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Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from CousinMary
Review:
Ooo, I'm really intrigued by the idea of Petunia being Buffy's mom. I also like her standing up to Vernon and I'm giddy with how Buffy will react to Dudley (I'm hoping she'll be a good influence on him rather than dismiss him out of hand.) Anyway, great start :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from Angelfirenze
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Again, you leave it there. You're a master at torment, I'll tell you that. I really want to see what happens when Buffy -- because she will -- finds out about Harry and everything that's gone down with him. There's no WAY she would leave him there. *debates before giving you full-on puppy-dog face*

PLEASE update as soon as possible?
Comments from author:
I will be doing my best to get the next chapter out sooner than it's taken previously! I'm really glad you're enjoying the story though! ^^ There are certainly some confrontations in store for everyone, as more and more of the truth comes to light! Just keep an eye out!
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from yuiop
Review:
Nice!
Comments from author:
Aww, thank you!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from kayron
Review:
What does Vernonhave against Buffy? I know he hates magic, and he called her a little witch, but Buffy's power was being the Slayer, not being a witch.
Comments from author:
You'll find out more about why Vernon's behaving the way he is as the story progresses. I promise there's a reason behind it, just keep an eye out! Thank you for your review! ^^
Review By [kayron] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from Misty
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Ok, you have me curious, it's very different. Thank you very much
Comments from author:
Here's to hoping that's a good nervous! Thank you for the review, I appreciate it! ^^
Review By [Misty] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from chaosrachel
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Oh Im really loving this. I love your characterizations. Please continue as I anxiously await for the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Awww, thank you very much! It's great to hear that they sound good character-wise. I'm a little nervous with Vernon and Petunia, since they're smaller characters. But! I will do my best to get the next chapter out soon!
Review By [chaosrachel] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from Markelo
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Very good start it was. This story I like.

Sorry about the Yoda speak.

The characters' personalities are spot on. I can see Vernon reacting to that. Who's Buffy's blood father? Just don't let it be one of the Maruders. I can't see Petunia doing the nasty with any of them alsept for Sirius Black.
Comments from author:
*grins* All will be revealed in time! I know exactly who he is, I just need to write some more and get around to it being revealed. I'm really glad you like the story, though, and thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy!
Review By [Markelo] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from cloudleonsgurl
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Petunia is going to keep her? And Buffy's a witch, too? This is actually a really good twist. Everyone always has Buffy as someone magicals kid or sister or something. It's cool to see that Buffy is actually Petunia's daughter. Very cool.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like the different perspective! As for Buffy being a witch- we'll find that out soon, whether she is or she's not. You'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for the review!
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from RocksandGlass
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I know it's been a long time since you started this, but if you can, it is definitely worth continuing. The idea is pretty original, and although the dursley POVs were a little wobbly, it's shaping up to be a really good and interesting read. I definitely look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Aww, thanks! ^^ I promise, I'm not planning to drop this! I'm just- sometimes very, VERY slow when it comes to writing. I'm going to try my best to keep working on it though! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: Anne" from AllenPitt
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Dudley's sister. That's a thought to marvel at. So Giles doesn't know about the whole Hogwarts/witch thing, or at least, not in connection with this family. I wonder if HP will, upon hearing all this, come forward & say something.... otherwise they'll leave & never return, most likely.
Hm... if B. gets angry & accidental magic ensues, an owl from the Ministry would arrive almost instantly. Or if HP does. That could be fun. If Dumbledore found out about Buffy, he might latch onto her as a way to give HP a different home (blood relative of his mother and all that)...
Comments from author:
I'm enjoying your thoughts and theories about what's coming. ^^ It makes me glad that you like the story enough to ponder on it. I promise, there will be exciting times coming in the story, for both Buffy & Harry. Hopefully they'll live up to your hopes!
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Visitors" from chaosrachel
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You got my interests peaked. More Please. :P
Review By [chaosrachel] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Visitors" from ecifrog
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This is really interesting and well written. Hope you update soon :)
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Visitors" from dreameralways
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I have a feeling Buffy will like her cousin more than her apparent brother. Interesting concept and I am certainly curious about where this will be heading.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [4 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Visitors" from stonewar
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very interesting...I want to see where this goes.
Review By [stonewar] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: Visitors" from Angelfirenze
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Oh, COME ON! That ending was just evil. Leaving it like that is just sadistic! I found this all that time ago and really enjoyed it. The mystery of why Buffy's so...well, I guess it'd make sense, but Giles being interested in Dudley, as well, and neither of them knowing anything about Harry is what really intrigues me.

Surely Giles could have gotten Willow to do some kind of research; it's not like Harry's a mystery to EVERYONE in the supernatural world.

Either way, I am dearly waiting for another update and hope that all the questions this has drudged up will be answered. Until then, cheers!
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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