Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
erikthevikingReview:
Well written, but a lost word in "the whelp had not survived".
As for the character I'll go for Ben Grimm.
Looking forward to developments, thanks.
Comments from author:
Close, but Ben is not the one.
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eriktheviking] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BobbokyReview:
no clue, but good chapter
Comments from author:
Blaastar the Living Bomburst is not dead yet.
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
AngbardReview:
Blastaar! I wonder what you will do with Xander being impaled by the cosmic control rod?
Comments from author:
You Got It.
Review By [
Angbard] • Date [2 Sep 09] • Not Rated