Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Is your email address still valid?

Fate's Little Plaything (Volume One)

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from SarahLou
Review:
Evil! Who is it? It's Hank Summers isn't it? It has to be...the letter said his family, not him, live there, plus it would be sooo funny, her and Buffy being sisters! Write more soon!

Sarah x
Comments from author:
Don't worry, all will be revealed soon. What if it's Principal Snyder? Or the Mayor? Or Principal Flutie?
Review By [SarahLou] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from Scrappychic
Review:
Great Cliffhanger. I'm guessing that Cordy is Buffy's half sister from the wording of the letter. Cordy's mom says "his family" lives in Sunnydale, not "he" lives in Sunnydale...

My guess is Joyce will all but adopt her when she finds out. Yay!!!
Great Chapter.
Comments from author:
Maybe, maybe not... The plot bunnies won't tell me.
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from harcroft
Review:
brilliant

and I wonder who the real father is. it can't be anyone from Stargate, since they would want to raise her (except perhaps Kinsey), but it could be pretty much anyone from BTVS ( I'm not sure Whig option would be the funniest, Cordy being half-sister to Buffy ( if that is the case, is Cordy the Key? might explain why she got some Slayer abilities...& would also explain how Cordy changed once Buffy turned up...), Willow ( however, you would need an explanation for why Cordy isn't redhead or blonde... could always be dyed, buy I doubt they allow you to use hair dye in the Army, at least during bootcamp.) or Xander (after all, Xander's family...)
Comments from author:
Not anyone from the SGC - all will be revealed soon. Or maybe not all...
Review By [harcroft] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from arkeus
Review:
obvious cliffie :D
Comments from author:
Hopefully not too obvious, or am I being overly optimistic?
Review By [arkeus] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from QOShea
Review:
That ending is just evil.

Evil I tell you!

Nice chapter :)
Comments from author:
I'll pass on your thoughts to the scheming plot bunnies - it's all their fault.
Review By [QOShea] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Great cliff-hanger. Well, based on the set up and the reaction, she's either got be related to Buffy or Mayor Wilkens.
Comments from author:
Principal Snyder...?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from draconis
Review:
Still very good. I like the way you continue to integrate Cordy into her new life, even with the twists and turns. And, the occasional reminders from her "past" are a nice touch.

As in Stargate: SG-1, you tend to bring out the humanity in the main soldier characters.
Comments from author:
I'm trying not overdo the back-story and so forth, but I like to flesh out the characters as far as I can. Cordy's new life is the central theme, but her old one will continue to intrude. Thanks for the review.
Review By [draconis] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from GraysonPaladin
Review:
Wow nice to see that you are continuing this series. Ok so I'm guessing that Cordelia's birth father is the same as our favorite diminutive blond, just judging be her reaction at the end. Anyway looks good, keep it up ~GraysonPaladin
Comments from author:
Perhaps, but there are a lot of people could give her that reaction. For example, Snyder, Mayor Wilkins, Flutie, Ira Rosenberg...
Review By [GraysonPaladin] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Slayer Lite" from batzulger
Review:
And still more Cordy awesomeness. I've always loved Buffy/Cordy interaction and you're doing a great job with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for this. There isn't nearly enough Cordy-centred fanfic, so I'm doing what I can to remedy the situation.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Not Rated
start back Page: 46 of 46
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking