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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Cracking good story, but has it been posted elsewhere previously?
Comments from author:

This story had originally been part of the story "Who AM I?",which has been revised also. I'm hoping that working it this way will let me bring it to a close more easily than I had previously envisioned.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
good story hope you continue.
Comments from author:
Thanks, and I will.
Review By [war] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cutiepie
I remember this one from when you posted it previously. I am glad to "re-see" it, especially in the hopes that it will be completed this time. Very interesting, and I look forward to more. I am so pleased to note that your muse seems to have come back from wherever it is that muses go when they aren't with us. =]
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and commenting.

I pulled this to rework it a bit, since it had gotten completely out of control and just getting larger and more complex as time passed. Accordingly, I've broken the previous story into several shorter, more focused stories, in the hopes of getting it completed sooner this way than I had believed necessary for the previous story.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [28 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
Looks good. In the context of your story, I wouldn't be surprised if Maggie had given the swim team coach the serum he used on the team.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

And the swim team angle is something I'd never considered, although it is completely in character for Maggie to have done.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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