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Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from lmarie
Review:
as per usual, perfect! i have always enjoyed narnia crossovers and love that you have taken to writing one. i do hope that you continue soon!
Review By [lmarie] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from Bluejello
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Interesting take on PC. I like what you're doing with the Pevensie's (I'm right there with you on the age thing). I can't wait to see what you've got planned.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from Millaros
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Hey, great one here!

Keep the good job up!
Review By [Millaros] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from soulfulone
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interesting...i'd not read anything of this xover before now.....but then again, i'd read nearly anything you wrote....or at least give it a shot....which i'm glad that i did with this one...a rather daunting task of fanwriting CS Lewis...very similar to writing LoTR...or even Dune all of which are very complicated verses to recreate and insinuate the Lovely Buffy into....but so far, you always manage to do wonderful justice to whatever verse you are writing into....as you also did in this case....i look forward to following this new one...as always
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from katgurl
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Oh, my, god!! This is wonderful! This is brilliant! I've been wanting to read Buffy/Chronicles of Narnia crossovers, but I can't really find good ones with Buffy being the central BtVS character. You have to continue this. I hope you continue this. I love how jaded and hard you've made Buffy. It shows what happens when all she is ever treated is as a tool or a weapon. I hope that she learns to have hope again. I can't wait to see where you will take this. Please update again soon!!
Review By [katgurl] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from clarityfades
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It's been ages since I've read any of the Narnia books & I refuse to see the movies--so this'll be a fun ride for me. Oh my poor Buffy! Sucks that the Powers That Suck are playing games w/ her. Loved the little part about her killing her charge just to screw w/ the PTB's plans the way they keep screwing w/ hers. & I adored the one good guy of the bunch, so sweet! I hope Buffy gives him the truth he seeks & that he can be trusted w/ the information. I also enjoyed her description of the main players, especially the total unreadiness of the heir. Hmm, I know she's all protector-y, but maybe she could just slaughter everyone & be done w/ it. Dang! Holidays make me bloodthirsty! LOL Great chappie, I look forward to more. Glad this story came easily to you, btw. :)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from RevDorothyL
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I'm kind of surprised at how quickly I became engrossed in this.

A grim fate for Buffy, but how surprised can we REALLY be, after the way the PTB routinely screwed her over during her time in Sunnydale?

And getting to see the Pevensie children's post-Narnia blues through the eyes of their worried and not-at-all-oblivious-or-careless mother? Brilliant. Plus, very effectively written, as in bits like this:

". . . like magnets dancing around each other and something big and invisible that sat in their midst, unmoving and horrible."

The thing that always bothered me in the Narnia books was the absence of caring, competent, healthy adult women (the theme of dying or absent mothers is kind of hard to ignore, as is the fact that the strong adult women are generally evil witches, and that Susan loses her Narnia-privileges when she grows up and starts acting like a young woman). I LOVE the way you're off-setting all that with the presence of a mature Buffy, other decent adults, and above all a caring and perceptive mother in Helen.
A grim fate for Buffy, but how surprised can we REALLY be, after the way the PTB routinely screwed her over during her time in Sunnydale?
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from rpgwarrior
Review:
Now I can't help but hope that the Powers end up screwing over Buffy so that she can kill Caspian.
Comments from author:
I'm taking a wild guess and saying that you don't like Caspian very much either? Ben Barnes made it better but still, meh. Unfortunately, killing off main characters in the first few chapters is sort of counter productive. He does get cut down to size though, if that helps.
Review By [rpgwarrior] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from ThatGirlOverThere
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Brilliant! I always love your portraits of Buffy. I've never read any other authors work where her character is so deeply and thoroughly explored. And there are so many bad and so-so Narnia crossovers out there that this is truly a diamond in the rough. You constantly remind me of why I enjoyed BtVS so much, and now I am going back to my Chronicles set to re-experience their magic. Thank you!
Review By [ThatGirlOverThere] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from celebrindal
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This was simply amazing. I love reading about real side effects--of course the Pevensies were depressed! Lewis had such dark events, but glossed over so much, and I'm veryveryvery excited to see you continue, because I can't wait to see what happens. :) Love!
Review By [celebrindal] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from LeaFairy
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Intriguing beginning! I'm usually not a big fan of Buffy, but this first chapter has sucked me and has left me anxious for more. I also have never read a Buffy/Narnia crossover before, so I'm really interested to see where this goes.

I really hope to read more in the future! Thanks for writing!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Death Loomed Like a Giant Shadow" from Itarille
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I'm ridiculously excited about this new story. I love the Narnia movies (and books, but the ages there freaked me out too) and Buffy's always been my favourite, so together I'm almost giddy. Yay! Can't wait for your next update.
Review By [Itarille] • Date [7 Sep 09] • Not Rated
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