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Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from churkey
Review:
You are building suspense really well, 'cause I'm dying to know what happens in this story. Can't wait until the universes fully interact.
Review By [churkey] • Date [5 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Thanks for adding to the story.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You'll Be Wrapped Around My Finger" from Thewander
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very nice, Will Faith and Kendra even know who Xander is if they meet?
Review By [Thewander] • Date [4 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from Jorrie
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Oh...my...df;ljkae;ijrw!!! That's how completely upset I am! Gibberish upset! Spike! Poor, wonderfully violent, rebellious, strong Spike! Reduced to a completely obedient military toy! Gasp! Not to say that your plot is bad by any means, it's wonderful, just gah! Reading that just made my blood REAL hot. In any case, I love what you're doing so far. However, your structure is a bit difficult to follow. I'm not sure how to explain it to you, but it's a bit sporatic. Perhaps a bit more in depth explanations would help. Like...I suppose the story jumps about a bit. Sorry if you're not getting me. It is a good plot and a pretty original idea. When we found out that Xander was a naiad, all I had to say was, "Yep, that's our Xander, the universe's butt monkey." You did well with the characters, no one falling out of their usual mannerisms. I like it a lot so far and hope to see more from you soon. Can't wait and on the look out.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [18 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from Spiegel
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Spike! I- they- he- gah! I have a sudden and pressing desire to kill someone! Someone military! In a slow and horrific manner!
The only comfort is what Hellboy is going to do to them, himself...
Review By [Spiegel] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from purrfus
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And when HB puts his foot down...

I was slamming the mouse down shouting no when the cliffie appeared.

More soon please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from zafaran
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I can't remember if Xander had a chance to meet Spike before the swim team incident or not. I was half expecting to have Xander see Spike and give them an ID of who they had in their hands. And on the topic of Spike... Well, we knew the Initiative were twisted SOBs, but this is even twisted-er than I'd ever suspected. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Comments from author:
The episode "Go Fish" is the last episode before the two-part season season two finale, if you can believe. Xander has been to Parent Teacher Night and back with Spike, as well as having gone soldier on him, dealt with his hired assassins, and even been in the same mall together. Then he grew gills just before Kenda reappeared to die.

Glad you enjoy as always,
Christine
Review By [zafaran] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from slmncpm
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i really really love this story and haunt my email box to check for updates. please keep writing. i think hellboy is right and should leave the asshats to funk themselves into oblivion while his family is safe elsewhere. NO ONE OR THING deserves what the initiative has done.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from BrinLondofive
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Sh*t!!!!
I nearly p*$$ed myself when I realized that the Initiative had pulled a Rachael Summers
with Spike and turned him into a "Hound"!
And as many comic books as both Xander & Hellboy read, theyre gonna realize that's exactly what
they did to him.
No wonder Hellboy/"Big Red"/Anung un Rama is seriously torqued off!
Comments from author:
The scary part is that the Initiative managed what Angelus couldn't: to break down Spike. And of course Hellboy is torqued off. He can't stand for it. It's less a matter of "hey, they tortured a vampire" and more a matter of knowing damned well where things are going to end up if this is allowed to continue. So he's not going to let it continue. He's going to do something downright...well, you'll see. *wink*
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from DarkKitten
Review:
Oh my god, this chapter was amazing! Keep up the good work!

*~*Dark Kitten*~*
Review By [DarkKitten] • Date [14 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from umino
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Blondie's Spike.
Review By [umino] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from disama
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YAYAYAY! I'm SOO happy you updated!!! I can't wait for the next chapter! There is just not enough ways to say how much I adore this fic!!! ^_^ Keep up the good work!
Review By [disama] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from Tabee
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Fantasticness!

I love how Hellboy treats Xander, it's cute. I hope Xander gets his own teddy bear to take with him.

Quick (possible) typo, when Xander and Liz are on the helicopter, you have Abe seeing them off, I think it's supposed to be Hellboy.

Poor Spike, I'm glad the BPRD is helping him, I hope they send him off to Russia so he and Xander can reunite! And be friends. That would be awesome.

I loved the bit in the previous chapter with Faith and Kendra and I can't wait to see what all changed in Sunnydale with Xander not there.

Thanks for sharing, happy writing, update when you can!

Tabee :)
Review By [Tabee] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "There's a Lot I Can Do With a Freak" from RedCelt
Review:
That's one of the lines from Cousin Kevin's song from The Who's Tommy. Love it!
Comments from author:
Bingo. Says a lot about 17's past, unfortunately.
Review By [RedCelt] • Date [13 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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