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Review of chapter "Illness, Vanilla" from bastardsnow
Review:
I'm really enjoying this story, and the House cameo is hilarious. Very well done!
Review By [bastardsnow] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "School, Desire" from banner
Review:
This is a very interesting concept. Usually, it's Buffy or Faith, and Willow who come to Gotham. Xander and Dawn are different. I look forward to more.
Review By [banner] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Illness, Vanilla" from DrDamage
Review:
Seriously cool stuff here. the !house cameo is pretty darn awesome :)

Oh, by the way... 8 chapters of BtVS/Batman crossover goodness and I haven't seen any of it til now? Where have you been hiding this!? eyes author suspiciously
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Illness, Vanilla" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
And here I had always thought that Gotham was supposed to be in New York state.

Huh. Go figure.

Anyway,... putting this fic on tracking.

(^_^)/
BEM
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Illness, Vanilla" from VillageOrchid
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(okay, now I am self-conscious, but thanks).
Liked the chapter... and the it-could-be-but-not-confirmed House appearance.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Illness, Vanilla" from Greywizard
Review:
This is getting more and more interesting and I'm looking forward to seeing Xander's first conscious meeting with the Bat.

And Dawn's reaction should be interesting, too. ;-)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "School, Desire" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great chapter, full of possibilities for the future. Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "School, Desire" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Great chapter! Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood, Blood" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Um.. now that you have the set up, please feel free to make your scenes of any length and not worry about those prompt things.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood, Blood" from ianquest
Review:
Review take 2... Let's see if I can remember what I wrote! Good start to the story, and I'm looking forward to the first real meeting between Xander and the Bat. If at all possible, try for longer chapters; not only will they allow more storytelling and character development, but it also allows for more *story*! :)

One nitpick I wrote for the original review back in chapter 4 was that sometimes it felt a bit disjointed as you skipped from character to character for each chapter, especially with such short chapters and changing the point of focus in each one. This makes it difficult to visualise and identify with the new character, as by the time you've visualised the scene and found their 'voice', the chapter's over. However, the chapters seem to be getting longer as you hit your stride, and I'm eagerly looking forward to more! A great start, keep it up.
Review By [ianquest] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prophecy, Invite" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nice set up. Looking forward to seeing how you take this.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecy, Invite" from Ghostrider
Review:
Hmm, nitpick here....


TOO SHORT A CHAPTER!

Otherwise, you keep us jumping around with flashbacks.... I feel like I'm at a tennis match. I'm going to keep watching because this story intrigues me. Not enough Batman/BTVS stories around, especially with the last two movies.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecy, Invite" from Infinix
Review:
A good start, I have become rather fond of the X/D pairing, right up there with Xander and Tara.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [23 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Love, End" from Greywizard
Review:
Now this is quite interesting. Looking forward to seeing more.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death, Middle" from Ghostrider
Review:
Hmm, first meeting with The Bat. Intriguing.

And yes, Xander may be a buttmonkey to the universe, but no way, no how is he stupid enough to get in between an argument with the Summers sisters. Personally, I'd rather face the Mongol Hordes as they come swooping in, armed with a toothpick. Less pain and suffering that way.

I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
Review By [Ghostrider] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Not Rated
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