved of their mean prank on Sev. Deary me, asking Sev to kill the mutt, will the old codger NEVER learn? I bet Luci does know Sev pinches his booze, he probably just doesn't care cos he knows the penny pinching old codger is paying him a crap wage.

Great update, can't wait to see what they come up with next.
Comments from author:
I am glad you liked it.

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Review By [absinthe] • Date [18 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kayron
Review:
So it seems that Lucius pulled an even greater prank than anything the Marauders ever did! I can't imagine anything funnier than to make someone serenade the Great Squid for a week, and in front of the entire school! I was not so surprised to see that manipulative Dumbledore has no concious about ordering a murder! I'm glad that Snape isn't blindly devoted to Dumbledore!
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kayron
Review:
So it seems that Lucius pulled an even greater prank than anything the Marauders ever did! I can't imagine anything funnier than to make someone serenade the Great Squid for a week, and in front of the entire school! I was not so surprised to see that manipulative Dumbledore has no concious about ordering a murder! I'm glad that Snape isn't blindly devoted to Dumbledore!
Comments from author:
I love Snape and Lucius and I can just see Lucius playing that kind of trick on someone, even if it was a friend. But no, my Snape will never be just a mindless puppet.

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Next up, the Lucius for Minister campaign and the tricky art of not killing Sirius.
Review By [kayron] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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