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Review of chapter "X-Men meet Chaos" from wyldtala
I'm not trying to be mean or anything but why is it that 90% of the time when Xander is given a power it is so over the top. Its like your doing the complete reverse of the show where he was just human and now you have made him a god. I'm sorry but I could not read past the Willow ripped his soul out of heaven bit. I'm sorry I'm sure others will love this story its just not for me I like my Xander a little less God like.
Comments from author:
Well, because Xander shouldn't be a human.

It annoys me how the one character who's always done his best, who's always been their as much as he could was also made to be the weakest.

Buffy always wines and complains about how she had to give up her life to do this. She also goes out with sworn enemies, gives into her desire and forgets her job.

Xander CHOOSES to stand against the darkness, and yet she always undermines him. yes he made a mistake romantically with the Wedding, but he though he was gonna end up beating Anya to DEATH with a frying pan. Because of a mistake he made slaying.

Instead of abandoning Buffy, he gave up on Anya. We see it never even occurred to him to marry Anya and move away from SunnyDale. Instead he left Anya, and came back to SD.

Willow miss uses her magic over and OVER, time after time causing more harm than good.

Xander screws up with magic ounce directly, ONE TIME, before he acknowledges it and him aren't friends.

Of all the scoobies, Xander is the most competent, and yet Josh makes him the weakest most pathetic of them.

Also, I kind of made Xander a god to show that even if he was a god, he was STILL Xander. Hydra cant' control him, so what do they do, they take his friends and hold him, telling him he turns against them they'll kill them. They know just as much as he does, that he'd do anything as long as it protects his friends.

I kind of screwed up my wording on the heaven part, Willow this time gave Xander a choice, he could stay in heaven his eternal reward, or he could come back to earth, fighting demons constantly, dealing with the death of loved ones, and he chooses to go back and try to help those he loves.

Again, I understand, and your welcome to your views, but what makes a god someone who is all powerful, but depends on his connections to stay sane, or someone who has no connections and no powers.

Xander's powers make his friends an even bigger target, and in turn if given the choice, he'd trade them away in a second.

But as I said, I think if you read it, it may get better for you, or maybe not everyone has their choices, and beliefs, and your welcome to yours, thanks for the review.
Review By [wyldtala] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X-Men meet Chaos" from chaostime
this has a lot of possibilities i would love to see it expanded
Comments from author:
I'll probably post the next chapter soon.
Review By [chaostime] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X-Men meet Chaos" from eriktheviking
A great opening chapter, thanks.
Comments from author:
Your welcome, and thanks for the review
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "X-Men meet Chaos" from VillageOrchid
Some interesting, sad and dark ideas... but you still need a little work on the word.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I didn't want just another Xander turned into Wolverine story. I wanted to try and make soemthgin that seemed totally ridiculous and fit into a decent comic story.

I figured Willow woudl bring Xander back.

The rest was kind of a stretch, but I think it worked okay, I just need to work some, and maybe show more fighting.

I wanted to get the major dialogue out of the way first though.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "X-Men meet Chaos" from djhardim
Interesting. Xander sounds alike like Doomsday(DC Comics)
Comments from author:
Yeah kind of, I wanted to make Xander's "Body" like Xander's "Spirit" before he went all bad in the later season.

You may beat him down ounce, but then BAM, He's beating you down. We see him thrown around a lot, and beaten up but he never dies, and the demons or vampires responsible do. Sure Buffy saves him, but his spirit is right back up.

So now as long as his will lasts his body will.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [17 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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