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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
The Hat and Fwakes? Cool!!
Comments from author:
You bet! Only the best for harry!

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Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I am enjoying the intrigue, the twists, and the different POV scenes. Nice characterization overall.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am looking forward to surprising everyone with how this will play out.

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Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Dragonelf
Review:
Yay, new chapter already.

I have reposted my Kalisti review.

::Gives the plot bunny some Smörgåstårta (Sandwich cake)::

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The universe is a big place, perhaps the biggest.
- Kilgore Trout
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Comments from author:
I got the new review and I answered. Thanks for reviewing over here with food too.

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from FrauleinWeisenheimer
Review:
This is lovely! There aren't enough Hufflepuff!Harry stories out there, which is a real shame! There is so much potential to be exploited by a hardworking loyal Harry. This looks like it will go above and beyond! esp. with the abuse/evilD! sub plot! Update soon!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am working on getting some more out. Hopefully soon. As for Hufflepuff...Harry is going for independence...do people realize how much hard work is involved in doing that? I think all the other Independent Harry stories forget that.

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Review By [FrauleinWeisenheimer] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Dragonelf
Review:
This story looks quite promising so far and I am already looking forward to read any future additions to it you might get inspired to write.

::Gives the plot bunny some Chocolate Cake::

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Whatever you can do or dream you can, begin it.
Boldness has genius, power, and magic in it.
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Comments from author:
Thanks! I am working on all my stories, never fear. Kallisti should be up tomorrow.

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from nomadbeth
Review:
Oh please, can we dissect the little Herbs? Great sense of humor. Also, I like your mentor!snape. Good luck writing the political puzzles!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I think I like how he is turning out, Snape that is. As for the Herbs...well we shall have to wait and see.

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Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [20 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from yuiop
Review:
I LOVE THIS!!! Please keep it coming!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I will.

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Review By [yuiop] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from absinthe
Review:
Do you have ANY idea how hard it was not to make a complete tit of myself by laughing out loud in the middle of the office while reading Harry's thoughts on his classes? I was sitting there with my hand clamped over my mouth!

Bumblebore needs to die, one of those idiotic staircases needs to move just as he is getting to the top, so that he can plummet to his doom. I mean honestly, do the wizarding world have no concept of health and safety at all? *g*.

Brilliant update, can't wait for more (of this and Kallisti ;) too).
Comments from author:
A tit of yourself? Wow, I think your slang and ours are vastly different. But I am glad I made you laugh. Bumples will find an appropriately dire end, I promise, but it will take time to put my worthy plan into effect.

Kallisti is the next to be updated. A sex scene is the only thing left. I hate writing those. I think I will limit myself on those from now on, I love reading them, but the hell if I know what makes a good one.

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Review By [absinthe] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from VillageOrchid
Review:
This continues to be charming and interesting, with just a right proper nod to the darkness.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hope to have more soon.

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Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Wonderful guesses as to what the classes were!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I had fun with that.

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Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great new chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am working on more. Shouldn't be too long for an update.

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Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LordCorwin
Review:
Well done ... An interesting twist with the Potter/Snape relationship. Too bad you couldn't have Snape "screw up" a little with regard to the memory charms .. LOL! Anyway, I look forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am glad you like it. As for Snape and his memory charms...you'll see what happens soon.

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Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Dumbles is a bastard!
I like how Snape is working around him though.

More please!
Comments from author:
I have never liked Dumbles.

But I am glad you are liking it. Ch. 2 is about 1/2 done, so I should have it soon.

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Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [18 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from absinthe
Review:
Nice, very nice! 'all these wizarding advancements and they'd never heard of the telephone?' ROFLMAO! I have often thought myself that it's a little bizarre that they continue to use birds as a primary source of communication when even carrier pigeons went out of style some time ago, lol.

I really like this Snape, he can still act like the ass we all know and love, but we all know better now. Will the distant, future, slash pairing be Snarry?
Comments from author:
I love Snape. Moreover, I love writing snarky bastards. I am happy you are liking the story so far. I have gotten a good feedback and it has inspired some more writing I have 1500 words so far for ch. 2.
I also have one scene in Kallisti written as well. I am feeling oh so productive.

Ok, I love Snarry, which is why it is still a far flung possibility for Kallisti. (It would take some creativity, let me tell you) But for this, I am unsure...Snape mentor/father figure/lover fics are very difficult to write without getting flamed. I am not closing the door on it, but some other possibilites are Harry/Alive!Cedric, H/Draco, H/L. Malfoy, H/Voldieshorts. (Never say that I don't aim high.) Possible alternatives- Harry with with the twins(both), or Bill or Charlie.

Stay tuned...
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Review By [absinthe] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nomadbeth
Review:
Interesting so far, but Dumbles is far too obvious... although... it is the wizarding world. They miss most everything.
Comments from author:
"although... it is the wizarding world. They miss most everything."

That is pretty much the real premise of the story. I have a little bit of satire going on. It is sort of like, what sort of havoc could a person with common sense cause?

In my story? a lot.

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Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [17 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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